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preity_d

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: twerping
Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! It felt so real, what with all the realistic details you put in! Thanks for that!
Like Anika missing her stop and then having to walk back.. or the political situation being something that needs to be considered..
Loved how Om is feeling a connection... can it bloom into something more?
But then she has run into SSO! And that has to mean something!
So excited about the possibilities!
And I know that part of Doars quite well... it is beautiful! 😳
Waiting for next chapter!

OMG I am so happy that you loved it Ri 🤗You will see how thinks bloom between AniKar 😉😆 Updating 😳

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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ISensedYou
Read both chapters😳
Love triangle between om and shivika?😲
Om has already started liking anika but anika doesnt seem to have any sort of feelings like that for om...
Looking at shivaays character in this he wud sacrifice his love for his brother😭 later on...
its already hard for om to get over what happened in the past...very intrigued to know what actually happened that he wanted to die...
I wonder what anika would do when both brothers love her😆
Shivaay does seem to get affected by anika and same with anika
Last part was☺️
Thanks for the pm
Update soon😊

Yes, Love triangle but different kind of. Two brothers will never fight... Things will be situational.

Thank you for liking it ! 😳

Om is a character of numerous possibilities and layered. It's feels beautiful to think and write about Om always !

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preity_d

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

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twerping

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

heehee! I was so stalking your thread for the update!

This was wonderful! I am liking the way you are taking things forward. Anika and Om... 😳 love the bond Om feels towards her... also his past is getting clearer...

And really Shivay! What were you doing in her bedroom at that time of night?!! I really want to know!

And yes, carrying her back to the resort... ☺️

Loving this!

Please update soon!!!

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SRKian

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

guess my sunday aint as boring as i thought it 'll b😉

so O is already going lattu over her😳 nd his past,nw dat was painful😭

nd dem my baggad billa😈 shivaay baby u'll surely b der 4 her😉

grt update Pre👏👏 update da next chap asap,waiting 4 some romance😉

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sharmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Well u noe what i realized it today that it was ur story..priety its urs! Nd i noticed it today...happy late realisation to me!!

Fine the update was brilliant..i was waiting for the next update..so Om is finally opening up to her..nd Om feels cared.. he feels LOVED!..

Nd Anika likes Shivaay..nd What was Shivaay doin in her room at that hour?? Nd the way he carried her off was awesome...

Continue soon..

So i hope these r all ur own ideas...😆Nothing frm Pooja rit??😆.. Agar ho na..toh pls..usko uski credit de dena...kyunki mein iss sab ki witness bani thi..agar nahi diya...toh u r finished😆

Love Sharmi

Edited by lucky_princess - 8 years ago

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floral

@floral

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

amazing update dear

i loved it very much

well iam really confused now

well who is feelings for whom

well this shivaay nah tough nut to crack

plzzz do continue soon

Edited by kusharberry - 8 years ago

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

it was awsm...

anika and om together hanging out...and shivaay supporting them...it was just lovely..

and anika had the urge to ruffle shivaay hair..soo cute...

and at last there argument and shivaay accepting that he care for her...

just loved it...

do continue soon..

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preity_d

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: kusharberry
amazing update dear
i loved it very much
well iam really confused now
well who is feelings for whom
well this shivaay nah tough nut to crack
plzzz do continue soon

😆 No no, not that much confusing... 😆 Om is kinda falling for Anika and Anika is kinda falling for Shivay and Shivay ka pataa nai 😉 🤣

Thank you yaar 😳 This time promise will update soon !