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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: D_mi_cheeky_me.


There's more hot updates coming😆
Sharmi I missed ur comment so much dear in the last update. I will update the Bundela a little later. I want to forward this story first as the plot for the few chapters are quite ready which would be coming. but dnt worry I will update that too very soom. Pinky Promise...Anika Style😆 Me to very very wickedji... Nd just see where I take this. I am so much engrossed with Hailee Steinfeld Starving so I want to use that song very soon. More intense drama in line and nxt part will be updated soon.
Missed u Sharmi...
With Love,
Mimi😳


Love u Mimi...pakka ab se crctly comment kardoongi...
Agar inyernet nahi mila na..toh bhi kisi aur se pooch kar tumhare liye comment karungi...
Pinky promise..😆

Sharmi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
Tq for pm...literally I don't get words to appreciate ur way of writing yaaar bcoz I like ur different story line nd the way u express views of Shivaay nd anika's pov where superbbb...waiting for ur nxt update nd pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Amazing. Continue soon. Waiting eagerly for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing update...thank u so much for the pm...very well written...our ani is a super girl...she don't get scared of any ghost in fact she wants to meet them...but still she got scared a little...she met the ghost who is none other than shivay...and shivay feeling guilt for whatever he did...good...and again their face off...nok-jhok...they can't change...amazing...and climax...ouch...shivay removed her shirt...boy had no naughty thoughts...decent boy...just wanted to know the truth...and for a few sec he lose control...wanted to kiss...such a intense scene...wow...once again a mystery...that too about shivkara...awesome...so,rumya n shivika r pairs now...poor ani...no god is ready to hear her...don't know what will happen now...well,i know 1 thing for sure that there will be entertainment entertainment n entertainment...brilliant one...waiting for the next one...continue soon...at last i want to say something i'm the most selfish person here because i want to read every bit of it(who am I)...thank u for making it sooo unique...that i can't stop loving it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
Thank u everybody for showering so much love. Today my net is giving me lot of probs so I will just update the chap directly.
CHAPTER-11

Oath: Taken to be Broken

"Everyone sit according to your group," ordered Professor Raghav.

Everyone was moving to their senior partners. But I just cannot move. How could I? I was still looking at the branch with hope. The person, who commented on me yesterday, took my watch away, at night kissed me, the one whom I felt on every part of my body, morning the one who ragged me with three tasks and then broke my watch. After that got my punch, and on stairs came to know that I had actually barged in his bedroom last night, the one whom I want to avoid will be my partner. No...It feels horrible. But we had so many incidents between us in two days no one will believe it. Seriously!

I felt someone tapped my shoulder. It cannot be Soumya coz she already left to sit with Rudra. I picked my face and saw the person.

"You were not coming to me so I came to you," he placed himself near me, "by the way now it will be real fun. Never thought I will get such an interesting partner."

I made a sober expression.

"Don't get scared. Just stay in your lioness mode otherwise I will miss the real fun which I am planning to have. Okay, first let's be friends," said he and forwarded his hand for a hand shake.

Am I hearing it right? Had he asked to be his friend? Does he really want us to be friends or is this some kind of planning?

"Is this a friendly hand or a hand forwarded after a pre-plan in the last fifteen minutes?" asked I.

He tried to read my face I guess.

"Well my brother explained me that I was quite wrong with you and he said that I should not make a mess. Your punch finished the last issue and I won't drag you to make a fuss of it. And as we have to work together let's be friends," said he.

I saw his face; it was plain, no smirk and no evil smile which would give me an unwanted warning.

"Okay...friends," and I shook my hands with him. Maybe this time he is clean with his words and continued, "Well is that he refers to Omkara?"

"How do you know?"

"Just guessed it out."

I could see his face hardened.

"Had you talked with him?"

"Yes..."

"Stay away from him!"

What the...Is he brother or enemy? He doesn't want his best friend to open up with anyone. No there must be some planning. I just hope I don't have to cry for accepting to be friends with him.

Suddenly Raghav Sir came and stood in front of us and the confrontation which I wanted to have with Shivaay regarding Omkara was deliberately shifted in the arms of silence.

"Shivaay and Anika."

"Yes sir," we both stood straight in front of him.

"Do you guys are planning for the old age home performance?" asked he.

"Old age home performance?" retorted I.

"Yes, the first challenge of yours is to impress the Old people who stay in the STAR Old Age Home. And Shivaay will help you. By the way I already came to know that you don't need any kind of help and Shivaay will improve himself only if he is paired with you for the first task,"

Tasks? Again...I hope this time these are of quite sense!

Shivaay, "Sir she will only need my help. After all am her senior."

Seriously Mr.SSO? I wouldn't die without your help.

"Shivaay, she is a star."

What the...this Raghav knows my real identity or what? The way he is talking!

"Star?" Shivaay gave a confused look.

"Yeah Star...I mean hadn't you seen that day how she made a song and danced making everyone jolly."

Thank God! He corrected himself.

"You guys will be great together. So Monday I am expecting much from you guys...And Anika I want to talk with you alone. So come with me..."

"Sure..."

And I started to follow him but I have to keep a track of this Oberoi. What is he actually up to?

I came to Raghav's cabin.

"So Music Industry will miss their precious A.R."

"It seems as if you know my real identity," said I with a smirk.

Raghav, "Sir told me about you. I feel so honored even thinking A.R. will be my student."

Fly high...A.R. will be your student!

"But I don't want my identity to be known that easily sir. I have come here for The Devils," said I.

"I know that's why I gave Shivaay as your partner. You will understand The Devils's real talent if you get close to the lead singer and he is free as there is no concerts for them now."

Free? Don't you know? Idle mind is Devil's workshop! He will definitely plan something to make me suffer!

I came out from Raghav's cabin.

I have to find that jerk. Let's find out what is his next plan.

I searched the whole building and found The Devils talking on the corridor. This time Omkara was not present with them.

Riddhima, "So Shivaay we will have no revenge from the Anika?"

"No...I promised O this time I will not make any issue from my side," said he.

"Then she will be left without any punishment for punching you Shivaay baby?" asked Tia.

Baby...Yuck! It doesn't suit on such a torso.

"No...This time she will start."

What? I will never mess up with you guys coz it will only bring disturbance in my mission.

"But how?" asked Rudra.

"That you leave on me. I will handle it. You have fun with Soumya," said he.

What the...

Rudra, "Okay guys I am leaving to execute my plan..."

"Bye..." said the three jerks.

"Okay I got Rithvik so am going to have fun with him," said Riddhima and left.

"Tia?" asked Shivaay.

"Well I don't want to have any fun...You guys enjoy," said she in a depressed mood.

"What happened?" asked the monster!

"Shivaay Baby you got that Anika, be careful."

Wow! I made such a good impression on that bimbo!

"She had to be more careful from me. You know how I am. Right?" said the monkey.

"All wild...and crazy. Shivaay Baby can I kiss you?"

Kiss here? Publicly...Pure nuts! Oh why am I caring? They had still not experienced the life of stars where a kiss also becomes a controversy.

"Tia...this is not home. Anyone could see us and make a gossip," said Shivaay calmly explaining her.

Oh my god! This monster can talk in a calm mode also. Again I mentally slapped myself. Of course some things cannot be for everyone. I will always get his hyper side but his friends will definitely get his reasonable side.

By the way how it went out of my mind he will not mess with me as he ensured Omkara and he warned me to stay away from him.

Their bonding is quite strong but why?

And I started walking out of the College when someone pulled me to a corner.

"What the..."

I pushed that someone and he was about to fall so I again pulled him catching his jacket.

"Bagar Billa..."

"What?"

"Nothing"

"You are always in mood of fighting?"

"I am sorry..." I tried to stay calm. A sorry will solve this. I don't want to start any mess as I know that he wants me to do that only.

"Bullshit! She solved the issue," I heard him murmur under his breath.

So mission failed at first step!

"You said something?" asked I intentionally.

He laughed on my question a little.

Was this an intentional laugh?

"Miss Rathor I hate to play one sided game. Speaking honestly I still hate you for the punch!"

"So why were you being good half an hour back?" retorted I.

"I will be good till you are. You just cross the limit and then I will be back with my old mode," said the ghost!

"Is this a warning?"

"Yes!" and he lost somewhere in his thoughts.

"Are you planning some big torture?"

"Miss Rathor got quite intelligent I see..."

"I do have brains...hehehe," said I sarcastically.

"Come with me..."

"Where?"

"Just come..." and I found myself dragged out of the College and then I found myself in Shivaay's car.

"Where the hell are you taking me?" asked I.

"Excuse me, we became friends right? There is a party at my place. I am just taking you there," said he.

"But I don't want to visit any party. Especially yours...Stop the car and let me go," blurted I.

And in the next twenty minutes, destiny brought me again to the white bungalow where I never wanted to return. Last night only I had taken the oath of not visiting this place and today by evening only it is broken.

"Oh God! Not even twenty four hours after the oath," I sighed out.



I cannot write much coz of my useless net. But my hearty thanks to all my readers.

Mimi😳

Edited by D_mi_cheeky_me. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Sry I may cannot give pms today
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
Such an awesome update!!!
loved it!
Shivaay being all good...nd their tashan is brilliant!!
superb..so she is visiting the oberoi mansion again...
Y do i feel that...daal mein kuch kala hai...is Shivaay planning something..
well thank u for the fast update Mimi..love ya..
Continue sooon

Love Sharmi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Thanks for fast update. Amazing update. Loved it. If possible, i want the devils to know anika truth collectively. Shivaay is planning something big. Could anika be able to see tej. I want to know her reaction after that. Well i seriously loved it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
First of all big tq for fast update yaaar
Wow superbbb update...
I have a mixed feeling of joy nd worry for ur AR
Joy for AR nd devil being in one team nd worry ur AR
Bcoz we don't what is the plan being cooked in the minds of devil for angelic AR to trap her... Hope nothing wrong will happen...
Waiting for nxt update nd pm if possible
Byeee tc

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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update...u couldn't pm us...it's okay...pls don't feel guilty...and thank u so much for this fast update...shivkara's mystery...sounds very interesting...why shivay told anika to stay away from omkara...i'm getting more n more curious now...anika came here only to know everything about the devils but why?want to know...this shivay is truly something...he couldn't fully enjoy his ''enemy n revenge''game...so,now wants to play''friend n revenge''game...i think he forgot anika's ''dhai kilo ka punch''...n wants to memorise that precious moment once again...on the other hand rudy also planning something for somu...ani again in oboroi mansion...what will happen now???continue soon...will wait for ur next update...

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