Adhoore-Incomplete ishkara ff

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys my name is Bahar and I have written a few FFs but this one is after ages I really hope you all will like it 😳



"Om! Are you even listening to me? I am talking to you. Sometimes I feel like our relationship is just one sided and that too from my side only" Riddhima was talking to Om while he was busy making a sculpture."

Om threw the tool he was sculpturing with and said "Riddhima I heard everything you said I am not ignoring you ! you need to realise that I am very busy these days I am really sorry but I can't go with you to that party I have to finish this sculpture by tomorrow now if you don't mind can I be alone for some time in my room please! Om wasn't shouting but it also wasn't very soft either. By now Riddhima had tears in her eyes and was about to go and om just realised that his reaction was wrong he stood up from his chair and walked towards her . "Riddhima! Stop!" He sighed "ok sorry, I am really sorry" he held her shoulders and turned her towards him he looked into her eyes and while nodding he said "we are going ok?" Riddhima looked surprised and pleased at the same time "really?! Omg om you're the best" she wiped her tears and hugged him tightly. Omkara wasn't happy with this decision but in order to save this relationship he had to do some sacrificing and this is exactly what he didn't want. Riddhima is actually right their relationship is only one sided there was no love from Omkara's side and he knew that by now however he didn't want to break riddhima's heart and this is why he is still in this relationship.

"Look sir the amount is decided if you can't give it then I won't dance this is my style no Deepika no Kareena this is ishaana style" ishaana said it with full confidence "ok fine deal done" the manager said after trying to negotiate which failed miserably but he had no option but to say yes to ishaana because there was no other dancer available. She couldn't believe her ears she was actually quiet scared she really needed that money thinking about the reason Ishaana's eyes filled up with tears If the situation wouldn't have occurred there is no way ishaana would take money for her dance this was something only for her and not for the world to see dance was life a way to express her feelings and now she is selling it this was a big step for ishaana but what could she do she had to. She did try stealing money from others but every time she tried she something in her stopped her ever since she met that ... that vatika hail oil oberoi . Ishaana smiled at the manager thanked him and left for her performance.

Om and Riddhima arrived along other guests and our lovely Omkara was cursing both his beloved brothers for not accompanying him to this party. Suddenly the lights went off and ishaana's performance had already started. ( ajaa nachle) ishaana started with her back facing the crowd and as soon as she turned around om was shocked surprised and angry at the same time remembering what this girl did to him made him tighten his jaw and fists. Ishaana however didn't notice him whereas Riddhima was also shocked to see her to her she was still mala both om and Riddhima were looking at ishaana as if they had seen a ghost.

After the performance finished Om walked up to ishaana with the angriest look ever. He took hold of her arm a shocked ishaana couldn't even digest where Om came from what he was doing he dragged her out of the hall to the parking area "what the hell are you doing here in case you're here to trap me in your sweet and oh so innocent talks let me tell you its not going to work what do you think of yourself huh that seeing you dance I will fall in love with you ? huh and oh ahaha yes get married to you and transfer all my properties in your name if you would have asked me once for money I would have given it to you BUT! You lied and I HATE LIARS! I told you before not to cross my path and look at you here you are in front of me AGAIN." Shocked? Hurt? Angry? To describe ishaana's feelings with these words wouldn't do justice God knows why omkara's words affected her but she is going to give it back to him and this time with interest. Om was still holding her tightly by one arm ishaana pushed him with her other arm and if eyes could kill Om would be dead by now. Ishaana was angry and hurt but feelings like hurt and sadness are like dance to her she only keeps it for herself right now she wanted om to see the angry side of her.



sooo guys do let me know your views and whether I should carry on

like and comment plz 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a strong start... very intriguing 👏 Please continue we need more doses of IshKara :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very sweet yet intriguing .pl cont.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Surely. Must continue it.
Well written. Great job.

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