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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a lot!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: shail_j15

Hey if you have time plz continue this story...i really want to see how Anika and om's friendship evolved...its depth and what made them to leave home...how Anika got married to shivaay? What about others??


Time I have in plenty...it is the plot that matters😆
If I get any good plot bunny, I will definitely continue!

Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: coolove

That was beautiful, I loved how you subtly built up the major reveal
Really another gem to add to your collection
As always keep writing


Thanks a lot...glad you liked it.
Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: crushcrushed

Oh my god nikki this was beyond beautiful ❤️ It was so intense.Loved each and every line of it.And the last lakshman chose sita over ram was ❤️ I can read this n number of times


The last line...man it is getting way successful😆😆
Thanks a lot for appreciating it.

Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kamalapushpa

The last line "lakshman chose sita over ram" conveys so much meaning. This bond between Om and Anika is so a treat to read. I love this point about Om that he chooses thw right over wrong.I so want to know what exactly happened that they chose to leave their house and how everything will go on after they left.

Loved it🤗


The last line is surely popular😆😆😆

I love the thought of a proper Anika-Om bond...loads of potential!

Thanks for appreciating it!
Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Sakura24

What did the blue eyed Oberoi do this time? :-/
Anyway I have never been more stunned than at the end of this one...I thought it was Anika and Shivay finally out but here the fiasco is something complicated;-)
Awesome writing...truly entertaining:-)
Love,
Sakura


Hullo there Snow Queen!

Shivaay...at first I started with that thought only about Shivika leaving.
The plot however took its own pace, kicked out Shivaay and brought in Om😆

You were stunned??? I am flattered now😳

Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: lourel24

Gosh!!!! It was so intense. i would love to have such scenes in show too.Obvioualy last line was the highlight of your os but the way u used it was what we call incredible. At once it evoked lot of emotions. Superb.


Thanks a lot for appreciating this...your encouragement matters a lot!
I would love such scenes in the show too but alas...cv's are unpredictable😕

Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: iamred

Holla Niki!
I'm so sorry for not reading this before but I can't help it! I always read your works when my brain and I form a truce for peace to prevail!
I'm so sick right now, that's what mom says anyway. But I think I'll be fine after reading more works on the forum! Sleep can wait.
So I read yours and to say that I love it would be an understatement! There is a high possibility of something of this sort actually taking place!
I mean Shivaay will obviously be the loved grey character even after he falls in love with Anika! And Omkara will still be the peacemaker!
Looking at how close Shivaay and Omkara are, there is bound to be a major fall out! And in that case, Shivaay would be most probably the wrong-doer if it's not a misunderstanding! I love Shivaay's character but I can't overlook his flaws! It helps me accept him as real!
I adore the way you portray Anika's relationship with Omkara and Rudra! So please, do write more!
It's almost vital to my survival!
Plus, I feel better and happier after reading this!
Much love!

XOXO
~Red

P.S. I am so very sorry for not posting the One Shot I have written for you. I know I promised to post it today but my brain and body won't cooperate with me! I'm working on it right now and if I complete it then I'll post it. Sorry, baby girl!


Hello dear Red!
I am glad you liked this...I tried my best to pen the way I imagined the scene.
Looking at the brothers...ShivKara are bound to have a major fallout and somehow I couldn't get rid of that feeling and this came to life.
Hope you are well now.
Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: oceanus85

Awesome OS.👏 Didn't expect that ending. I thought it was Shivaay and Annika. Also that last line about Lakshman choosing Sita over Ram was just wow. Your story was very well written.😃 I too hope you continue the story even though it is a one shot.


I surprised you than?? Heavily flattered😳😳
As for continuing it...let's see. Depends on plot bunnies😆

Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: jarir2010

superb os.write more plz. 👏 👏


Thanks a lot😊

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