MDT TS:DARK HORSE :Pt2 Pg3

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Shivay "What kind of stupid idea it is?"

Om "Shivay try it once ,I know tummy human emotions kam hain but we can try what can go wrong in five minutes?"(I know your human emotion quotient is very less. We can just give a try what can go wrong with it.)

Ru "Bhayya iss experiment mujhpey karon na Shivay bhayya pey hee kyon?"(You can try this experiment on me why on Shivay only?)

Om "This painting invokes your deepest fears jho hum khudh nahen jaanthey are you ready to face this?"

Shivay "Then why me ?Tumhey sach mey lagtha hain ek painting yeh sabh karsakta hain?"(You seriously think a painting can do this.)

Om "You can win a war with a painting. Tum jaanthey nahen painting kya kya kar saktee hain.It displays what you see through your heart and fears that will haunt you."

Om "If you don't trust try karkey dekho ?"

Shivay "5 minutes I have a meeting in an hour."

Om "Pehley meeting key baarey mey bhool jaon ,you shouldn't have any other thoughts in your mind when you are communicating with a painting."

Shivay "Kaisey nahen ho saktha hain,"

Om "Try karon.Ru hum bahaar chaltey hain.Shivay you should give your 100% no other thoughts just try to see the painting."

OmRu left Shivay in the room with a strange painting which OM drew that he believes is indicating deepest fears in an heart.

Outside Ru "Sach mey yeh painting karsaktee hain kyaa?"

Om "In right combination han abh Shivay ko kyaa dikhega dekhna padega."

Ru "Butg bhayya ka sab tho family hain naa shaayad humey kuch ho who hee dikhega?"

Om "But it is open fear hum jaanthey hain Shivay bhee jaanthaa hain."

Om "When we are communicating thought process runs hum ussey ignore karthey rahengey because you know its thoughts waisey ignore hothey rahega he know that it is his fear then it comes to thoughts which are deep inside who ussey patha nahen hain kee yeh thought usskey dil mey hain "

Om "He can't ignore which he don't when everything is in his mind."

Ru "Itna dangerous experiment bhayya sey kyon you know kuch bhee hosaktha hain ."

Om " Shivay can handle it ,Shivay can face his fears."

Shivay "Om you know this is ridiculous ."

Om "Shivay abhi Priyanka sey phone aayi hain."

Shivay "Han ghar ,ey sabh theek tho hain naa."

Om "Sabh theek hain who mujhey aur Rudr ko bulaa rahen hain hum jaa rahen hain."

Shivay "Main bheee aatha hun ,you know yeh painting mujhpey kaam nahen karega."

Om "Shivay you promised its five minutes you didn't even try for a minute yet."

Shivay "5 minutes,tum ney andhar aakey disturb kiyya."

Om "Ok hum jaarahen hain.you relax here .and finish ."

Om and Ru were leaving as Ru's mobile rings.

Ru "Hum nikal rahen hain."

Ru "Ok Anika ka ghar jaayengey theek .Ok garland bhee lejayengey."

Shivay is hearing all this.

Om "Kyaa huan Ru?"

Ru "Prinku ney bola body ko ghar shift kar rahen hain issliyen seedha ghar jaana hain."

Om "Who nahen aarahen hain kyaa?"

Ru "Who aakar kyaa karegi waisey ma ney mana kiyya hoga."

Om "Humey hee jaaana hoga."

Ru "But she won't be getting to see her last time."

Om "They were good friends naa how much she did to family."

Ru "Abh Sahil ka kyaa hoga."

As the conversation was going on they were outside.

Shivay was confused on what happened.But he is trying to look into the painting as his phone rings.

Shivay "What happened daadi?"

Daadi "Tum kahan peh hain?"

Shivay "Main Om key studio mey hun."

Daadi "Tho Om our Rudr gayen hain ?"

Shivay "Kahan ?"

Daadi "Anika key ghar ?"

Shivay "Wahan kyon ,she is not working with us right."

Daadi "Kaam key liyen nahen hain yeh basss manners hain kissey ko jaana hoga."

Shivay "Kissey ko kyon jaana hoga."

Daadi " Usska zindagee kaa akhree safar hain usskey liyen char loog saath hona padtha hain atma shaanti key liyen."

Shivay "Kisska ?"

Daadi "Anika ka."

Shivaay "Kyaa ?"

Daadi "Tumhey kissey ney bathaaya nahen?"

Shivay "Kyaa?"

Daadi "Kall Anika ka accident huan thaa ?"

Shivay "What kaisey?"

Daadi "Who scooter mey jaa rahen thee U turn nlethey samay kissey ka gaadi ney takradiyan."

Daadi "Kissey ney hospital mey admit kiyya tha lekin kuch faida nahen huan,kuch operation hona chaahiyen thaa lekin paisa arrange nahen ho paaya ."

Shivay "Aapko kissneyh bathaaya."

Daadi "Aur kissney Sahil ney Prinku Anika ko phone kar rahen thhee lag nahen rahan thaa tho humney Sahil ko call kiyya ussney bathaaya."

Shivay "Aaap logon ko kabh patha chala?"

Daadi "Kall ?Kyon?"

Shivay "Tho kissey ney mujhey kyon nahen bathaaya?"

Daadi "Bathaathey tho kyaa tum bill pay kartha?"

Shivay "Tum logon ko patha thaa ?Fir aaplogon ney madad nahen kiyyan?"

Daadi "Who zinda hothee tho kyaa karthee already 30 lakh waste huyen hain.Abh aur kyon waste karnaa."

Daadi "Who uss baachey key liyen bhee bhoj ban jathee?"

Shivay "We could have done something."

Daadi "Yeh sabh baathey chod abh hogayan naa .Woh abh nahen hain aur antim sanskaar bhee poorey horahen hain."

Daadi "Abh uss backey koi ashram mey jaayega abh who tho theek rahega na,"

Shivay "What happened to you aap aisey kyon baath kar rahen hain."

Daadi "Aisey kyon Mumbai mey 2 karod log hain har din koina koi tho kaam kartha hain."

Daadi "Rukho RUdra ka phone aarahan hain."

Shivay was furious as it all happened .

Daadi "Han who bhee hogayann hain ,tumk teenon ghar waapas aajaon."

Shivay "She is cremated ?"

Daadi "Shaayad Ru aur Om waapas aarahen hain."

Shivay tries to open the door but it is locked from outside.

He tried to call Om and Ru but his mobile is not working as he was about to break his phone door got unlocked.

Ru "Bhayya Daadi ghar bularahen hain jaldee chaltey hain.waisey aapney kuch dekha kyaa?"

Shivay "Tum logon ko sabh patha tha naa?"

Om "Kyaa Shivay kyaa patha tha?"

Shivay "Tum logon ko sabh patha thaa you could have saved her."

RU was about to say something Om stopped him.

Om "Shivay abh yeh sabh kyon discuss kar rahen hon now she is no more.chalon ghar chaltey hain daadi wait kar rahen hain."

Shivay "Ru tum tho deedi deedi kehtey they naa tum tho usska madad kartha kam sey kam mujhey bathatha I could have done something."

Om "Shivay hum kyon bathaaye you could have find out about it yourself."

Shivay "Abh bhee mujhey bathasaktey na I could have seen her last time ."

Om "Humey kyaa path thum itney senti hojaaogey.She is just one who family nahen hain."

Shivay "Abh kahan hain is she cremated."

Om "Nahne tho looking at his watch dass minute abhee baaki hain ghar sey nikalney mey."

Shivay "Ten minutes ." he rushed outside and drove towards the house .

OMRU followed him silently.

As they reached the place they found her trying to replace some wheel in her scooter.Shivay looked at her in shock and surprice as OM and RU came beside him watchinf him.

Edited by Mr.PsychoTech - 9 years ago

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SAKIVIAM thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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No expectations.
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PenguinBaby thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OmRu and Dadi are so bad, trying to scare Shivaay like that🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok thats crazily morbid...🤣...wasnt there another way to make him realise...lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg.
I actually thought she was dead.
Great OS.
You should carry it on. I want to see Shivays reaction.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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woah...she is alive...😊

Was it Shivay's fear of loosing Anika...that came out in this form...???

who was dead Sahil's bua...Confused

Continue this want to read more...😊
Edited by wafa.M - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: wafa.M

woah...she is alive...😊

Was it Shivay's fear of loosing Anika...that came out in this form...???

who was dead Sahil's bua...Confused

Continue this want to read more...😊


fear ,anika,
will see whether to continue or not
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ohh my god.. that was some painting om made there .. it really triggered shivaay's inner fears ..
it was a brilliant piece of work .. loved it.
SAKIVIAM thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I can add few more updates should I give a try
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome os
i really thought anika is dead but
so is his his fear or did dadi and omru scared what is it actually
loved it

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