MDT TS:DARK HORSE :Pt2 Pg3 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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yeah plzz do add more chaps
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its his fear


OMRu didn't come second time,
his fears started with OMRU DADI and Prinku all ignoring Anika he had always counted over his ego and beliefs that they will always be there for anika but they innhis fear are not there and she is alone.
then the thought of not being able to see her ever again.

omru came in the end after 5 min and OM played along to know who she is
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mr.PsychoTech

its his fear


OMRu didn't come second time,
his fears started with OMRU DADI and Prinku all ignoring Anika he had always counted over his ego and beliefs that they will always be there for anika but they innhis fear are not there and she is alone.
then the thought of not being able to see her ever again.

omru came in the end after 5 min and OM played along to know who she is

well this clears my doubt
i really want to u continue this plzzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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woww. ...eagerly waiting...for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lz write a 2nd part.
As his fear of loosing annika isn't clear.and his thought process and reality actually mixed a bit.so plz ,it would be great if u write another 1 or 2 parts.
Thanks,nice os.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 2



Shivay was furious at their prank or is it so what he assumed.He walked back to his car furiously.

Om ran behind him to stop.

Om "Shivay tumney kyaa dekha?"

Shivay "Shut up Om .What kind of stupid joke is this."

Om "Kyaa joke Shivay.Tumney kyaa dekha?"

Shivay "Om don't try to fool me .I know yeh tumlogon ka prank hain aur sabh ney milkar you made me a fool."

Om "Shivay humney kuch nahen kiyan."

Shivay "Don't try to fool me Om,Rudra tum sach bathaon."

Om "Shivay main jhoot nahen bol rahan hun bataon tumney kyaa dekha."

Ru "Han bhayya O sahen kehrahan hain humney kuch nahen kiyya."

Shivay takes his phone and checks his call register and find no call received from Dadi or anyone.

Shivay "Ru tumhara phone do ,Om tumhara bhee."

Shivay checks both the phones and finds no call at that particular time.

Shivay "Jabh tum log doosi baar aaye they."

Ru "Bhayya hum nahen aaye they ,doosri baar door open hothey hee aap ney humpar chillana shuru kiyya."

Shivay was getting confused.

Om "Shivay tum strain math ho its just hallucination kuch nahen huan hain kissey ko bhee."

Shivay "What ever I guess humey chalna chaahiyen."

Shivay gave a last glance to that scoter from far.

As they reach home.

Om "So its Anika."

Shivay "Kyaa Anika?"

Om "Your deepest fear.Tumney Anika ka mouth dekha hain na?"

Shivay "No she is'nt mainey Anika ko nahen dekha."

Om "OK ,so tumhara darr hain Anika ko dubaara nahen dekhpaana.We can take it that way."

Shivay "Shut up Om."

Om "Shivay tum bhee jaanthey hon how much important Anika is for you.Bass tum maan nahen rahen hon."

Shivay "Its just of that painting.Its just a prank om random thoughts.I don't even think of Anika.She is nothing for me."

Om "Shivay tum humsey tho kehsaktey hon khudsey kehkar dekho."

After how many ever hours the time Engg. students around Indian hostels are found awake watching new seasons ,movies eating maggi playing counter strike fifa all ,people but in homes sleeping.

Shivay was walking by a road as he saw a yellow scooter coming towards a divider making U Turn ,suddenly a car came from no where and hit the vehicle sideward as scooter lost the balance Anika hits her head over the divider bleeding instantly.

Shivay was shocked to see this and he was shouting on top of his voice to agther people to take her to hospital.He is not able to do anything else.Noone is in near bysurrounding after few minutes some truck driver stopped by to see the girl lying in blood he immediately called for the ambulance.

She was taken to the hospital nearby.Some one called police and they took Anika's possesions into their custody.

They are trying to inform her family members of the accident.

He could see the calls going to Sahil and then they tried to inform some one else and he recogonized the number and he heard his own voice coming and he ignored i9gnored everything after hearing her name.

Shivay woke up suddenly scared ,puzzled angry many emotions possessing him in an instant.

Ru woke up due to the jerk .

Ru "Kyaa huan bhayya aap itney raath ko utkar kyaa kar rahen hon."

Shivay looked at his phone thinking of his dream there was no call in it neither any trace of any.

His heart filled with agitation restlessness and anger on the person whose voice he heared .

Shivay stared at darkness silently.Om came there immediately as informed by RU.

Om "Kyaa huan Shivay tum itney raath mey kyaa kar rahen hon." As Shivay was trying to find something in his drawyer.

Om "Kyaa dhoondh rahen hon?"

Shivay "Keys ?"

Ru "Gaadi kee?"

Shivay "Han."

Ru passed him the keys lying on his side.

Om "Shivay kahan jaa rahen hon."

Ru "Bhayya kya huan hain aapko suddenly."

Shivay "Om Ru tum log so jaaon mujhye kuch urgent kaam hain main kaam khatam karke aatha hun."

Om "Main bhee saath chalta hun itney raath mey akela jaana theek nahen hain."

Shivay "Yeh baath mujhey nahen Anika ko bathaon itney raath akely kahan jaa rahen hain."

Om "Kyaa.Beech mey Anika kahan sey aagayenee."

Shivay was not stopping he was driving fast and restless till he reached Anika's house ,he could see the scooter parked outside.

He gazed at it mercilessly.Trying to figure out something.

Om "Tho itney raath ko tum yeh confirm karney aayen hon kee Anika ghar mey hain ya nahen."

Shivay "Shut up OM."

He paused for couple of minutes.

Shivay "Mainey accident hothey huen dekha hain."

Om "Subaha?"

Shivay "No,abhee Blue Merc , 4445 ."

Om "Shivay calm down its just a dream."

Shivay paused for a couple of seconds "Its Just a dream."

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Posted: 8 years ago
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so...SSO was dreaming...lol
can imagine the look on rudra face
but the concern he has for Anika was brilliant
woke up with the dream...and straightforward went to Anika house just to make sure that she was okay
But why do I get the feeling that something actually happened?????
Anyway, im blabbering here...it was a nice write up
EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE
CONTINUE ASAP
Edited by Lesy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Wow. Great update.
Poor Shivay, he keeps getting these nightmares /dream, s of Anika being hurt.
I hope Anika is fine.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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so it was sso's hallucinations..
nothing happened for real.
his biggest fear is death of anika that he may lose her n never see her again..
he is still in denial,that's sad.
how sweet of him to actually check whether she was at home or not after seeing that nightmare
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
wonderful update please write next part soon.

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