Crossing Limits. [TS|Obros|Rudra|RuMya] - completed: pg.11 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -Lachu-

Ami I am weeping here...was one of my canons..Om slapping Rudy becoz he tried a hand with drugs unintentionally. And here soumya gave him cocaine. You dont know how much I am crying here. Om's reaction was very much what I expect of him. I love you for this

I especially loved the slap and subsequent part where Rudra is confused and hurt and Omkara is angry and hurt. Grt work Noor! Great work


Aww, is it mean when I am kinda happy that you were crying? 😳 Am just glad that you liked it, means that it turned out well! 😊 And I enjoy writing emotional scenes the most, especially angsty ones, painful ones - it might show 😆

Thank you, Lachu!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
wow...awesome one.plz update soon
nice idea for a storyline though
very creative
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Awesome story. 😊 Well written. You have me intrigued the whole time. Please continue 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
This is awesome! I felt so bad for rudra
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
please update the next part soon I've read it almost 7 times...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: arachne

Angsty Obros! Yay! I'll keep my coments short 😆

Poor baby Ru, to be scolded by Om is already one of his worst nightmare. To be scolded for something he didn't do would've hurt him and shatter him completely. Rudra may seem like a selfish character but he is far from that. He puts Shivaay and Om's needs above his own that he takes it upon himself to diffuse every conflict they have at the cost of dealing with his own emotions. At least that's how I see it. I don't know if it was deliberate on your part but even here Ru seem to care more about disappointing and hurting Om than being indignant that he was accused for something that he didn't do.

Om doesn't even feel out of character here. His anger, his frustration, his disappointments are all justified. This reminds me your first Obros OS when Om saw the pills he nearly overdosed on in Rudras's hands. He immediately took it and flung it as far away from Rudra as possible. Because he can't bear the thought of drugs anywhere near his baby brother. Did I just do a cross reference of your fics? Yes, yes I did 😆


Anyway, that reaction from Rudra just holding the bottle. When he thinks Rudra is taking drugs? All rational thoughts go out the window. I actually thought he would've been much harsher than this. Ah, reserving his anger for that person? Please say yes. 😆

Shivaay's just trying to keep it together. Concerned over Ru, disbelief over what he heard, angry at Om for being harsh on Ru. He's not around much in this, so I'll reserve my comment for later.

Awesome work as always 🤗

#HurtRudraMorePlease



OMG, I hadn't even replied to you? 😲 Bad me 😆

Well, seeing how Rudra lets matters slide without investigating - like the pic morphing issue - I guess this is how he would react especially given the situation that Om's upset with him and he, himself, is emotionally very vulnerable, right now.

I always seem to somehow reference to my other works - subtly but someone like you would catch on, of course 😉

Anger. There's a lot of anger. Too much that even Om doesn't know where to let it all out. And then, priorities have to be set 😭

Aww, I'm giving you ShivRu feels with the next one 😆


#AlreadyOnIt 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: shipreeta

Noor this was awesome, it was exactly as I was expecting, the pain of Rudra, that of Omkara and the indecisiveness of Shivaaye

Saumya, I hope Shivkara now give her a good lecture and tell her that not everything is a joke,

Om's anger was so apt and to add to the fact that Rudra was facing it for the first time and all for a wrong reason

Love you Noor

And yes thankyou for the credit


Thank you, Preeta 😳

Oh, they will tell her, don't worry 😆 I wonder if Soumya will ever be able to talk to them normally after this 😛

Aww, love you too! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
when's dis coming up...''stalker mode''
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Really beautifully written
Keep writing please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Messi2

res yes it's up

unres...I was crying at the state of my baby but I was also happy dat dis drug fiction is up ...being a professional pharmacist I read about many many drugs yet the narcotics are the one's which always intrigued me ...my love for these drugs always raises my bro's confusion ...I've seen breaking bad so many times just cause its about drugs ...dats y so much excited for dis particular fic

Err OK coming to the fiction... give me a badass shivkara ripping apart sautan ...

O slaps RU baby hawww ...O isn't at fault here na he knows first hand wat those things can do and seeing his baby bro like dat broke him ...but baby is beyond hurt dat O says he doesn't care about his brothers... how can u say dat mommykara...I cried there man...gimme badass O shredding sautan

Ami love u girl ur love for baby irritates yet amazes me ( u know y it irritates me half dead RU etccc)...


You contributed a lot to this fic being created - big hug for that! 🤗

Badass ShivKara? Maybe not as badass as we'd like 'cause they put Baby above everything else but they'll blast her, don't worry 😉

No, O isn't at fault. He loves Baby so much that even the thought of him engaging in drugs is unbearable for him. He just snapped.

Glad you liked it despite Baby suffering 😉

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