AnShi TS: Khoya Khoya Chand(ch2-pg3) *complete*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue:

''Main sada aapki hi rahungi,Shiv.. Aap jab bhi mujhe pukarenge,main humesha aapko aapke paas hi milungi..''

''Shivaay,aaj toh Bhagwan keliye apni dil ki aawaaz sun le.. Rok le Annika ko...''

''Bhai,please aaj apne ego ko apne dil par haavi mat hone dijiye.. dikha dijiye puri duniya ko ki Shivaay Singh Oberoi ki Ishqbaazi kya hai...''

''Agar aaj tune meri bari poti bahu ke saath nahi aaya na,toh,yeh ghar ke darwaaze humesha keliye bandh hojayenge tere liye...''

These thoughts crammed up in his mind. He is not being able to take the right decision. For the first time in his life,Shivaay Singh Oberoi is taking time to decide for a decision that can change his life... for good..

He remembered his Daadi saying that how his Dadaji proposed her and they got married. His Daadi and Dadaji were the most ideal couple he came across.. He always looked upto them.

He was scared of love and commitment because of the fight that started between their parents' to reach the ultimate zenith,i.e,to make the eldest son the heir apparent of Oberou business empire. Because of this,he never fell in love until Annika entered his life...

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On the other side:

"Annu,jaldi taiyaar hoja... Baraat kabhi bhi aajayegi.." her relative reminded her.

"Annu,woh nahi aayega... Samjha kar mera baccha.. Uski intezaar mat kar..." Annika's father consoled her.

"Papa... Aisa mat kahiye... Shiv zarur aayenge aur mujhe le jaayenge yahaan se vida karke... Itna toh mujhe vishvaas hai mere pyaar mein.." Annika smiled with tears in her doe shaped eyes.

She looks towards the moon and says in her mind, "Aapko aana hoga Shiv,aapki Annu ko lene"..

"O Jaanaa..." plays...

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Index:

prologue: pg1
ch1- pg3
Edited by VidyutKiDeewani - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey,
That was a fast start. All the best for this FF.
Interesting change with Anika not being an orphan.

All the best for the journey ahead. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A ff on shivIka... amazing... d starting is amazing... write more plzz Om me yo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey anika

This ila Tanwar remember we met in arjun forum good to see you here...

Abput your ss i love the prologue eager to read it and comment

I like the way you introduce the story and rudra's motivation and daadi's warning just missed Om's verdict here why you left him... half of the population in Ishqbaaz is die hard fan of him or you can say deewani just like me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome starting.. Totally mindblowing..
Update next soonish.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow an anshi story...I was badly waiting to read something on AnShi..finally you started thisstory
Interesting prologue and very excited for part 1...update soonish😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

hey anika

This ila Tanwar remember we met in arjun forum good to see you here...

Abput your ss i love the prologue eager to read it and comment

I like the way you introduce the story and rudra's motivation and daadi's warning just missed Om's verdict here why you left him... half of the population in Ishqbaaz is die hard fan of him or you can say deewani just like me...



i added Om's verdict... ''Bhagwaan keliye'' se start hota hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani



i added Om's verdict... ''Bhagwaan keliye'' se start hota hai.


OOPSS Svoh mix up ho gya... Rudra k saath naam mention nhi and simple line toh pata nhi chala
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start dear... .pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I would love to read more do continue

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