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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Beautifully written👏

U just expressed the emotions perfectly...

Loved it ..

Love Sharmi

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

This was so beautifully painful! Phenomenal! You captured their desire, their boundaries, and their frustration at their inability to give into the temptation that calls to their souls constantly! Very well written...you should write more!👏

Edited by --Nargis-- - 9 years ago

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OMG12399

@OMG12399

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Oh God their pain! Hurts so much I can't even. Just beautiful! 👏

Aww thank youu😳

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OMG12399

@OMG12399

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thanks😃

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OMG12399

@OMG12399

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: SRKian
Res 4 nw 😊
unres

dat was really painful yt beautiful😭👏👏
do write more on dem😊

Thanks, I shall tryy :)

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OMG12399

@OMG12399

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz
this OS!!! my gut wrenched and tears came out from my eyes!!!
dont know why but the line: "Bairiya..Bairiya..Mujhe sataana..Bairiya..", of the song "Bairiya" from "Ramaiya Vastaivaiya" suited Shivaay's situation perfectly.
emotional OS.

Haww, did you actually cry?😲

Glad to know I evoked some emotion 😃... haven't heard the song, but I'll go listen to it asap!

Thanks :D

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OMG12399

@OMG12399

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: xerxes12
Hiii.OMG.. 😉
Yeh wala toh ekdam OMG wala Os hai.. 😆 😆 ..
The best part of this is You used their eyes to speak every word... Every pain...every emotions.. Without a single verbal utterrance...from a couple who otherwise vocal to each other.. 😆
I loved the Irony.. 😉
So good... 👏 👏 ...even now I would love watch something like this .. 😊
Loved it!
Keep writing more!

Thanks you soo much😃

Exactly, I feel like they're so vocal and loud but they do all their real communication through their eyes 😉

I shall try to write something happier next xD

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OMG12399

@OMG12399

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: 3dancelover
that was so well written
the pain tho😕, i can feel it
do write more!

Thank you! Glad to know you liked it😳

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OMG12399

@OMG12399

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ...Angels...
This is just so beautiful😭❤️
For once I am speechless...
It's just amazing, how you have penned down all their pain and grief😳
Please do write more dear😳

Thanksss! 😃

Glad to know you could feel the emotions 😃