Two Parallel Lines_A ShivIka FF_Chapter 8 (18.11.16) Page 31

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strangerthings

@strangerthings

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#71

awesome work preity. loved it. so om is falling for anika n other side maybe ani like shivaay n shivaay cares for her .kisi na kisi ka to dil tootega . continue soon dear

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3dancelover

@3dancelover

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#72

I read all of it in one go and I love it!

So many different emotions and a love triangleish thing is going on right!

Om likes Anika, Anika is starting to feel for Shivaay, and Shivaay has to of course sort out of his feelings

Looking out for the next, update soon!

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Frozen.K

@Frozen.K

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Wah Preity meri jaan 🤗 Kya likha hain boss 👏 But I have to say you literally cracked me up with that "marijuana" scene 🤣 I just read chapter 1 and I was praying you don't pair Anika with Om 😆 Bach Gai tu Preity 😆 Jokes apart, I can't wait to read the rest.,..will let you know once I read all of them.,,,thanks for the PM 😳

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Frozen.K
Wah Preity meri jaan 🤗 Kya likha hain boss 👏 But I have to say you literally cracked me up with that "marijuana" scene 🤣 I just read chapter 1 and I was praying you don't pair Anika with Om 😆 Bach Gai tu Preity 😆 Jokes apart, I can't wait to read the rest.,..will let you know once I read all of them.,,,thanks for the PM 😳

Hein 😲 🤣

Next pe shayad maar padegi 🤣 Thanks for the feedback darlo 🤗