The Realisation. Anshi OS

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Anjum.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Ok so this is just... ugh I don't even know how to describe it it's too beautiful! So natural and real and human and perfect. I loved it and I'm gonna go read it again but seriously please write a novel and publish it because you really could become the next bestselling author! This OS made me love Shivaay. Not because he was the caring brother that we see on screen, but because he finally accepted that he has lost the "game" and in doing so has finally let go of his pride.

Thank you for writing, and thanks for the pm! 🤗

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jarir2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

What will i say its brilliant.plz plz plz do write more in this concept.im so love with this os,its just natural and superb. 👏 👏

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twerping

@twerping

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Oh my god! The feels... Perfect path to Shivay's realization! This story is such a brilliant start to my day! Going to be in Ishqbaaz land now for the rest of the day! 😳

Thanks ever so much for the pm!

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travelholic

@travelholic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

beautiful! i want to read anika's realization too

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Mind blowing OS

Full on emotion realization of love

Oberois were hell worried for rudra as his flight went missing

But thank good he was saved

That incident made shivay to understand his love for Anika

On the hand Anika was so shocked seeing shivay at her home

More over he was devastated & even had fever

Anika took care of shivay whole night

That's gave shivay happiness

Just 1 thing made him worried if Anika reject him then he will be destroy emotionally

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Lovrd it yaar... hope to read anu realising her love afte dis

Nyt

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Saumya

@Sparklle801

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Yayy, finally the one of them realised that they are in love and made for each other. It took this much big incident to make shivaay realise his feelings, I wonder what it will take for anika 😃 ( don't wanna think about it as this job is yours 😉 ).
Thanks for the pm. Update was awesome.

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_Niki_

@_Niki_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Beautifully written! 👏

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iiROSii

@iiROSii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Spot on!

Can we get a part 2? Anika's realisation? 😳

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noor

@noor j

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

its amazing I wish you would write a second part for it...You know just to have him know that she loves him too like maybe after six months or something...I love your work...You actually make your characters come alive.

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