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mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
This was so intense nikki...
Please continue nd show us flashback...
Loved it...om nd anika share a great bond

Thanks a lot for giving it a chance!

I am glad you liked it.

As for FlashBack...I planned it as an one-shot, but let's see

Niki

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: OlicityQueen
this is such a brilliant piece dear do write more like this

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

Niki

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: AngelicTomboy
I loved this. I totally loved it. Om listens to his heart rather than his brain. And am glad he chose the right over the wrong. Am glad Lakshman chose Sita over Ram..

I guess the last line is the favourite of everyone😆😆😆

And it was actually a last minute brain wave😆

Thanks a lot for appreciating it.

Niki

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: _PanCake_
Wow seriously no words.
It was amazing superb awesome fantastic.
Really loved it
And the line "This time lakshman chose sita over ram" said ot all 👏

Iss Last line ne toh sach mei baazi maar li😆😆😆

Thanks for the compliment.

Niki

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: MahaSrilu
your one shots are sooo...gripping that I'll always leave page with greed...Greed of wanting more of this beautiful pieces of writing of yours.
LoVED it...and loved 'This time Lakshman chose Sita over Ram' more.

~Maha~

Aww...and I am greedy for comments too😆😆

Last line again😆😆😆...it is a hot favourite.

Thanks a lot!

Niki