Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya
Hie there:) Hi there😆
When I had read the previous parts , I had predicted this story to end on a heavier note.But man did you surprise me?! ..What a lovely end!!
Yes, initially I'd also thought that a heavy ending wou be the only logical ending. But, then, I felt that maybe it doesn't have to be. People can accept each other even if they don't accept the things they do. It's how life works.
The beginning part was HOT! The passion igniting every passing second between the two strangers ( MORE than strangers ) could be felt deeply. The desire to get close was so strong but written so beautifully that one could feel the connection that was so much more profound than just lust or infactuation. I loved the bold Ishana ,who took the first step breaking every little ounce of control Omkaara had. The kiss , undoubtedly was raw and passionate, yet held a softer emotion where for once both of them had forgotten all their miseries ,losing themselves into each other ,healing each other a bit.
I'm so glad you got that, that was exactly what I was going for. I wanted to showcase the raw passion and need to be with each other. How their bodies along with their souls craved for each other. Kissing a person you've just met is often looked down upon, but I feel that sometimes you can know certain people in a moment better than you can know others in years. Also, these moments of passion are so rare, and life short, why let 'em go?
The ending couldn't have gotten better. Both of them instead of beating about the bush ,came out clean and clear about their feelings was something I really liked, credits to you for writing it so well, with a touch of shyness and humor at the same time.
*Blush Blush* Yes, I wanted to make sure it didn't look unrealistic with Omkara suddenly being okay with lies and conning. They both needed to be self aware of the people they were and willing to work through it. Awww, thank you😳
Dhokle ki kasam?! Phir toh sculpture pakka pura hoga...ya phir shayad nahi !😳😳...Lets leave it to them to decide that :P
Hahahaha! I reckon, the sculpture isn't going to be done anytime soon😉. But let's give them some privacy for that😆Beautiful piece! Would love to read more on Ishkaara from you :)
Love,
Shreya
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
