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Posted: 8 years ago
A very Happy Birthday Dear!! ❤️❤️
And best of luck for your exam!

Waiting for your next update.. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Happy birthday to u...
Many many happy returns of the day...
May the Almighty grant u all the happiness of the world...
I wish whatever u wish for yourself comes true...
I wish u be happy always...
Today is ur birthday but u gifted us this update...thank u so much...
All the best for ur exam...
I wish u do very well in ur exam...
Awesome update...
Loved sahil n ani bond...
Loved 360 degrees change in ani n bua's relation...
Anni's god never hears her...shiv came to her house...wow...but how...hmm,destiny...yes only destiny that plays the cupid in her story...shivay's jaw dropped by seeing her...wow...
hmm,shivay praising bua...why?''kiuki beti k bedroom tak jane ka rasta bua se hoke gujarta hai...''
yeah,i got it...
Naughty shiv...
I think lik pinki bua also wants potha-pothia that's why she sent him in her bm...
AR's room description was brilliant...
Every single thing proudly declares AR's identity...
And at last,such a cliff hanger...can't wait,dear...sooo hot scene is gonna come...can't wait more...hotness over loaded...continue soon...
After reading last part of this update i'm completely in shivika land...
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Posted: 8 years ago
n yeah,again destiny plays the cupid role...here ani cooked n shiva is ani's unwanted guest of honor...wow...
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Posted: 8 years ago
n yeah,again destiny plays the cupid role...here ani cooked n shiva is ani's unwanted guest of honor...wow...continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Happy belated birthday dear. Amazing update. Loved it. Best of luck for ur exams. Will be waiting for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome updates love it tumhara yeh story main kyy form main parti thi manan mera favourite hai lekin mughe yeha pai bhi acha lagta hai toh jald se jald 29 th part tak update kardo mujhe uske age parna hai tum ne bohot wait karwaya hai or ho sake toh kyy form pai bhi update karo continue soon please pm me also
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Posted: 8 years ago
The touch of yours
Sends shivers down my spine.
I can't help,
leaving my head to throb.
It's a torture or a bliss,
hard to figure,
I would hate to miss,
Every moment I feel them,
On my skin,
It burns a thousand cells...
I can live without breathing,
But life is useless without you touching me!❤️

Thanks to everybody reading this story and sparing a little time for it...And am back to let you roll with my story a bit😆

CHAPTER-14

On FIRE: When Skin TOUCHES Skin!

Shivaay stepped inside. I was wondering why he was so silent. Maybe after getting the slightest glimpse of my room he is getting a heart attack.

"Are you fine?" asked I.

Damn sure something is cooking inside his head! Man...My pictures with my co stars...

I ran and switched off the light which was making the pictures visible. I had always hated the fact that my ceiling lights cannot brighten that place. Today I am pleased and it felt like bliss that one extra light is needed to cover that area.

But the strange thing is that Shivaay didn't question me anything about this sudden move...What's cooking in his head? Mysterious...Lets ring his mind and see. But I have to make sure that he shouldn't end up on my real identity. I am really glad that only my school prizes are in this room...others are in my precious room where all my fan stuffs and musical awards are there. But I have to play with him and when he will leave I have to inform bua too.

"Seems like your soul is somewhere else," said I.

Well it sounded perfect in this moment otherwise Shivaay quiet is just seems to be a far away dream. He even had not given answer of my last question.

"I didn't know that she was your bua," replied he but he is lost somewhere. Am very sure by the way he said.

"How's your hand?" asked I. I asked to break his concentration. Otherwise he may end up in the right place and I can't let him end there.

"Good. How's your arm?" asked he.

"Fine...much better than before. What happened? You don't seem to be the same Shivaay Singh Oberoi who taunted me to be in some remote village."

Meanwhile he sat on the black bean bag chair and I placed myself in my white one. I could follow his gaze; it was rolling over my whole room till which his eyes can capture.

"You are richer than I have imagined. Why you dress up like a common middle class girl when you come to College?" asked he again lost somewhere.

Geeks! This guy has brains...

"Shivaay Singh Oberoi first you tell me why are you behaving so lost?"

Hazards! Seriously I can't take this guy so quiet. Now he looked at me for the first time after he reached my room.

"Let's take a break!" said he.

I bore my eyes in his deep blue yes. What? I saw his eyes green if I remember perfectly. The pupils changed? Is he a vampire? But he comes out in sun. Then I am not getting it, I am thinking all rubbish. Maybe he just got lens? And I started wondering what the actual color of his eyes is. Automatically my lost tongue slipped, "Okay..."

"So you should answer my question," said he.

"Shivaay before that I would love to give a friendly advice to you," said I.

"Yes..."

"Never dig deep in me. Never try that."

His eyes blinked in curiosity.

"Why are you saying that?" asked he.

"Leave it. But take the advice seriously, I really meant it. Well I want to maintain my decency that's why I go simple in College," said I.

"Seriously? Just for decency?"

And he went near the TV and started admiring my trophies. Then suddenly he turned towards me.

"Who are you?"

No ...I can't let this happen. I can't let him to go near my real identity. I am here for them, this is one of the reason for which I am here leaving my personal interest. I have to stay firm.

"Anika Rathor ...Shivaay the girl whom you commented yesterday morning," said I.

He came near me and leaned his face over me.

What is he doing? Why is he trying to come near me? Ani you are dreaming ...Nothing like that. He cannot find about you. Don't let your knees go weak girl. Have the attitude. Man...He is making it hard for me.

"Then...why do I find a mystery in you?" asked he.

"Coz you think that way about me. And I have warned you don't dig in me because it will be your biggest mistake in life and you will regret later," said I in one breath.

"It's only been one day and today's morning Miss Anika Rathor that I had met you but I can say you have something unsettled inside you. You had not joined STAR for yourself but something brought you there."

Wow! He is entangling me. Man! How could he be so right?

"There is nothing like that," blurted I to protect myself.

"Really?"

"Yes why are you asking?"

"Then why are you sweating?" said he rubbing the sweat drops from my forehead.

"Am I?" I asked tensed.

He nodded making his eyes round and big.

"No...It's nothing like that. I assure you."

"I can take out other way..."

"What do you mean?"

Exactly...what did he meant by that?

He bent more by twenty five degree. His hot breaths were felt on my lips. But as if the world stopped he also paused in that position. He was looking my face as if he is a big foodie and I be his favorite food but before eating he want to admire the food which means me.

Suddenly I felt ticking...no it was not tickling. Electric shocks were passing through skins of my right hand. My eyes automatically shifted over there and I found Shivaay had pulled my sleeves up and now caressing my hand. Man! Then why is it giving me shocks? This is just his mere touch.

Suddenly I could feel his fingers on the back of my ears and it was sliding down to my neck slowly and opened my bun letting my hairs flow freely. I closed my eyes. This feeling of some one's finger is making me go crazy or is this the effect of only Shivaay's fingers coz I had never such feelings in romantic shoots for my albums. Why this sensation when Shivaay touches me?

No I have to stop it...I opened my eyes.

"You want to do this right?" asked I.

He was taken aback by my question and that's why he moved back. I stood straight, grabbed his hands and started walking towards my bed yet fearing it. I pushed him on my bed and sat on his stomach.

His face revealed he was shocked...shocked to hell!

"Just one chance..." I said to him and opened my net top. Only the top cum bra was left. I was not uncomfortable in such dress...coz I was prone to it. But his eyes were on me and he had not uttered a single word till now. I picked his hands and put one on my waist and the other on the hook of my top.

Let see how far you can go Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi.

This time I bent my face to kiss him. I know this will only be an almost kiss. But he didn't react. He didn't even try to kiss me but his fingers on the hook went down over my spinal cord. It was shivering me. I wanted to bury my face in his chest but this was just an act so that he understands that am not scared of him. When my lips were just few centimeters away no millimeters away I hit the goal. I saw sweat appearing over his forehead.

A smile came over my lips. I bent more down and rubbed my nose on his...once right then left and again right I moved from him and lied down on the bed adjacent to him with my hands under my head.

He looked at me shocked.

"Why are you sweating? I didn't kiss you..." said I.

"You were about to..."

"No...Do you think only you have your way. Next time don't you dare to apply those kinds of tricks on me. It won't work."

Suddenly he turned over me this time I was under him...

I smiled and pushed him. I sat and wore my net top.

"Told you only one chance and you lost it." With that I again tied my hair into a bun.

"Girl...you do have guts!"

I replied, "You were right Shivaay I am in STAR in a mission."

Suddenly he jerked himself and sat straight on my bed.

"What mission?"

"Why should I tell you? Look Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi I am saying it for your good. Just forget the conversation on mission and I am no good. If you are a monster than I am known as a Devil. Devil in real life and I can be way more dangerous than you can ever imagine. So let me complete my mission and you focus on whatever you want. And I am not that kind of girl who wants to hear the word bitch for myself in other's mouth but I do love to call myself that. Anyways break over," and I turned my face away.

Suddenly Meera came with the Swiss Rolls and cold drinks.

Thank God! That scene got over and didn't precede much. Thanks God for this time. I love you.

Shivaay had it when Meera was gone and a smile roll over his face.

"What?" retorted I.

"When you will be my spot for three days you will cook my food. Coz bua was right, you cook really well," said he with an evil smile.

"Hmm...so the Monster Billa is back," said I in a serious tone.

"You were missing me so much. In one day you became addicted of me."

"I was literally not missing you," said I.

Sometime his behavior just pisses me off!

"Really? We be the best enemies. Anika Rathor do fear me," said he almost finishing the distance between us. My head had lowered when he had bent his face over me.

"Do you think I should have a phobia of Monster Billa?" asked I encircling my hands around his neck.

"I will torture you like hell in coming three days," said he moving the strands of hair which fell over my face.

I pulled his face closer and whispered in his ears, "Don't forget you are standing at the wrong place and I can take you to some wrong place if I want where you will only suffer for having a spot like me."

He was taken aback. After recovering from the shock of my words...after a few seconds he asked, "Where will you practice the song with me and when?" asked he.

I raised one of my eyebrows.

"Let's just work together for the competition as partners," said he.

"Tomorrow, evening at my place...I mean here."

And he left with his signature smirk and running his hands on his hair.

And tell me wid long comments...😆 how do u feel bout d chappy?

Love u all!

Mimi😳

Edited by D_mi_cheeky_me. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aparikshita dear have some mercy on my poor nerves am so dedicatedly waiting for your comment😆
Edited by D_mi_cheeky_me. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
first of all,thank u so much for ur pm...
I was missing it...
N now let's come to a very serious issue...
Pls tell me, what is this ,dear?
Why ur updates always give me such kinds of feeling...why why why???
I wanna know...
I truly feel electricity in my whole body...
Tell me why ur updates always do this to me...
I'm not gonna forgive u for this...
Now,let's talk about ur update...
Firstly,i love the way ani always talks to herself...whatever she blabbers to herself...i really find it funny...
I really enjoy her...
Oops!our shiv is not only devil but also smart...he guessed very easily that ani surely came here with a mission...
Uff! He wanted to know about that mission so he used a very hot way...
He wanted to play ''find out about anika rathore's mission''game with ani but ani made him lose...
Poor guy was shocked n ani as usual rocked...
Don't know after knowing her real id what can be his reaction...
But I'm sure at that day shivay's shock bearing machin will be blast for sure...
Amazing amazing amazing update...
Shivika's hot scene was truly extra-ordinary...this update was written in such a way that it can make anyone feel shiver within...truly amazing...
Continue soon...
Will be waiting for the next one...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fhat the wuck!!!🤪
It was an awesome hawttyy update...☺️
Main toh mari jaa rahi thi...ki ye ladki kab update karegi...
Nd it was worth waiting...kya scenes tha!!! Ufff tooo hawwtt to handle yaaar...loved it soo much!😳
The way anika did...kitni himmat hai iss ladki main...i mean...like seriously she dragged him...pushed him..sat on him..took his hands nd kept on her bare skin...phir leaned in for a an almost kisss...which caused him to sweat...nd laga teer pe nishaana...i just couldnt Shivaay all nervous nd sweating...😆
Perfect! It was f*****g perfect!!!☺️
Nd now he knows she is on a mission..
Ab practice shuru hogi...nd omg!! Cant wait for next part...
I felt goosebumps all over my body...😳
Isiliye mein tumhe rockstaar kehthi hun...😎
Brilliant update...👏
Continue sooon...ab bundela ko bhi update karo na..soch socb ke mare jaa rahi hun ki vahan ki ShivIka ke beech kya hoga...

Love Sharmi
Edited by lucky_princess - 8 years ago

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