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OMG12399

@OMG12399

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: preity_d
Uff what intensity and What pain ! Uff loved it ❤️ Sad ending though 😔 beautifully written ! Come up with more !1

Thank youu! 😳
They're such an intense couple that it's v easy to write lol 😛

Yeah hopefully something less dard-filled and happier next time :D

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OMG12399

@OMG12399

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Sophia21
Ohhh i cried 😭 .. Such a beautiful OS. Very painful and I would like to imagine Anika does stop the wedding or he stops it himself.. I cnt even imagine him marrying someone else! 🥺

Haw, did you actually cry😲

Yeah if she doesn't stop it, he will stop it himself I'm sure 😃, neither can I!

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OMG12399

@OMG12399

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
Beautifully written👏
U just expressed the emotions perfectly...
Loved it ..
Love Sharmi

Thaaank youuu! 😃😃😳

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Wow...I just read this OS today!! Your writing is lovely!! And its amazing that Anika did stop billuji's shaadi at the mandap but no pagadi wali scene!! Maybe it will happen at the next almost Shaadi!!😆 But seriously loved your OS!!

Edited by chottekikhushi - 8 years ago

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@-happilyunknown

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

That was really really well written <3 The angst was palpable </3 Please do write more.

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iiROSii

@iiROSii

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Awesome blossom!

Can feel the pain

And why imagine, write another part where Anika stops the marriage n both confess

And when u do pls pm me too

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Chalo, chal kar sukoon dhundh laye...,

Khwaaishe to khatam hone se rahi...!!!

Very nice story...painful but heart touching...

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

I dont know how i missed this wonderful story.its awesome pice of writing dear.the pain,longing,fear of loosing and finally when it serms tht they lost their woeld.its heart wrenching but as beautiful as the song.the pure,raw pain which also shows the depth of their love for each other.
Thanjs for this os.its treat to read.
Do write more. 👏

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