Shivika SS : Turning Point ( ch 12 page 20) 24 sep - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
awesome update darling dadi plan back fired shivaay is restless abt anika &vice versa rudra calling love angel and anika ignoring that she loves shivaay and shivaay take caring of her was awesome anika is so worried abt shivvay the last nice dear" we will kill this fear of losing each other together ".
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Amazing..loved the way love angel told and omg nightmare and shivaay reached in correct time..super continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
fantastic update...good to read your work again naadiya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
SUPERCOOL update
Pls update FAST and remember to PM me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Awww...
Atleast fanfics mei toh ShivIka ki story aage badh rahi hai!!
I love this story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Wonderful update full of ShivIka ;-) Simply loved it...:-) they both fear loosing each other...:-!
Hopefully they will realise their love for each other soon :-)

An amazing update by an awesomely amazing writer...continue soon :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Priyanka and Somya plan to watch movie at weekend night , they both took Sahil with them as he was asleep, Rudra accompany Omkara to his studio

" Anika di ko check nahi kiya ?" Rudra asked Om while dropping himself on the floor cushion

" what you think Shivaay na nahi kiya hoga " Om said in his causal way

" he was tried , he must be fast a sleep on your master bed " Rudra said and smirk

" bet lago ga " Om said and look back at him

" kaise bet " Rudra sat at once

"That right now Shivaay and Anika Di must be awake and talking " he said and smirk

" not possible " Rudra said and at once stand

" if you loss for next one week you will not talk about any girl " Om said

" Girls " he placed his hand on his heart " Girls are like oxygen for me " Rudra said

" okay then no protein shake " he said

" yeh kya hai , nahi dekhna aur na koi bet lagani hai " Rudra said started listing music

"Fine you wait here i will check and come " with out waiting Omkara walked out of room , walking through corridors he reached his bedroom, he find his bed neatly done as if no one has slept on it " Shivaay is not here " he walked towards Shivaay's bedroom , he stopped as there was pin drop silence , he peep in find the most adorable site Shivaay was fast a sleep while sitting on sofa next to Anika his feet were resting on the bed corner"i knew he must be here, his restless said "he properly closed the door and walked back to his studio

" Kya huwa bhai mila " he asked him while raising his eyebrows

" Bhai rooms mein hain " he said sadly

" shit mein na bet kyun nahi lagai" Rudra curse himself . Om concentrated on his work

" you sleep here today " he said Rudra nod and stretch his legs

" i dont want they feel awkward" he said and smiles




"Sahil choro muhje ko " she murmur and tired to move his arm in sleep " kahin nahi jao gai Sahil " she murmur and push but failed , she opened her eyes " Sahil na kaise itna tight pakra hai " she saw Shivaay sleeping next to her , his arm was snaked around her waist he was fast a sleep lying on his stomach

" yeh yahan kya kar rahan hain " she at once look at towards the door it was closed " yeh wapise kab aai kaise , aur mein " she tried to think but could not recollect a thing , "agar kaise na dekhe liya hum ko iss saath " she panics and tried to free herself , but failed as his grip on her waist became more firm " Shivaay aap apna room mein ja kar soai " she whispered ,he didn't moved ," waise room tou in ka hain , mein in ka room mein hoon " she murmur ,she noticed he was dress in his three piece ,still his tie was hanging around his neck " yeh galti se aa kar apna room mein so gai hain " she couldn't stop herself staring him in dim night lamp" mein kya karo " she look towards the door and then at clock " 2 am " she loosen the knot off his tie and opened the first button of his shirt ,she slide a cushion under her head " change bhi nahi kiya , lagta hai bahot thak gaya hain , she said to herself in concern " sara din drive kia hai car " she murmur while mesmerizing him

" mein tou wahan pool side per thi ? muhje ko yahan la kar kon aaiya hain " she tried to think , unintentionally runs her fingers in his hairs, He in sleep move more close to her she could feel his breath over her skin a

shiver run down her spine she tried to move aside but fails

"Shivaay please aap apna room mein ja kar soai "She whispered nervously ,she became restless as her try went in vain , and on the contrary he tighten his grip over her waist " Hello mein koi pillow yeh cushion nahi hoon " she whispered as she was scared if someone walked in listening her " kya yeh mera saath aise soai gai " she murmur and heard foot steps approaching close to the main door

"Utha na koi aa raha hai" She shakes his arm but failed to wake him " inn ko kaise chupao " she quickly pull the quilt over themselves

Privyaka peeped in , Anika tightly squeezed her eyes and held Shivaay arm which was wrapped around her " please koi Shivaay ko na dekha " she murmur

" why Anika is sleeping in middle of bed,, where i will sleep ?mujhe ko iss ko disturb nahi karna chaiya " Privyaka said in sleep voice without waiting walked out of the room on her way she switched off the night lamp

As Anika heard door being closed she removed the quilt and opened her eyes and find darkness all around , she quickly squeezed her eyes and held his arm more firmly " sona daiti hoon agar utha aur muhje ko iss big room mein akela chor kar jana laga tou mere tou heart fail ho jai ga " she murmur " subha tou mein inko thek karo gai , sara din na aik call , na text , aur ab " she murmur , she kept on staring towards the door , when she drowse off she dint remember

" what the wack ?" Shivaay said loud while lying straight on bed she smiled as he quickly left her and wipe his face ,he finds her peeping out of quilt ,she quickly hides as he lean over her " thora se tou tha " she said from behind

" dekha koi aa jai ga aap room mein ja kar sojai " she said from behind the quilt ,he pull it with full force "is this the way to wake someone " he picked up glass the empty glass ,she giggle " pee liya mein na " she smiled

" stop smiling " he said and wiped his face with the quilt

"mein aap ko raat 1:30 se utha rahin hoon " she said at once " 8 baja gaya hain please aap jai koi dekhe laga " she said while looking at the door , Shivaay hides his smile and drop back on bed ,he closed his eyes " utha na please, aap tou pani bhi khatam ho gaya hain " she shakes his shoulder , he kept his face straight " Shivaay please phir na soai " she turn toward him and said " mein bhi utha ka sofa tak nahi ja sakti " she tried to sit, he snake his arm around her waist and bend over her " dare not think of it " he was an inch away from her face ,she blink her eyes quickly and nod, he drop back his head on the cushion

"Shivaay please jai yahan se , koi aa jai ga " she panics

" muhje ko Fariq nahi parta " he said tighten his grip over her waist

" dekha mein koi aise larki " she could not complete her sentence

He turns toward her " tou kya mein koi aise waise larka hoon " he intensely look in her eyes and said

"Mera matlab hai ka " she blink her eyes as she could not see in his Grey eyes which has changed color

" kya matlab hai " he asked huskily

" raat ko khud bola Shivaay dont leave me " he imitated her

" mein na bola " she asked him in shock

" nahi mein na bola " he said while keeping his face straight

" mein na aap se kahan aur aap na meri baat sunlee " she asked him , he find her distracted

" yes stop blaming me, all is your mistake" he said

"My mistake aap room mein kyun aai ? Kya mein na aap ko call kiya tha? She tried to sit He without waiting helps her fixed a pillow behind her back ,She gave him a weird look " dont look at me like that , i am only helped " he said

"Help mangai thi kya mein na ? She said

He ignored her question

" khud room mein aai , khud soai gaya aur galti sari meri hai " she murmur loud enough so that he could hear

" what you were doing at pool side ? " he asked angrily

"Woh mein " she bites her lips and said " agar kuch ho jata tou " he asked her

" dr categorically said to rest not to walk around till they allow you " he said angrily

" aap yahan la kar aai tha" she asked him

"Nahi chopper aaiya tha"He said annoyingly

"Kanchi eyes wala" She giggle ,He gave her an angry look

" why you tried to walk ?" He said

"Pehla aap bola aap kyun aai yahan" Both look in each other eyes

"They heard someone coming " jai na " she pushed him

" raat ko tou mein na aap ko chupa diya tha , ab possible nahi hai,

"She look at the door and said ,He hides his smiled and fixed the pillow

"Kya kar raha hain aap , kis ka wait kar raha hain " she said

"So raha hoon , aaj sunday hain "He said

"Jata hain yeh mein uthoon "she said while giving him warning

He jump out of bed ,without waiting he opened the door

" bhai aap " Priyanka said " she is your friend it was not your duty to stay with her " he scold her " bhai woh " she look back at Anika who was looking at Shivaay's in shock"Where is that attendant ? It is quarter to 9 when she will come ?" he said huskilyii

He turn back at Anika smirk at her and walked out

Priyanka walked in with long face " sorry Anika " she said

Koi baat nahi tumhara bhai tou bus aise he bolta hai " she said ,she quickly hides Shivaay's wallet , cell and tie under her pillow

Shivaay find the room empty he walked in and drop himself on bed " i slept next to her and why i could not sense it " he asked himself " i never sleep that sound , i always wake up if someone is around me " he said to himself , he search for his cell " i left there " he again started thinking " i was sitting on sofa next to her, how i reach to bed" he shakes his head " i must say sorry to her, she must be feeling awkward " he walked back towards his room

"Bhai aap ko kuch chaiya " Priyanka asked him ,he shakes his head ," Anika Di kai helper is inside" she told him as she was standing outside , he return back to Om's room

" how to return his things ? " she murmur as he heard his voice

"Anika tum thek ho" Priyanka asked her as she walked in " mujhe ko bhook lag rahi hai . raat ko bhi dinner nahi kiya " Anika said

" Wait i will bring breakfast for you " Priyanka said and with out waiting she walked out

Anika look towards the door " ab aa kar apna cell la jai na " she said

In Om's bedroom

"Kahan se aa raha ho bhai , sari raat kahan tha"Om asked him as he saw him coming in room smiling

He didnt replied and went to freshen up "Bhai yeh smile aur iss ka raaz tou jana para ga " he quickly walked out of room " Anika di will sure tell me " he said at door he bang with Ishaana , both stand and rub their forehead

" woh sorry mein late hogai " she said , without answering her he walked in room

" dekha next time aise nahi hoga " she said

" i dont think you will get any chance for next time " Shivaay said from back

Ishaana give him a scary look " it is in your contract that you should be here by 8:30" he said

" woh Sunday tha " she makes baby face and said

" Shivaay rehan dana "Anika said from back ,Shivaay look back at her "mmm tumhara kehna per i am giving her last chance " he said

Omkara look at them in surprise

Priyanka walked in with the tray of her breakfast , Shivaay stopped her " who is going to eat all this ?" he asked her

" Anika didn't had dinner last night, so i brought this for her " she said , Shivaay look at her and then towards Om and Priyanka " have milk, till i send your break fast" he walked away

"Shivaay bhai Anika di ka liya breakfast banaya ga "Om asked Priyanka she nod " aik raat mein yahan kya hogaya hai Rudra hum to sota ra gaya aur hamara bhai ko Ishq hogaya "



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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Beautiful update
Om and Rudra talk
OM knows Shiv very well he tells Rudra that shiv must be with Anika and as guessed he was there
Aww love how he quietly walks away with a smile
Aww Anika thinks it's Sahil but finds Shivay sleeping near her
She is worried if someone sees them
But then notices how tired he looks
Wow love the way she opens his tie and shirt button
Caresses her hand in his hair
Tried to wake him but he doesn't even move
which makes her restless
Priyanka comes but she hides themselves in a blanket and she goes away turning lights off
Awww loved the way he had his hands on her
Hahahah Anika wakes him up with water
He wakes up and looks at her and when she asks him to get up and go away he falls back in bed and and puts his hands on her waist awww love this
and his farak nahi parta is cherry on top
Oh boy Shivay is in love
Anika asks him to go but instead he lies there and looks at her and says how she asked him not to leave her last night
He's loving her cute angry face and smirks
Aww Priyanka see him in room but he in turn scolds her for not taking care of her friend
and leaves from there with a smile and continues smiling while going to OM room
OM surprised to see him smiling
comes to Anika room but collides with Ishana
Shivay comes and scolds her about to fire her but Anika stops him and aww baby Shiv gives her one chance
Shiv baba angry at Anika for not having her food now he will make breakfast
Haha love OM saying hum sote reh Gaye and Shivay ko pyaar ho gaya
Wonderful update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
I have just read all the parts dear and I love this story❤️
You have created such a beautiful connection between Anika and Shivaay👏
The bonding between OmRu, Priyanka and Anika is amazing!👍🏼
I love their bonding!
I am so glad that OmRu and Priyanka have realised that Shivaay loves Anika.
Now I am just waiting for Shivaay to realize
Please do continue dear!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Oh my god I just love this ff it's just so cute!!!!!
Continue soon and pm me if possible

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