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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Mimi, you can't do this 😲 how could you stop it in a cliff hanger that too with such a small post? Please update the next part sooner than ever, I mean in next fw hours, nope in next few minutes 😆

hey, this is such a nice part. But really I could not believe that he broke the watch but still why do I feel it was not her original watch and he still has that with him securely?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Oh no!! Shivaay shouldnt have done that...
It was really cruel..
It was sooo precious to her...her closest thing..i am really feeling bad for her..
The I Love you scene wid the princi was superb!! Absolutely mind blowing...
Continue sooon Mimi..
Love Sharmi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Hello🤣
Finally i know your name now😆
Shivaay broke anikas watch😲 she is going to be so upset...
How dare these ppl do that😡
I loved the principal scene...
I wonder how these ppl will react when they come to know that anika is a star...muh dekhna layak hoga un logon ka
This is going so interesting...
Loved the update
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Amazing. Continue soon and next time do pm me.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank u so much for the pm...as i said before i can't praise u enough...as usual awesome, dear...i'm a huge fan of yours,dear...i was eagerly waiting for ur update...i'm so happy u finally update...our anika is too smart...she completed all challenges very smartly...last challenge was the best...i imagined the whole scene & started laughing like a mad...but because of my laugh my mother's sleep got disturbed...my good luck she didn't scold me...anika's imagination principal as santa claus part was amazing...loved it...but shivay was too rude...he should be punished...he thought he broke the watch but no he broke her...i have full faith in anika...she will surely make them taste thier own medicine...will wait for that...will wait for ur next update also...continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
As a fan of us ff I have this request bit long ff nd for pm... Wow superbbb update Anika's of winning the conditions nd Atlast the broken watchhh
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Amazing!! Amazing!! Amazing!! 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
The temper never to be controlled,
The faded emotions make me feel lifeless,
Yet I am a challenge for all,
As I never learned to lose.😈


Thank u everybody for your immense love. I am famished. Well the comments of yours really boost me up for giving more and more of me. When I thought to continue this story I was really tensed but with every update I myself is filled up with excitement. Thank u so much.


deejagi- Jaya, dear thank u so much. I know you have been waiting for it but it takes time to approach the story and to mend it in the Ishqbaaz way so that every character has its own space and essence. For me, I want my story never to lose its charm. And I hope for a good chapter you will understand my benevolence of the late update. I feel really sorry about it though.

lucky_princess- Sharmi, I am really glad you never lose the time of reading my story. I really wait for your comments as it means a lot for me. I feel really good that you take the hard work of reading my story. I am also reading your story. Will comment in it soon. Promise.

ISensedYou-Kamala, thank u for your comment. I also came to know your name. Thanks to Meghu and Jessie my old mates. The Devils did really wrong with Anika. But I hope today's chapter will not leave you upset and Anika is not a doll made of wax. So I can assure you that you will have fun.

sirat_aulakh-Thank you so much dear. And I do pm u dis tym.

MissSparkling- Well dear I really love your wows. Thank u so much.

Aparikshita-Dear you have my all attention. I am happy that I can make you imagine my story. I am also very happy that you laughed coz of my story, its really a good feeling when I can spread happiness. And I guess once u said u went through a turmoil of emotions reading the story and believe me I won't regret plotting the story with using all my brains to have readers like you. Thank you so much for enjoying this story.

Smileysha- Thank you being a fan of my story and also for your comment. I will try to keep all of you satisfied. And yes do not hesitate to write if you are not satisfied with the story.

-Aarfa- -Well nothing is hidden from you dear. You are my oldest reader waiting for new parts. And still having known the plots and story from first you again take out time and read the parts. Thank you so much dear.

Thank you everybody even the silent readers who took the pain of reading this story. It's really worth writing it.😳

CHAPTER-09

Temper And Anger: They Sound SIMILAR. Isn't it?

My watch! The last memory of my unknown parents was in front of me. No, were in front of me...in pieces. And these fellows are showing me their thirty two teeth!

I was mum but my hand turn to a fist as I was trying to control myself, my anger. I know; I only know what pain I am going through. What kind of pain was this! It felt like many pieces of glasses cut my body and on that injured places that man had sprayed salt with his words. Yes, the one whom I hallucinate. That watch, my last hope to reach my real identity.

Suddenly I was on my train of memories. One year back when I was in my apartment in U.S. three people barged in.

"Who are you? How you guys came inside? " asked I.

"Hello sweetie...it doesn't matter how we came inside. Just give us what we want and we will leave," said the first person.

"What do you want?" asked I.

"Your father's watch...or I must say the key," said the second person.

"Key?"

"Yes, do you think it's a normal watch, A.R. or Anika Rathor. It's a key, key of a treasure, the treasure hid by your father," said the first person again.

"No, I will not give you. Tell me who my father was?"

"We have not come to tell you that, we just came to take the watch away from you," said the third person.

"Just you three?" asked I.

"Yes," said the first person.

"You should come next time with more goons if you guys succeed to run from here," said I.

And the cops came inside my apartment and arrested the three goons as I informed them through message when the three goons entered my apartment. But they never said for whom they work, who my real parents are, and how this watch act as a key, what is my father's treasure.

I again stepped to reality; this whole flashback was for few seconds, I turned my gaze on the floor, my watch or the key of my dad's treasure. My last hope was in broken pieces. This Shivaay Singh Oberoi had crossed each and every limit today.

Shivaay hold my hands and picked it little upwards. "Speechless? Where is your smile? Has it left your side? Aww! So sad, Take this one thousand rupees note. In this one thousand rupees note you can have many watches similar to this broken one.

I know this is too much regarding one watch. Keep it as our pocket money darling; this will help you to buy whatever you want. For a commoner at one thousand you can have lots and lots of things," and there he kept a one thousand rupees note on my hand.

I saw his face; I could see a smile of victory.

"Do you have any idea what you did right now?" asked I in a serious tone. I could hear my own emotions.

I want to finish everything. I want to break whatever I find near me. And these stupid fellows don't know they are provoking the wrong person.

"Just bended the rule of returning your watch. We gave it back but in pieces," said he.

"You forgot my condition! I never went against any of the conditions of your tasks," said I.

"It doesn't matter. You got the money. Buy new."

I looked at his face with utter disgust. He said that I can replace my watch with any watch...

They turned to leave. Now my voice grew louder.

"Wow! You guys don't have any kind of idea what that watch means to me and compared it with any watch. It was the last memory of my unknown parents. But how could you all understand? Coz I can replace it with any watch. That's how you all think right?"

I could see Shivaay's face melted.

"Oh, I am sorry. This was a memory of your parents...I am sorry," said he but his expressions again changed to the aggressive one and then he stated, "This is what you wanted to hear from us?"

This person is ridiculous! What he thinks of himself? He is the best real life villain? He will get Oscar for his role of villain in real life? I could see other The Devils members except Omkara were laughing. He had pity for me in his eyes. No! Neither I want pity nor do I want sympathy.

"Hey puppy face," exclaimed Riddhima and was about to catch my hand when I stopped in middle. I caught her hands and jerked it off! How can they even think I am going to easily say a yes' to their tortures?

"She seems angry. Are you angry? Please show how you will take off your anger," mocked Shivaay and brought his face near mine.

The next moment is mine, I punched his face with all power I have, no not only power this time anger was visible perfectly in my action. He fell on Rudra's shoulder. His mouth and nose were bleeding.

Let me clear it very well I am a boxing champion from school time. I was the hottest in my school but no one dared to comment raw on me coz they used to scare me. I was brought up in U.S. so we were allowed to wear civil dress in school and I had always known as the Hottest Chick and the boys used to go gaga over me. But I really hate to reject people so better make an image where people do not dare to bring you in that situation only. I had a similar image. Now knowing how my punch could be one can easily imagine what might have gone on Shivaay Singh Oberoi at that moment. Well I hope that his handsome features damages a little by my punch. Well this punch had not only its effects on Shivaay Singh Oberoi but on the whole The Devils.

Riddhima forwarded to take an action on me but Shivaay stopped her in middle.

I continued, "Who are you? God? Tell me...Everyone should be scared from you guys. Why? You guys are some special being. Rudra you love to make videos right? Make videos now, make it. Actually, you guys are no human but animals. You want to buy everything with money. Tell me can you buy my memories? I lost it when I was eight years old. Can you guys buy it for me? Can you guys buy my parents whom I lost ten years back? Can you...but you five...You guys are sick in your heads. I did everything you guys told me but you all blamed me of not following the conditions which were not even given. This is the price of my pen right? I am giving you ten thousand rupees, go and do a check up of yourselves."

I threw ten thousand rupees along with the one thousand rupees note on Shivaay.

"Need more money ask me. I'll love to spend lakhs for the welfare of society from you morons."

I bent down and picked the pieces of my watch. The Devils faces revealed they were still in shock. I know with my words they are clear now that am no middle class girl but I did that in my anger so now I have to work hard to hide my real identity. And I left that place and walked inside the building with the pieces of my watch.

I came and sat on the stairs of the Western Music Building. I need a break. I felt like my heart was torn into pieces by the action of Shivaay.

Shivaay, I thought him to be a little good. Don't know why but my expectation was really wrong from him. He is my enemy. I should have knocked him out but I stopped with one punch. What I try to find in him? My Goodness...No it cannot be for me. And from now on I will treat him as my enemy only.

I took the pieces of my watch and tried to make it like before but I cannot make it like before.

Soumya came and sat beside me.

"You okay?" asked she.

"No...It hurts!" said I.

"Then cry...you will feel relaxed," said she.

"I never cry," said I.

"Look if you cry that does not mean you are vulnerable," said she.

"No...I don't cry coz I don't have any emotions. Now if I can bring my watch back to its older way I will get over this also. And pain makes me stronger, let it hurt me more, let it..."

How will I say that I don't cry coz I don't want to behave like normal girls who have normal desires from life? I don't want to sleep with sweet dreams of good life coz I have always slept in thorns. My life was always complicated and it will stay this way only. Who will love a girl who hallucinates and attacks the person who would be in front of her? I try to control myself but sometime I cannot get over them how much I try and the hallucination provokes me. No I cannot be a normal girl, I am strong and I don't cry to leave my worries coz they always make me remember my mission of life. And if I cry how will I take the responsibilities of others?

"Are you upset for this?" a voice came over me.

I saw a hand holding the missing piece of my watch.

"Yes!" I said excitedly.

Then I picked my face as this voice was of one of the, The Devils member's. As assumed he was none other than Omkara.

Suddenly a peon came calling for Soumya as Raghav Sir had called her. She took an excuse from us and went away.

"Omkara," now my attention went back at him after the abrupt silence which came for the arrival of the peon. I was shocked to see him here.

"You know my name. I see," and he placed himself on the stairs beside me.

"Who don't know The Devils members name in this college?" said I.

"Yeah, I am sorry for your watch and parents," said he.

"It's okay...,"

"You were good today," said he.

Has he gone nuts? I punched his brother and he is praising me! I understood he felt sorry for me but praising to punch his brother, this is weird.

"What? You are not angry at what I did with Shivaay?"

"The torture sessions were increasing. Shivaay needed one badly to get back to earth! The Devils did too much with you," said he.

I hold my gaze fixed on the ground.

"Thank you," exclaimed I.

"Why?"

"To bring this lost part of my watch back to me," said I.

"Speaking honestly I was really scared to hand over this to you."

"Why?"

"Coz you are really scary when you are angry. Anyway I am a peace loving guy so don't punch me for my jokes."

"No...it's peaceful to talk to you."

"Friends Miss Mary Com?"

"Friends"

And we shook our hands.

"Okay that means now I have another friend rather than The Devils," said he smiling, I also smiled at his cute gestures.

"And I have a friend from The devils," said I.

"Well other members of The Devils may be searching me now. And Shivaay may be torturing himself and going wild by playing his guitar for your punch," said he.

"You love him a lot?"

"Yes! He is my brother who had always acted like a shield for our family. Bye Mary Com," said he and left.

I smiled for the first time after the dreadful half day. Soumya came after meeting Sir and sat with me.

"When he left?" asked she.

"Who? Omkara? Well some minutes back."

"I told you he is a good guy," said she.

"Why are you stating it?"

"Coz he made you smile."

"Seriously? Am I smiling?"

"Wow! He made the great A.R. smile and she doesn't even know. I think in next interview we fans will hear A.R. is no more single," said she.

I smiled. What to say to her? I don't want break her heart by saying that I am not a girl who will fall in love and live in a relationship.

"He is really a good guy, indeed," exclaimed I.

Omkara is really a nice guy. He is so unbiased; he praised me and went to calm Shivaay. I somehow admired the guy. He is a good person, but seriously he will be the weakest one who can face my wrath which can even bring death for someone.

Hmm...Shivaay impulsive Omkara peace loving and Rudra fun loving but they are inseparable brothers. And how these three can so mix well? Omkara's character is so hard to define. Shivaay so flawless yet his flaws thrives. Rudra so naughty yet mature thinking is visible in his eyes. How? There must be some mystery...Hmm...Now this mystery be my next fantasy!

Uff! one more update I will b waitin 4 ur awsm comments.. do say my flaws too if u find any..

Lov u all❤️

Mimi😎




Edited by D_mi_cheeky_me. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tq for pm me...I don't find any flaws in ur ff bcoz my eagerness to read ur ff is more than that...bcoz ur ff is different... Superb update...while readingu made me feel the pain of anika nd Shivaay's punch by anika is nice ... waiting for ur nxt update nd pm byeee tc
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing update dear. I was waiting eagerly for ur update and yes there was no flaws in ur story. Seriously i loved ur story. Waiting eagerly for next part of ur story. If possible then plz update everyday. I am waiting when the devils will come to know that she is The A.R. Waiting to see their reaction. Loved ur ff, its unique from other ffs. Truely loved it and thanks for pm. By the way I am Amrita.

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