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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

This was so intense nikki...

Please continue nd show us flashback...

Loved it...om nd anika share a great bond

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

this is such a brilliant piece dear do write more like this

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OmkaraKiParvati

@OmkaraKiParvati

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I loved this. I totally loved it. Om listens to his heart rather than his brain. And am glad he chose the right over the wrong. Am glad Lakshman chose Sita over Ram..

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Mehreen Bushra

@_PanCake_

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wow seriously no words.

It was amazing superb awesome fantastic.

Really loved it

And the line "This time lakshman chose sita over ram" said ot all 👏

Edited by _PanCake_ - 9 years ago

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Mahalakshmi

@MahaSrilu

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

your one shots are sooo...gripping that I'll always leave page with greed...Greed of wanting more of this beautiful pieces of writing of yours.

LoVED it...and loved 'This time Lakshman chose Sita over Ram' more.

~Maha~

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Akshu

@AK_2010

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wow.!! What an intensity...!!! I'm flattered...

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Riddhima

@...Rhythsy...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Just amazing!!

Heart touching..

Keep writing more!! 😊

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Kriti

@KRITII

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

The last line killed it

Amazing Nikki👏

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shailja

@shail_j15

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Hey if you have time plz continue this story...i really want to see how Anika and om's friendship evolved...its depth and what made them to leave home...how Anika got married to shivaay? What about others??

Edited by shail_j15 - 9 years ago