The ride (AnShi/ShivIka OS) + AN on pg. 8

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iiROSii

@iiROSii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Well written

Enjoyed every bit of it

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Navin

@napstermonster

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Reposting from what I wrote to you as a response to your comment on my FF thread because I'm basically an idiot and only now realized this plea/ threat/ oddly assertive fan-girling of mine belonged here:

Woman, you have to go back to whatever you used to type this out (abacus? magic unicorn? dell laptop?) and writing some more of this one right now. I, a total stranger on the internet, on a forum about a random hindi serial do so command you. Clearly you have no choice.

I LOVED LOVED this One Shot on their ride to the farmhouse--honestly I found myself slowing down my usual reading when I thought it was going to end, just to savor it a bit more.. and then it did end, and I was mad. I mean it. MAD. Every time you posted a nice response to someone fainting over this, I checked to see if it was an update. It wasn't. Thus-Mad.

Please write a chapter two(and on) ! What happens at the Farmhouse? You have them wet, shivering, and acutely aware of each other. My mind boggles. And then my mind busily strips them of wet clothes, so maybe its better if you pick this up and carry on with the next chapters by yourself. Surely its basically cruel (and possibly illegal...I don't know, I have to check) of you to not continue this ? like NOW? Where's that damn unicorn?

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twerping

@twerping

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: napstermonster
Reposting from what I wrote to you as a response to your comment on my FF thread because I'm basically an idiot and only now realized this plea/ threat/ oddly assertive fan-girling of mine belonged here:

Woman, you have to go back to whatever you used to type this out (abacus? magic unicorn? dell laptop?) and writing some more of this one right now. I, a total stranger on the internet, on a forum about a random hindi serial do so command you. Clearly you have no choice.

I LOVED LOVED this One Shot on their ride to the farmhouse--honestly I found myself slowing down my usual reading when I thought it was going to end, just to savor it a bit more.. and then it did end, and I was mad. I mean it. MAD. Every time you posted a nice response to someone fainting over this, I checked to see if it was an update. It wasn't. Thus-Mad.

Please write a chapter two(and on) ! What happens at the Farmhouse? You have them wet, shivering, and acutely aware of each other. My mind boggles. And then my mind busily strips them of wet clothes, so maybe its better if you pick this up and carry on with the next chapters by yourself. Surely its basically cruel (and possibly illegal...I don't know, I have to check) of you to not continue this ? like NOW? Where's that damn unicorn?

Oh my god!! Did you just... what?! haha! I can't believe this!!! and it's a dell laptop! 😆 The mysteries of unicorns and abacuses continue to elude me!

Okay, seriously trying to control my joy on reading your comment!! You know how much of a fan I am of your writing and to have you liking my story is like the BEST compliment/encouragement EVER!

I AM working on a second part.. it's taking a bit of time and I don't want to rush it. I'll probably post it by Sunday (latest by Monday). Not sure how it will go down after this part but it's coming! 😳

Thank you so much for that comment though.. I mean, I would frame and hang it on my wall if I could!

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Tanu156

@Tanu156

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Well I just get to know how to comment bcoz I am new so I thought to let you know that your os is on my top3 list its no 3 actually and that's all I read them all but I liked only 3. Keep up good work keep writing!! Especially the part where shivay was thinking about hiding himself or his car that was hilarious !! The ride - name is also catchy !! It was smooth and relaxing and light and enjoyable chap just like their ride !!!

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twerping

@twerping

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: iiROSii
Well written
Enjoyed every bit of it

Am so glad you liked it! 😳

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twerping

@twerping

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Tanu156
Well I just get to know how to comment bcoz I am new so I thought to let you know that your os is on my top3 list its no 3 actually and that's all I read them all but I liked only 3. Keep up good work keep writing!! Especially the part where shivay was thinking about hiding himself or his car that was hilarious !! The ride - name is also catchy !! It was smooth and relaxing and light and enjoyable chap just like their ride !!!

Tanu! Thank you so much dear! 🤗

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

A Note:

Thank you everyone for such a response! All those who left me those wonderful comments encouraging me to write more, come up with a sequel to this, I want to let you know that I have it ready finally. I don't know what kind of expectations you might have had with the direction the story was heading towards and I fear I might have disappointed you all with what I managed to come up with.

Anyway, here's the link: The Remedy

*Runs away*

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PaYa_Shivika

@PaYa_Shivika

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Wow...Awesome OS yar.👏👏...loved Shivika's Champa ride❤️...glad you showed Shivaay's naughtiness...he held her waist..😆😆 Shivika's nok-jhoks are well written with some hilarious dialogues like in a show.Please continue writing on romantic Shivika.😳😳

Will read 2nd OS.😉😊

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twerping

@twerping

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: PaYa_Rivanya
Wow...Awesome OS yar.👏👏...loved Shivika's Champa ride❤️...glad you showed Shivaay's naughtiness...he held her waist..😆😆 Shivika's nok-jhoks are well written with some hilarious dialogues like in a show.Please continue writing on romantic Shivika.😳😳

Will read 2nd OS.😉😊

Thanks Roopz! This was purely for fun! So happy you liked it! 🤗