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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lifesucks28

Loved it...looking forward to more ....❤❤❤

P.S. i am glad u stated Vansh wont be a typical itv Male like he became the one after the shootout...almost completely stopped using his brain🤣


Nope this Vansh has brains and no limits

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Originally posted by: merryyura

This sounds interesting!!!!

Wait for the next updates..


Thank you , will try and update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbiebarbie11

Awesome introduction👍🏼


Interesting very interesting😆


Hopefully can keep it interesting

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you all for the support, please do continue to encourage viz your comments. There is still another chapter before our beloved RIANSH meet, till then enjoy the story


AJAY RAI SINGHANIA always wanted to be a singer, but destiny had decided a different path for him. He joined the family business, the one which was laced with blood of his father and well of many other loyalists. He hated every moment of it but had to endure the same as there wasn’t a way out for him but then he met her. Uma was everything he wanted in his life; he was happy for a while; their three wonderful children were a blessing before the tragedy struck. His house of cards was destroyed, and he didn’t even bother to pick up its ashes. He had immersed himself in the business forgetting about the kids at home, they had a nanny who he would have never thought would become his wife. Every time he should have hugged his kids, he immersed himself in alcohol, every time they needed him, he ushered them out, and that what lead to this. He was attached with wires and tubes keeping him alive but none of his children bothered to visit him, maybe he did deserve that too. Uma's betrayal had left a hole in his heart which even the luxuries of the world couldn’t fulfill but unfortunately, it wasn’t her betrayal as much as it was his lack of trust. His Uma hadn’t left them but was forced to leave them, but never did he try to find out the truth and moved on with his life. The day she breathed her last in his arms, shot in her heart that loved him, her white saree drenched in blood is the day he died too. Now it's just a body that needs to leave this world but before that he needs to inform VANSH the truth, but he can’t, he has no strength left. He always blamed him for everything but now he understands he was just a child. He thinks about the day when Sia was kidnapped while Vansh was supposed to protect her, but he couldn’t. Everyone was inconsolable but Vansh hated himself, blamed himself, and him being the father didn’t console the little boy but hated him all his life. They had found Sia, they had paid the money but her youngest couldn’t walk anymore. Her wheelchair was proof of his failure and burning him every day yet him being the father didn’t even try to console him once but blamed him always. It was too late now; he could beg for forgiveness but before that he needed to make sure that UMA killers were punished. The father in him rose after many years giving him the strength to press the bell and call someone for the one last time

SIA was a happy child, she had everything and yet a part of her soul was missing. During every treatment she tried to stand up not for her sake, she could sit in the wheelchair but for her Vansh Bhai. She knew the story, such secrets are never hidden, they just flow across like a Chinese whisper. She knew that she was kidnapped under his watch, the child who would wake at the drop of a pin kept sleeping while she was taken away. She knew that their mother left them soon after, her kidnapping brought her betrayal forward and she lost the family. She was too young to understand but as she grew up, understanding dawned upon her that families were to be bonded by love however they stayed together due to blood and most important money. Her house was a fortress guarded by the best and yet she made peace with it like she always had done, after all this fortress aligned her with Angre. She knew how to be content, tomorrow would be another day, a new doctor, a new set of sessions, and a new hope in everyone’s eyes waiting for her to stand up.

She was standing at the crossroads with a choice to make, she had promised herself to Kabir despite not loving him. She always heard that marry the one who loved you but even today after agreeing to his proposal there was a hole in his heart which burned every time, he tried to come closer. There may be a day where she would willingly go in his arms like lovers and not maintain the boundaries as friends however not today. Today he lies battered and broken, a shell of a person who once saved her life, and maybe that’s the reason she agreed to take up the proposal from the VR company as a personal physiotherapist to one of the daughters. She got the employment letter every month from last year but declined and this time she accepted; she must pay a debt. Kabir saved her life and she agreed to venture into the VR mansion. He wanted his sister who was captive there and she just needed to get the location to him. She wasn’t a trained spy however she could inform him about her suspicions and once her job is finished, she would be back to her life with or without Kabir which only time could tell.

He was in turmoil, all his childhood he had only seen hate in his father’s eyes but today when he summoned him he sensed the man who loved him once but he himself ceased to feel anything for him. Today when he told him that his mother never betrayed but was a pawn like him the agony and the deeply buried pain started rising again. The feelings of 10-year-old Vansh surfaced who only wanted the comfort of her mother’s arms and his father’s support. He couldn’t turn back time and neither he could allow himself any respite. This pain made him who he was, it made him stronger it made him lethal. He might have always defeated the enemies outside but still few lurked in the corners of the house biding their time to land the perfect strike. His father was dead, and his mother murdered, and it took them twenty years to know about it. Someone played a very where clever game but now he knew what he had to do. He needed to make sure she woke up, she needed to make sure that she tells him what he needs to know. He needed to ensure that Ragini tells him who sent him there and that would be the only clue he would need. The game had already begun, he would finish it and his prey won’t even know. He was at crosswords but any path he would choose would lead to his victory only.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Love it...❤❤ beautifully written....😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very interesting story! Do continue soon 😊

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interesting do cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: satanslove

Thank you all for the support, please do continue to encourage viz your comments. There is still another chapter before our beloved RIANSH meet, till then enjoy the story


AJAY RAI SINGHANIA always wanted to be a singer, but destiny had decided a different path for him. He joined the family business, the one which was laced with blood of his father and well of many other loyalists. He hated every moment of it but had to endure the same as there wasn’t a way out for him but then he met her. Uma was everything he wanted in his life; he was happy for a while; their three wonderful children were a blessing before the tragedy struck. His house of cards was destroyed, and he didn’t even bother to pick up its ashes. He had immersed himself in the business forgetting about the kids at home, they had a nanny who he would have never thought would become his wife. Every time he should have hugged his kids, he immersed himself in alcohol, every time they needed him, he ushered them out, and that what lead to this. He was attached with wires and tubes keeping him alive but none of his children bothered to visit him, maybe he did deserve that too. Uma's betrayal had left a hole in his heart which even the luxuries of the world couldn’t fulfill but unfortunately, it wasn’t her betrayal as much as it was his lack of trust. His Uma hadn’t left them but was forced to leave them, but never did he try to find out the truth and moved on with his life. The day she breathed her last in his arms, shot in her heart that loved him, her white saree drenched in blood is the day he died too. Now it's just a body that needs to leave this world but before that he needs to inform VANSH the truth, but he can’t, he has no strength left. He always blamed him for everything but now he understands he was just a child. He thinks about the day when Sia was kidnapped while Vansh was supposed to protect her, but he couldn’t. Everyone was inconsolable but Vansh hated himself, blamed himself, and him being the father didn’t console the little boy but hated him all his life. They had found Sia, they had paid the money but her youngest couldn’t walk anymore. Her wheelchair was proof of his failure and burning him every day yet him being the father didn’t even try to console him once but blamed him always. It was too late now; he could beg for forgiveness but before that he needed to make sure that UMA killers were punished. The father in him rose after many years giving him the strength to press the bell and call someone for the one last time

SIA was a happy child, she had everything and yet a part of her soul was missing. During every treatment she tried to stand up not for her sake, she could sit in the wheelchair but for her Vansh Bhai. She knew the story, such secrets are never hidden, they just flow across like a Chinese whisper. She knew that she was kidnapped under his watch, the child who would wake at the drop of a pin kept sleeping while she was taken away. She knew that their mother left them soon after, her kidnapping brought her betrayal forward and she lost the family. She was too young to understand but as she grew up, understanding dawned upon her that families were to be bonded by love however they stayed together due to blood and most important money. Her house was a fortress guarded by the best and yet she made peace with it like she always had done, after all this fortress aligned her with Angre. She knew how to be content, tomorrow would be another day, a new doctor, a new set of sessions, and a new hope in everyone’s eyes waiting for her to stand up.

She was standing at the crossroads with a choice to make, she had promised herself to Kabir despite not loving him. She always heard that marry the one who loved you but even today after agreeing to his proposal there was a hole in his heart which burned every time, he tried to come closer. There may be a day where she would willingly go in his arms like lovers and not maintain the boundaries as friends however not today. Today he lies battered and broken, a shell of a person who once saved her life, and maybe that’s the reason she agreed to take up the proposal from the VR company as a personal physiotherapist to one of the daughters. She got the employment letter every month from last year but declined and this time she accepted; she must pay a debt. Kabir saved her life and she agreed to venture into the VR mansion. He wanted his sister who was captive there and she just needed to get the location to him. She wasn’t a trained spy however she could inform him about her suspicions and once her job is finished, she would be back to her life with or without Kabir which only time could tell.

He was in turmoil, all his childhood he had only seen hate in his father’s eyes but today when he summoned him he sensed the man who loved him once but he himself ceased to feel anything for him. Today when he told him that his mother never betrayed but was a pawn like him the agony and the deeply buried pain started rising again. The feelings of 10-year-old Vansh surfaced who only wanted the comfort of her mother’s arms and his father’s support. He couldn’t turn back time and neither he could allow himself any respite. This pain made him who he was, it made him stronger it made him lethal. He might have always defeated the enemies outside but still few lurked in the corners of the house biding their time to land the perfect strike. His father was dead, and his mother murdered, and it took them twenty years to know about it. Someone played a very where clever game but now he knew what he had to do. He needed to make sure she woke up, she needed to make sure that she tells him what he needs to know. He needed to ensure that Ragini tells him who sent him there and that would be the only clue he would need. The game had already begun, he would finish it and his prey won’t even know. He was at crosswords but any path he would choose would lead to his victory only.

Woah so everyone had some motives but really loving all of them
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Superb update👏

Waiting for the next one🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lifesucks28

Love it...❤❤ beautifully written....😊


Thank You :)

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