Crossing Limits. [TS|Obros|Rudra|RuMya] - completed: pg.11

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Zarmina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

I love how you've wrapped this up.. Not a complete ending but it's also not leaving is completely hanging..

Also I'd be up for reading about their childhood in this same universe.. Mainly cause your writing style is something I really like 😃

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chandanagimsy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

this is amzing...loved it.all the flashbacks are qbit overwhelming but wow...continue soon...thanx for pm

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Akshu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Really nice...

Read all in a go...

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Priya.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

One word ..Brilliant! .. But I am not surprised since it is you.

Began reading with going through the 1st part since it had been too long and fell in love with it all over again.

Shivaay's assessment of himself as a failure and the guilt for not detecting Om's descent into drugs and now the nightmare seems to have given a second visit. Its his beloved sunshine this time around.

Protective ShivKara against Soumya . That's our dream come true right? ..so what if the CV' s doesn't seem to oblige us . We have you . I absolutely loved the part. Om's guilt and the tender sorry moment and the sweet ending with Shivaay. Their world is perfect again.

The last part is lovely. Ru gets to know about Sumo . O gets his forgiveness , the feeding session was

,as always, love .

The FB at the end ...well who among us isn't aware of your pet theory?😆

And the next time you update or write something new ...a PM will definitely help.😃

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Edited by Priya. - 9 years ago

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Poorva

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Wow wow wow... Noor.. Fabulous.. Every character was perfectly portrayed... Amazing job!!!!!

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shreya tode

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Sorry for late

Just read it

Awsm writting

Thanks for pm

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Deepa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Such a awesome story! beautiful end i would say!!

Lovely!! they throwed Sowmya out too!!

Hmmm nice writing!

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CoffeeLover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Finally!

It was amazing!

Thank for the pm

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1018283

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
beautiful update

Thank you, dear! 😉

@MysticRiver - and also, thank you! 😆

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1018283

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: an_k
awww first i have to pinch myself that its updated...watching Ishqbaaaz will read it in a while :P

yipee i am done reading it
i enjoyed it to the core
team #HurtRudra
but it was awesome
from start till end it was lovable :)

😆

Thanks, Ankita! And sorry for making you wait so long 😳

Team #HurtRu forever. Show mein toh I doubt we will ever get it, so have to satisfy ourselves with our own imaginations 😉

Glad you liked it! 😳