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mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Messi2
oh god Nikki...its soo intense ...am soo rooting for dis to happen from now...if O leaves it should be with anika ...and dat last part ...lakshman choosing sita...wow just splendid amazing

Hullo there!

I am glad you liked it. Thanks a lot for commenting. It means a lot!

Niki

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Amazing!
are you going to continue it? Like a backstory and what happens after? I know it's a One Shot but do continue if u can and want😆

Hello there!

Thanks for giving it a chance.

Continue???

*thinks deeply*

Let's see😉

Niki

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Meself
I love it and this is stunning piece is dedicated to me! I will write my heart out in this one!

Yes...and I will be waiting for your 'heart out' 😈

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: -Amri-
Wow. So poignant. Kudos on this well-crafted and emotionally wrenching piece.

Hullo Amri!

thanks a lot for reading this and giving it a chance.

Niki

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: roheena_d
wowo so intense ❤️ and the end beautiful, no words to describe this
super awesome 👏

Hullo Roheena!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Niki

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: -Panda-
Oh my freaking God!
This was brilliant, truly brilliant.
It was so beautifully penned.
The first few lines, gave me major 'Paulo Coelho' vibes.
I love how you talked about sometimes paths choosing people, rather than the vice versa.
The entire piece was so painful, yet I can't stop smiling because of how beautiful it was. You know the rush, you get after reading or watching something really good, that.
Also, Omkara and Anika, I have such a soft spot for these two and this made the soft spot, softer😭
I feel like, Anika and Om can really be each other's backbones and stand with eachother when life goes wrong.
Also, the last line. I can't.
You have some talent, lady. And yes, I'm jealous😆

Oh my freaking God!

Such a beautiful comment😆

Paulo Coelho...😳

I am way flattered.

*ego gaining rapid increase ---- 75%*

I read these lines in a philosophical lecture where it was said that sometimes the goal and the path select the one who will walk through it and earn it. They kind of stayed with me and I thought why not put them here😉

Om-Anika have such potential and I will be the happiest if they are portrayed so by the cv's but I don't hold much hope.

The last line!!!!

It was actually the last minute touch😆

Niki