Two Parallel Lines_A ShivIka FF_Chapter 8 (18.11.16) Page 31

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Tharunisa

@Tharunisa

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Ufff... I thought shivaay wud have made a scene at the party... But didn't... So ishanna s sister is out for revenge that's interesting... N looks like om s child s still alive contrary to Wat he's thinking n shivaay s looking after her... Om s on a dangerous path... Shivika s really comfortable with each other but they don't say it out for it might hurt om...

U make us wanting more n more... Now I am really intrigued...

Btw awesome update as always... 😊

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deephari

@deephari

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#192

Wonderful update dear. Very interesting pls continue soon.

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3dancelover

@3dancelover

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#193

Shivaay loves Anika and he has admitted! (only if he would do that on the show😆)

great update continue soon

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Hmmm...revenge...this is not going to be good for om...but loved shivaay n mum scene...glad he didnt do anything in his drunken state ...awww loved to see him taking care of annika...just lovethem together...no offence...i am definitely a shivika shipper😳

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strangerthings

@strangerthings

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#195

ohh my god so it's ishana's sis who has returned for revenge.. wonder what is gonna happen to om.
and the way om reacted,he has not really moved on i think.. anika is not comfi with om's touching well she don't love him romantically..
shivaay 's pain was so beautifully portayed..poor him ..love jhanvi for consoling n giving him strength..
wonderful update prietu ❤️👏

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Priya

@priyanvs

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#196

I just feel in love with your story dear

Loving it

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annniiii

@annniiii

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#197

interesting and brilliant update. continue soon

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Taaniii

@Taaniii

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#198

Can't wait for next update...

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KRUTI PASAD

@KrUtI97

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#199

amazing update...👏so this story is developing into a perfect love triangle...

i thought shivaay would do something wrong in the party but he behaved maturely...

the end part was so cute...

please PM me the future parts...

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---Angel---

@---Angel---

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#200

Now this is what I would call perfection👏 Within this chapter you portrayed Shivaay' s feelings; whilst, staying true to his character! Only a true writer can pull this off and you have dear👏 Your writing is so AMAZING that I can't find the words to describe it without repeating myself four or five times! The love story is forming beautifully! It doesn't feel forced at all! I feel like I am just standing with the characters and going through everything with them because of the deep connection you have created between the characters and the readers. I ADORED it!!!!

Thank you for always sending me a pm Preity🤗

Love Angel❤️