Two Parallel Lines_A ShivIka FF_Chapter 8 (18.11.16) Page 31 - Page 18

Superb!
This update just voiced Shivaay's feelings for Anika...u just did it perfectly. His fear...the fear of losing her...his vulnerability...all was shown beautifully.
Finally when she was alright..nd she opened her eyes...he kissed her hands nd voiced out his fear. She wanted him to confess once...atleast once that he cared for her...but no...he bent on sacrificing for his brother.
Nd when she thanked him...he idirectly said that she cannot belong to him.
Finally Om and Anika r getting married. Shivaay burying everything in his heart...he put up a fake smile which cannot be distinguished between a smile from the heart by all...
So he is getting drunk...and holy shitt priety...this is going to be sooo complicated.
Why? I cant see Om in pain again...
Well...continue sooon...
Loved it!!!

Love Sharmi

Originally posted by: preity_d

Bu, how will I thank you for putting a detailed comment like this? Thank you so much for loving this story so much🤗
I liked u'r not being judgmental about Anika and liking her going with the flow attitude.😳

Bata meko storm, kaunse storm k bareme baat karing?😉

preitu shivaay is drunk na nd drunk shivaay dil ke feelings bayan krta h na right??😉
ab maybe when mrs oberoi ko pta chlega that shivaay too liked anika vo phr om ko dislike kregi ??not sure

Originally posted by: Ketaki19

hawww😲😲😲ANIKARAA ki engagement bhi kara di <font size="5">KYU????? KYU???? KYU???????????</font><font size="2">di hume SHIVIKA milenge na???? ab mujhe pura doubt hain</font>

<font size="2">waise jor ka jhatka haa😆</font>

shivika hi milega usne bol rkha h nahi dia to mai usko bahut peetungi 😡😆
itna sb islie thori tolerate kia h ki shivika na mile last me

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Anikara is engaged??!!! Ok that was fast...poor shivaay...i guess he is sacrificing his happiness for his bro...hmmm...now hes drunk...wonder if he will do anything...

Damn i didn't think Anikara were going to get engaged, isnt that a twist?

Oh poor Shivay! Well, glad Anika is helping Om come out of his addiction. Sometimes you just need a reason to live and she has become that for him. Loved the way you described the wedding and the understated hints at Shivay's inner turmoil. Poor baby.

Originally posted by: Ketaki19

hawww 😲 😲 😲 ANIKARAA ki engagement bhi kara di KYU????? KYU???? KYU??????????? di hume SHIVIKA milenge na???? ab mujhe pura doubt hain

waise jor ka jhatka haa 😆

Aage aage dekh hota hain kya. I'm sure u'll enjoy ! 😳 Doubt mat kar wo milenge zaroor ! 😉