The blame game. Anika obBros OS (AN on page 6)

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

It was awesome work.I was trying so hard to control my laughter so that my brother won't think I had gone insane. I mean he was doing his work n I was reading your OS and time and again I was trying to cover up my giggling with cough but still it was slipping away.🤣.🤣.🤣

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chorabali

@YeojaNextDoor

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

OMG this was so hilarious and awesome loved it loved it !!!!! 🤣
item girl part was roflmao 🤣 i imagined shivaay in item girl like clothes lolll 🤣

yaar u r the best writer on this forum love u and keep writing more n more!!! 🤗

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844858

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Hilarious

Such a treat to read

OmRu came to Anika's rescue, how cute.

Also, that shayaari

Mein aksar chalata hoon apni bike

Mujhe pata tha Shivaay bhaiya karte hai Anika ko like 😆

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Antora

@andy1245

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

amazing can't stop laughing hope aisa kch show me v dhikhaye 🤣

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

🤣this feels sooo real

the way rudra by default thought it was shivay who broke it and then his reactions and plans🤣

supperrb

i am just lovvingg it❤️

item girl😆for a second i was like yeh kuch ko marwana chahti hai kya

I just wanted to pull rudras cheeks😳

and lastly bechara O😆 jab dekho musibat mein padta hai

Yaar i was laughing so much at every sentence

Thanks for giving us amazing and fabulous oneshots and stories🤗

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Omg!

Hahaha... I can't believe the response that too in just two days...like wow.

You people are amazing.

I loved each and every comment but since i can't reply to all these comments at once thanks to IF's policy for anti spamming i decided to do this instead.😆

You know when i first started weiting one of my friends had said to me that i write too serious and therefore i shall never be able to write anything funny.

So to me this kind of appreciation for my humour is something i cannot define in words. Plus the fact that i was appreciated for keeping in line with the characterization of each of the characters was something really great.

Especially my darling Rudra. I was worried i had written him out of character since he is a character that leenesh mattoo brought to life, someone who i feel falls flat on paper but the expressions make him come alive.

Okay i know i am ranting but yeah its just that i am so happy right now.

Love all of you. Each and everyone who viewed, liked and/or commented on this. I appreciate all the long comments especially since i know how much time you'll gave to me from your busy schedule.

So keep encouraging me and i shall keep writing for you.

Love

Soumya.

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

U r a ROCKSTAR Soumya!! Wonder where u get such super ideas!! Hilarious to the core!!!

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
U r a ROCKSTAR Soumya!! Wonder where u get such super ideas!! Hilarious to the core!!!

Haha...thank you.

I have been told i have an overimaginative brain😆

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Fireflake

@Fireflake

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Haha! This one was totally epic! 🤣
It was hard to stop laughing throughout.
Shivay trying to be smart huh? But what to do, Rudra and Om are way smarter. 😉
Anika is so lucky. Both Rudra and Om did their best to protect her from Shivay's wrath.
Rudra making up for the mistake he did, that makes him extra sweet.
This was incredibly entertaining. 🤣
The dialogues seemed like as if they were written right from the script just for them. It was that good. 👏
As always, I loved it! 👍🏼

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Fireflake
Haha! This one was totally epic! 🤣
It was hard to stop laughing throughout.
Shivay trying to be smart huh? But what to do, Rudra and Om are way smarter. 😉
Anika is so lucky. Both Rudra and Om did their best to protect her from Shivay's wrath.
Rudra making up for the mistake he did, that makes him extra sweet.
This was incredibly entertaining. 🤣
The dialogues seemed like as if they were written right from the script just for them. It was that good. 👏
As always, I loved it! 👍🏼

😆

Thanks a lot...yes my Rudra is too cute...he inspired me to write this😆

Well thank you again for praising my dialogues.

Your comments make me smile😆

I shall keep writing and entertaining you i guess😆