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crushcrushed

@crushcrushed

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Oh my god nikki this was beyond beautiful ❤️ It was so intense.Loved each and every line of it.And the last lakshman chose sita over ram was ❤️ I can read this n number of times

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

The last line "lakshman chose sita over ram" conveys so much meaning. This bond between Om and Anika is so a treat to read. I love this point about Om that he chooses thw right over wrong.I so want to know what exactly happened that they chose to leave their house and how everything will go on after they left.

Loved it🤗

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

What did the blue eyed Oberoi do this time? :-/
Anyway I have never been more stunned than at the end of this one...I thought it was Anika and Shivay finally out but here the fiasco is something complicated;-)
Awesome writing...truly entertaining:-)
Love,
Sakura

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Gosh!!!! It was so intense. i would love to have such scenes in show too.Obvioualy last line was the highlight of your os but the way u used it was what we call incredible. At once it evoked lot of emotions. Superb.

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iamred

@iamred

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Holla Niki!

I'm so sorry for not reading this before but I can't help it! I always read your works when my brain and I form a truce for peace to prevail!

I'm so sick right now, that's what mom says anyway. But I think I'll be fine after reading more works on the forum! Sleep can wait.

So I read yours and to say that I love it would be an understatement! There is a high possibility of something of this sort actually taking place!

I mean Shivaay will obviously be the loved grey character even after he falls in love with Anika! And Omkara will still be the peacemaker!

Looking at how close Shivaay and Omkara are, there is bound to be a major fall out! And in that case, Shivaay would be most probably the wrong-doer if it's not a misunderstanding! I love Shivaay's character but I can't overlook his flaws! It helps me accept him as real!

I adore the way you portray Anika's relationship with Omkara and Rudra! So please, do write more!

It's almost vital to my survival!

Plus, I feel better and happier after reading this!

Much love!

XOXO

~Red

P.S. I am so very sorry for not posting the One Shot I have written for you. I know I promised to post it today but my brain and body won't cooperate with me! I'm working on it right now and if I complete it then I'll post it. Sorry, baby girl!

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oceanus85

@oceanus85

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Awesome OS.👏 Didn't expect that ending. I thought it was Shivaay and Annika. Also that last line about Lakshman choosing Sita over Ram was just wow. Your story was very well written.😃 I too hope you continue the story even though it is a one shot.

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

superb os.write more plz. 👏 👏

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vidya29

@vidya29

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

*Res*

I will have to reserve this one.

I can't wrap my head around a fitting review.

This was sublime.adore it.

Will be back!

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

And yet again you amaze me.

I love your works for the sheer intensity of the emotions you convey through your words

This was amazing read. I have been busy lately to the point that I haven't slept for the last 48 hours and yet reading your OS made me smile for the beautiful relation Anika and Omkara's share.

Lovely work... especially the last line.

Love Soumya 😊

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: abhiya_12
Nikki it was beyond my words I simply loved it sorry I didn't find best word than love 🤗

It was amazing
This time lakshman chose siya over Ram
This simple line won me ❤️

Wish they show this kind of relationship between Om and Anika

Hullo there Rev!

You always hog the first place...pattern eh?😆

Thanks for reading and commenting. Writing about IB characters has become a habit for me😛

And I want to see Om-Anika relationship a lot. They can be awesome siblings...but CV's🤢

Niki