The ride (AnShi/ShivIka OS) + AN on pg. 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome👏
❤️ ❤️ ❤️...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ooohhh My Gosh ! This was superb ! Beautiful ! Fabulous ! Brilliant ! Extraordinary ! Damn ! I just ran out of words.. so, all in all WOW !!
You are amazing ! This OS was so good ! Do write more...

P.S. If possible then please continue this shot..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was awesome. Totally loved it. You write beautifully. Hope to read more from you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey its good it has humour n its simple you are second second one to whom I am commenting. I am liking only one ss now!! But u should write more its the third os of all that I like n I read them all and its equally good. Keep writing u r good 😊 just trying to encourage u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Absoluv

Super work ''luved it ...please keep writing more of such awesome OS...

Is there a continuity of this OS ...like wait happens at the farmhouse


Thanks! I'll see what I can come up with 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnShi_LoVe

Awesome👏

❤️ ❤️ ❤️...

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pearl.16

Ooohhh My Gosh ! This was superb ! Beautiful ! Fabulous ! Brilliant ! Extraordinary ! Damn ! I just ran out of words.. so, all in all WOW !!

You are amazing ! This OS was so good ! Do write more...

P.S. If possible then please continue this shot..


haha!! Thank you so much! I am actually bowled over by the response to this fic. I have some ideas about a continuation, let's see what I can do with it! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaram

That was awesome. Totally loved it. You write beautifully. Hope to read more from you.


Thank you!! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanu156

Hey its good it has humour n its simple you are second second one to whom I am commenting. I am liking only one ss now!! But u should write more its the third os of all that I like n I read them all and its equally good. Keep writing u r good 😊 just trying to encourage u


Thank you Tanu! I am so glad that you liked it enough to comment. It certainly is very encouraging. I have some ideas so we'll see if I can continue. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well narrated.
And, the possibilty of such scene to actually take place is immense.
You got the character's true emotions right.

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