SS | Lore of The Love Angel [Upd P10: 05/08] - Page 5

Lovely chapter

Awww soumya is so sweet lovely update

Omg this is amazing..loved it...continue soon

that was wonderfully written this is the first ss that i am reading in this forum and wow did i hit a jackpot or what <3 i felt sorry for bela / Ishana and i am not even a huge fan of her. atleast as of now. i think i will sympathize with her as she reaches this stage in the show.

This was so beautiful! Loving this concept! It is great to see Saumya in all her glory! Her confidence, empathy, sensitivity...I loved the layered way you portray both her in the studio doing what she does best and Ishaana's dilemma. Can't wait to read your next update.

Great writing! that was so well done! Poor Ishaana! I really felt for her! And poor Arjun LOL!

the part was way too sweet!

Originally posted by: shail_j15

So sweet! The way saumya handled ishaana and solved her problem, in her own way saumya is spreading light and healing people.it is very nice...such heart-warming story... Update soon yaar...i am waiting...and do pm me..

Originally posted by: crazyangeljen

I love it,please continue the story soon and pm me if you can when you update.

Originally posted by: BookWormV

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Hello!😊

I absolutely loved the prologue. The idea of each character sharing their innermost thoughts, questions, doubts with a stranger (not really) over Radio just seems so ingenious. The thoughts of each person that you put up in your prologue is so apt. I am sooo looking forward to reading all these radio conversations!

The first chapter was ah-mazing!👏 I loved this view point of Ishaana. The CVs have ruined this character for me. I really would have liked if they would have shown her as a ruthless conwoman and then shown why in flashbacks. Something of that sorts. Or a conwoman who changed because she fell in love - like here in this awesome SS. Hats off to you for this brilliant portrayal! The questions and doubts she has, how she started off with her real name before backtracking and saying Bela, how she is almost in tears and keeps questioning why, how Soumya is indeed playing her part as love angel, everything, everything was perfect! I loved Soumya yaar. I am hooked now. I cannot wait to read the remainingconversations with the xharacters. *rubbing hands with undisguised a😊nticipation and glee*

Please update soon.!

Cheers,
V

P.S. : Do you send PMs? Would love one on updates if you do. I have sent a buddy request.