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ignore Typo do comment as it help me writing next chapter




Om walked in Dadi's room early next morning

"Kya huwa Dadi " he asked her, she asked to him to close the door

" ek kam hai tum se " she called him close to him and they both had a conversation for sometime

"Dadi it is not possible " he said

" sub kuch possible hai , bus tum mera saath do " she asked him he hug her " i am always there with you " he said

" jao kam per lag jao " she smiled at him while giving him her blessing



In Om's room

"Rudra get up Dadi wants you take you along with her to Pune " he said and shakes him

" Pune per Pune kyun, i can't accompany her " he placed the pillow on his head " you go with her" he said

" i can't go , i have to complete few paintings today " Om said

" that you can do tomorrow " Rudra said , Om pinch him hard on his butt , he hit him with the pillow , Om with eye asked him to wake Shivaay who was pretending to sleep

"Dadi ko jana kyun hai " Rudra asked

" Dadi's old friend called her , she is sick ,Dadi wants to meet her " he said while keeping his face straight

"bhaiya aap jao na " Rudra shakes Shivaay and said

" how can i go ?" Shivaay at once said and tried to sleep

" Bhai aap ka paas aaj koi kam nahi hai , and agar Dadi ko raat ko rehna bhi para you can stay there " Om said

" Dadi is going to stay " Shivaay said at once

" no no she wants to come back to night " Om quickly corrected himself

" Om please you go " Shivaay said

" bhai i have an idea in my mind , and i want to paint that today , you know me till i paint on the canvas i will be restless " he said


Dadi walked in room , she was dress up and holding her bag

" mera koi bhi poota mera saath chalna ko ready nehi hai , thek hai mein driver ka saath ja rahi hoon " she emotionally black mail them , Om and Rudra look at Shivaay he throw the quilt

"Dadi give me hour i will be ready " he said

"meri dosth akhri Saas la rahi thi agar ek hour mein woh upper chali gai tou " she said sadly

"okay let me change " he said , he walked to the door, to go to his room to get his clothes

"Bhai your clothes are here " Om said , Shivaay gave him an irritating look , he grabs and walked to freshen up


Dadi winked at them , Rudra gave a dump look to them Om blank his eyes

When Shivaay walked out of washroom he found Dadi waiting for him

" Can i do break fast ?" he asked Dadi

" Billo woh sab car mein hai bus chalo " she pulled his arm

" Dadi wait " he quickly grab his jacket , he stopped at front of his bed room door , Dadi look back at him

"Billo chalo " she asked him

"Dadi aik minute " he walked to the door he was about to open the door Dadi held his hand " Billo chalo " she pull his arm , Shivaay helplessly walked out with her

" Dadi why you didn't told me at night ? aur yeh aik dam se aap kai friend kahan se aagai hai " he said while driving


" billo car roko " Dadi said angrily Shivaay look at her

"Why " he asked her

" agar iss tarah ghusa mein jana hai tou mein akel chali jao gai " she said

" okay Sorry " he said , he picked up his cell and dialed Om number

"Kya huwa Bhai " Om picked up once and said

" ghar mein sab thek hai " he asked

" yes bhai sab thek hai Rudra and Priyanka are going to college , I am taking Sahil along with me , papa and chachoo left for office , our mothers are still asleep " he said and hide his smile

"Aur " he asked in a low voice so Dadi could not hear him

" aur aap aur Dadi tou saath hai na " he said

"Hmmm " he paused

" billo aur kon hai ghar mein " she said ,Shivaay cut the call , he tried to concentrated on road



At home


Anika woke up late , she look at the sofa next to the door where Shivaay was sitting doing his work the previous day, she was surprise to see herself alone in room "Sahil "she called him but when she didn't find reply she look around an search for her cell " 10 mein itni dair tak soti ra gai" she said and find a stick note

" I am going to my studio , will be back with Sahil at 12, your attendant is there when you are awake call her OM " she read

"hello koi hai " she called

a lady of middle aged walked in at once " woh saath wala room mein kanchi aankhe wala hoga un ko please bola do, raat ko choro kai tarah aata hai, zaroo so raha ho ga abhi tak " she said and tries to get up

" madam kon " she in confusion asked her

"SSO " she said then bite her lips "roka Shivaay " she corrected herself and said

The lady walked out with in few minutes she came back with Shivaay 's mom

"aunti ji " Anika puzzle

"Shivaay ghar mein nahi hai woh apni Dadi ka saath Pune gaya hai " she said

"Puna " Anika murmur

"Dadi kai koi friend hospital mein hai " she said " waise mein ghar per hoon agar kuch chaiya ho tou bol dana " she said and without waiting walked out

" mein na bola tha , per nahi mein to SSO hoon mein tou jao ga " she picked up her cell she was about to dial his number then she shakes her head " mein un ko phone kyun kar rahi hoon " she said

and placed her cell back , with the help of attendant she freshen up and had her break fast and medicine


In Omkara 's studio

Om was sitting lost in his deep thought , when Ishaani came and sat in front of him with a sad face

"What happen?" He asked with straight face

" aap ko kya problem hai " she asked him

" personal problem hai " he said and glance at her

" i saw the news " she said

"Please dont ask me any foolish question regarding Anika di , i am already very worried for her " he said

" kya huwa un ko " she asked in a low voice

Omkara gaze at her "you were in search of a job right ?" He asked

She in surprised look at him

The job is not tough at all you have to only give company to Anika di

You can stay at our home and be with her when we are not around , in this way you will get rid of your landlord

He said smiling

Ishaani blink her eyes wild open she could not believe her ears " aap sach bol raha hain " she asked

" wait let me ask bhai first " he without waiting dialed

Shivaay's number

" bhai woh anika di " he could not complete his sentence when he heard from other end

What happened to her he could sense his worried ness

" bhai kuch nahi huwa , i have a friend she was in search for a job can we hire her for Anika di , she can give her company and cheer her up " Om said in a one go

"tell her we will give her what ever she will demand , but i will not tolerate any carelessness " Shivaay said from other end

"Got it bhai " Om said and without listening him further he drop the call " job pakki lets go home " he at once picked up his satchel and said .Ishaana pinched hard on her arm to make herself realize, she followed him without thinking or taking advice from her father or sister , she listened her heart



At home

Anika was lying staring at the ceiling , she was staring at the sofa where he was sitting yesterday doing his work and off and on checking her out " kaise se bhi baat nahi karo gai , sab muhje ko chor kar chala gaya " she heard her cell started ringing , she tired to pick it up from side table but it slip down , she wiped her tears " kaise ko tou meri yaad kiya " she smiled in pain , she asked her nurse to pick up her cell for her " unknown number " she called back on that number but no one picked it up " kaise na call kiya " she start thinking


While back on way to Pune

Dadi started feeling thirsty ,Shivaay stopped car to fetch water bottle ," If i will call from my number she will think i am showing concern for her " he walked to the booth and called her , she didn't picked up , he wanted to call back but Dadi called him

"Billo kaise ko phone kar raha ho , mera se kar lo " she hide her smile and said from car he shakes his head and walked back to car


At home

" Anika di is very special for my elder bother Shivaay and for our family , you have to make sure bhai don't get annoyed from you or he will fire you " Om said while walking in the long corridor of his home

Ishaana nod and followed him


Anika irritated sitting all alone in the big room " koi aise bhi karta ha , Sab ka sab muhje ko chor kar chala gaya ho" she said in anger

"Sorry Anika Di , i had very important work , now i will not leave you alone " Om said and held his both ears , she with eyes asked him about Ishaana " oh sorry i forgot to introduce Bella , she is here to give you " he said and checked clock

"Di i will be back in half hour with Sahil " he without waiting walked out of room , Anika look at Ishaana she was staring at door

"Bella " she called her but she was lost in her own world " Bella " she called her again "Hello madam " she said bit loud , Ishaana look back at her

"Sorry sorry " she placed her bag and walked to her

" tum Om kai dosth ho?" Anika asked her

" kash hoti " she said while taking a deep breath

" tum yahan kaise aai " Anika asked her as she has never seen her in around

" muhje ko job chaiya thi " she said and bite her lips as Om has warn her not to tell Anika that Shivaay had hire her for Anika " Omkara ji ko helper iss liya mein aagai " she said Anika nod

Ishaan saw a note book near Anika pillow , she picked it up and started seeing her sketch "Yeh Omkara ka bhiaya hain na " she said , Anika took away the book

" woh bas aise hee " she said and hide the note book under her pillow

" you are in love with him " she said without thinking , Anika gave her weird look " iss tarah na dekha , jo aap na kiya hai woh to sirf aik premee he kar sakta hai " she said and smiled at her

" Mein aur SSO se pyar " Anika said and shakes her head

" per woh tou karta hai aap se pyar " Ishaana said and give her a big smile

" Kya " Anika pop-out her eyes and said

Ishaana started laughing " Dekha mein na aap ko distract kar diya " , Anika smirk

"SSO aur muhje se pyar " she murmur when Sahil walked in with Omkara


"Di dekho Om bhaiya na muhje ko chocolate la kardi " he said while eating it


At Same time Anika cell start ringing , Sahil without waiting picked it up

" Kon " he said

" Can i talk to Anika " Shivaay said from other end

"Anika di kaise ko aap se baat karni hai " Sahil said as he could not recognize Shivaay's voice

"Sahil bolo do mein so rahi hoon " she said irritating , she herself was not understanding why she was feeling so frustrated

"Anika Di bol rahi hain ka woh so rahi hain " he said " waise aap bol kon raha hain " he asked


Shivaay look at the phone " mein pagal hoon jo iss pagal ko baar baar phone kar raha hoon " he became angry and cut the call " why i am calling her by the way ?" he run his hand over his head and said



"Billo kya huwa " Dadi asked him

"Dadi give me address " he said

"woh tou mein lana bhool gai " she said hiding her smile

"What the wack ?" he look at her in surprise

" Billo hum dhood laga " Dadi said

"Dadi mein aap ko kya bolo , number hai aap ka paas " he asked her she shakes her head in big no .Shivaay started the car " Nahi Billo mein iss se mila beghari wapise nahi jao gai " she said angrily

" First of all stop saying me Billo " he said and made face

"Anika nahi hain yahan Billo " she said

a smile appear on his lips but the very net second it vanished " i will not think of her bus " he concentrate on road


At home


Everyone was gather around Anika they were telling her how was their day ,she listen them and tried to smile , she was again and looking at time and towards the door

"Anika Di aap thek hain " Om asked her as he noticed she was uneasy and look tired ,she smiled at him , he the very next second text Dadi" come back " he send " we all are around her but still she is feeling lonely we all failed " he said to himself

Edited by naddiya26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Fantastic update
So Dadi and OM plans to make Shiv and Anika restless
Awww Dadi emotionally blackmails them so he can go with her and that way both can miss each other and feel for each other
Shiv baby aww so restless he so wanted to see Anika before going but dadi pulls him away
awww Shiv baby is so concerned wants to know how Anika is doing
Calls at home OM answers and tells everyone is fine except Anika name is wants to know about her but can't ask about it directly
gets angry at Dadi if going to her friend so even she gets angry haha
and love how OM left a note for her
Anika wakes up and reads it
Calls an attended and asks about Shivaay but he is gone to Pune
Aww even she is concerned and about to call but stops herself
Lovely
Anika is so restless
Is mad that Shivay went to Pune even though she asked him not to
Angry and cute the way she was complaining that she won't talk to anyone as everyone left her
Love OM concern for Anika
He hired Ishana as her care taker
I smell OM and Ishana love story beings as well
Aww Shiv baby is so concerned and worried
When Om calls without letting him speak gets worried
But let's him hire IShana
He tries to call Anika but before she can answer it drops
OM showing Ishana house around and giving information on what to do and how Anika is special for them
Loved it
Loved loved it
Wonderful update
Thanks for update
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely.update next soon and plz put some sense to their thick scull.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...dadi and om trying to make then realise.. Wow ishana in action..I mean still as bela... Yaar update soon..waiting..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow awsm story
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Awesome update
Shivika... restless souls
Hope they see the light soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update dear anika and shivaay both r missing each other and this plan credit goes to dadi dadika idea is super hope their realize their love soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was an amazing update...well written...ShivIka...are missing each...thats cuteee...Continue Soon ... :-)
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"Billo wapise chalo "Dadi said at once after reading the text

Shivaay look at her in shock " after searching for hours now you are finally going to meet her and you are saying you want to go back home , i am not going to listen you , you meet her then we will go back " he said huskily , Dadi knew he was irritated she give up the idea of convincing him

Shivaay waited for her when she visited her friend home , he tune in radio as he was bored

"Rudra kya sunta hai love guru , no no it is something else " he tried to recollect it " seriously i am going to listen some kind of guru " he curse himself and started checking using his cell , he stopped for a while then shakes his head " i will not call her "he shakes his head it was hardly few minutes Dadi walked out of house

"Billo chalo wapise mein na miliya " she said

"Bus Dadi itni se dair ka liya milna tha " he asked Dadi sat and stretch her legs

"aap bhi kabhi kabhi Rudra kai tarah act karti hai " he started the car " we are going to a rest house , you rest then we will go back home " he said

"Billo muhje ko abhi ghar jana hai "Dadi said

"Dadi right now i am not in mood of listening you we are going to a rest house " he said and yawn Dadi shakes her head as her plan fire back " i am very tired , we can rest for sometime " he said she nod and inform Omkara

At home after dinner

"Anika di i have an idea , lets listen Love angel show together "Rudra tune and sat next to Anika

she didn't had any other option than to listen with him

Rudra he called and give cell to Anika

"Di talk " he said and show her thumb up

"Hello with whom i am talking to "Somya asked from other end

"A " Anika said Rudra smiled

"May i help you " she asked her , Anika look at Rudra , he put call on speaker "meri di ko kuch acha nahi lag raha , yeh bus chup chup se hai, na kaise se baat kar rahi hain , na haas rahi hain , in kai smile koi apna saath la gaya hai " he said

" mmm aap kai di ko pyar hogaya shayad" Somya said from other end

" Pyar aur mujhe ko " she said quickly

" yeh tou symptoms pyar ka hai , jab itna acha mausam meim kuch acha na laga , aur aap udaas hoon " Somya said

Anika quickly give the cell to Rudra ,he smiled " meri Di kya kara ab " he asked

" hmmm aap kai Di ka case kuch special hai , aap un ko abhi time da " she said "i am playing a song for your Di"


Kya yehi pyaar hai
Haan yehi pyaar hai
O, dil tere bin kahin lagta nahin
Waqt guzarta nahin

O, dil tere bin kahin lagta nahin
Waqt guzarta nahin
Kya yehi pyaar hai

Anika look at him he was lost in listening song , she became restless " kya muhje ko SSO se" she shakes her head " nahi nahi nahi " she said bit loud Rudra look at her in surprise
" muhje ko neend aa rahi hai " she yawn and said Rudra nod
"Okay Di you rest , Sahil can sleep with us " he said and without waiting walked out
"pehli dafa hai ka mein Sahil ka shur bhi bardash nahi kar pa rahi " she said to herself, and tried to fix her head on his pillow, she could inhale his strong cologne ,she twist and turn and look at the clock and check her cell " woh muhje ko phone kyun kara ga " she placed the cushion on her face ,but the next second she moved it as she felt suffocated"medicines kai wajhe se hai" she said and calm herself , she saw crutches placed near her" i can stand without him " she stands with difficulty " khud ko samajta kya hain " she took a step ,she smiled on her success " bus Anika thori se himmat " she took a small step down and walked towards the pool " un ka wapis aana se pehal , mein aur Sahil ghar chala jai gai " she used her full strengthand walked ,she was out of breath , she look back " room tou duur hai , aur yahan se mein kaise ko bola bhi nahi sakti " she sat on couch placed at the end of room" rest kar ka waipse jao gai" she was dead tired from head to toe her whole body ache"kya karo" she look around and smiled,she saw a note book placed bit far from her with help of crutches she drag it close to her , accidentally the crutches slipped from her hand " ab mein wapise kaise jao gai " she was completely exhausted ,she laid to rest on the couch . and started writing on note book
At 11 Shivaay and Dadi reach home , Shivaay saw everyone sitting in living room playing board game with Sahil

"Dadi aap itna jaldi kaise aa gai "Priyanka asked

"Billo na car ko jet kai tarah chaliya" Dadi said and hide her smile

" why you are still awake ?" Shivaay asked Sahil

" Kal holiday hai , aur Di rest kar rahi hain , Anika Di na bola get out " Sahil said making sad face
"I will freshen up and rest "he made excuse and walked towards Omkara 's room he stopped as he reached near to his ,he look around and then push the glass door it was dark in room
" what the wack , she is scared of darknes " he walked in to switched on the night lamp , " Anika " he murmur as finds the bed empty " where she has gone ? " he look around

" she can't walk or move " he panics , he was about to walk out of room when he heard her cry from close " shivvva " he follows the direction , quickly ran towards his pool side found her fast a sleep on couch ,she was murmuring in sleep " shivaay roka " in sleep she moved her hand the note book fall down on floor ,He kneel next to her to hear " Nahi " she shakes her head " Anika its a nightmare " he said gently , this time she jolt and scream with fear and tremble " Shivaay " she opened her eyes and look him bending over her she hug him dig her face in his nape" relax i am right here " he whispered and caress her face, without any hesitation he hug her back " car mein bomb tha " she whispered while hiding herself in his arms " blast hogaya " she murmur

" kuch nahi huwa dekho mein thek hoon " he said while caressing her back

" woh " she murmur while resting her head on his shoulder

" it was just a nightmare , a bad dream " he murmur and gently touch her cheek which was all wet with tears and sweat " bura sapna " he said

" mein dekha tha " she murmur again

" you saved my life , remember you push the car down the hill , it blast in air " he whispered , she lean and look at him he intensely look at her she gently touch his face " aap ko kuch nahi huwa tha " she murmur

" nahi not even a single scratch " he said huskily tried to hide his emotions " yaad karo you saved my life " he said politely " tum na muhje ko kuch hona nahi diya , not a single scratch " he huskily said ,He could still feel her breathing heavily as if she had run a mile

"Wait i will get water for you " he tried to free himself , she grasp his shirt and arm more tightly ,He could not stop mesmerizing her he fondly caress her back " how you came here ?" he asked her " fresh air hai yahan, wahan per mujhe ko bohot ajeeb lag raha tha akela "she said , he look down towards the note book as it pages flip with the breeze ,To his surprise he saw a familiar sketch of them , his eyes has fear and pain of losing her which she was having at presence ,she was lying in his arms , he remember she was same way resting in his arms when they were waiting for chopper,He glance at her she has drowse off , he swiftly picked her up and walked back to room ,In his way he saw the crutches

" how careless they all are ? That was the reason i was so restless while driving , he carefully made her rest on bed sat next to her caress her face " i will not leave you alone from now onward pinky promise" he smiled at his own thought , he again look at the sketch , he runs his hand on it " that day i was sacred as you are today " he pull sofa close and held her hand in his a he seated next to her" we will kill this fear of losing each other together " he lean forward and kissed her forehead




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Edited by naddiya26 - 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Now Dadi tells him to go back Shiv irritated and asks her to meet her friend
with no choice she meets and comes back soon
Shiv is tired wants to rest
Dadi plan backfired on her
Anika is bored and lost
Aww cute Rudra he calls Love Angel Soumya and makes Anika talk to her
She immediately guesses that she is in love
But also feels restless
Asks Sahil and Rudra to go out
Sahil and all others playing in the living room
Anika alone I'm room feeling him and his smell and walks to the sofa
She is very restless to see him around
Wants to be near him
Shiv and dadi come back
He makes an excuse and goes to his room to meet her
Aww the way he panics when he doesn't find her on the bed and is dark
He then finds her in couch
She is having nightmare
Love the way u have expressed her scared and the emotions of both of them
Shivaay the way h caresses and see the pics she has made
Aww he carries her and kisses her forehead with a promise of killin there fear of losing each other is just wonderful
Loved the update
Continue soon

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