'When we go out, I pay': Shivaay - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
I have no words for your works. They touch my heart like none other do. You always manage to show me a new view to someone's emotions. Honestly I envy your writing skills. BTW have you written any ff or ss for IB fandom? If yes can u pm me the links.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: geet.a



Awww, arz kiya hai, ek aur, dedicated to your feels for shivika, and their feels for each other ;)

Dushman the hum,
Jab jhagdon se fursat hi nahi hua karti thi,
Ab haath mein haath liye
Khade rehte hain,
Muskurate hue, ankahe se
Ehsaas mehsoos karte hain,
Ladayi toh bas bahane ki reh gayi hai,
Der se hi sahi,
Yeh ishqbaazi bhi hadh se aage badhne lagi hai



Wait

*runs to corner to bring a handkerchief*

From 2morrow.. I will be well equipped with handkerchief and tissue papers for your Heart felt posts.. these 3rd person person posts of yours .. this increses my love for them.. even more
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Geetu... Loved ur post... N Wah Kya shayari hai... U know I miss our old times... I sooo miss Tansy ke bakwaas timepass posts n dits ke emo posts
... I miss reading ur FF... U shud start again... Remember we became frnds at ur FF more than 6 yrs ago...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Another beautiful portrayal of Shivvay's heart in action...complicated by the words coming from his mouth!😆 I too thought about it for a minute when he said it, but then the lover in me won over the woman in me, and therefore no feminist morcha today from me. I agree with you on several counts. One, it's natural for him to take care of his own...and she lives in his heart, so who can belong to him more? He is the WALL, and so paying for things is natural to him. The fact that Om and Ru both didn't bring monry...it's subconscious behavior when going out with Shivvay...no need for them to worry about monetary concerns. Om, doesn't carry a wallet many times, even when not with Shivvay, for his wall is always only a call away.
Two... he will bend over backwards to give her any measure of happiness, and not have to admit that what he did was for her happiness or her enjoyment, so he tops it off with typical Shivvay high handedness...nothing more.
Three... he is more a realist than a dreamer... I think we all can agree on that. So being a realist, capitalistic businessman that he is, he capitalizes on the opportunity to buy himself some unadulterated joy...the joy of seeing her enjoy the little things in life...letting her relive a missed childhood... and in bonus, getting to experience simple uncomplicated merriment in eating a sweet treat that he normally would never condecend to...because it's not in the fabric of a well made wall to bend or falter.

Ok...your comment back to me on your post yesterday was incentive to write this babble... so no excuses...you asked for it!! 😲😆
Edited by --Nargis-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Btw... When we go out, I pay... I hope he realizes what he said... The fact that he said when we go out I pay means he is telling her he wants to go out with her... Moron asked for a date n dint even realise it... Neither did anika...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
This was so thoughtful, I read it twice! Great analysis👏
-Sanu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Love it.. It's short and sweet

He just wants her to be happy and free, even if it's just for a few moments 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Amazing way of expressing shivay's thoughts.
Loved it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
At first even I was taken aback by what he said, like, dude, let the girl pay if she wants to...But I guess that's just how he is, always used to taking care of his own (OmRu don't carry a wallet around because they know Shivaay is always around), and now Anika is part of his family
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rani-lucki

anika is used to being the provider

which is the same as shivay as he is also the provider in his family
aniika is not used to being taken care of but shivay knows no different
maybe he feels like he has to take care of her like when he wanted to walk her to her door or pay for her candy floss
he himself doesnt understand why he's feeling protective towards anika


he wants to, so much so that it may have become a 'has to' in his mind considering that this is practically an outsider he has inserted into his family, and declared it😳

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