Originally posted by: vidya29
Hey Lila,
Sorry I am late.I'll start with the 4th chapter first:
The entire premise is so sensual,yet you manage to bring in humor.But I adore the kind of intimacy in which you can fall into peals of laughter.
Ishana is such a straightforward character that I love the fact that she doesn't think things through.Her actually coming up with a way for Om to complete the structure was a nice touch. I just love the entire playing with clay and the blindfold...edsfkchditskclhxzyx!love it.I really haven't learnt how to describe such scenes.It was passionate,consuming,awkward and a lot more.loved it.
Chapter 5:
Ishana is the boss.Dhokla is my favorite food!
I love your Ishana.She isn't marred by majburi.She is unapologetically herself.The kiss was hot.her reaction was hotter.you ended it too soon!
Do write more.you write well,especially comedy.I will read it.pakka!
Take care.
Vidya, my darling🤗
Thank you so much for your lovely review.
I absolutely agree with you on the fact that the best relationships are the one where there's passion and lots of laughter.
Anyone who can turn you on and make you laugh like there's no tomorrow- yes, please.
When I read my story again, I wasn't sure of how well I could portray what I had in mind for Ishaana, but I'm glad you could get that. She's a girl who has her reasons for what she does, but she's grown beyond that, accepted it, and owns it.
Heuuhheee, glad you liked the blindfold sculting session.
Again, thankyou for your review. 😳
Also, it's great that I met such wonderful people through this story😉
Lotsa Love,
Lila
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