Ab Tere Bin Jee Lenge Hum - VM on Pg 24 - Page 9

Originally posted by: mehraan

Hey Dazz. 🤗..Im really gone actually...i dnt hve words to say how much i hve njoyed reading ur SS😳...its so true to the show n to the characters...im in awe of ur writing n the way u hve bought it into life...it jus luks im watching on my screen...Thanku for making it worthwhile for readers like us who craved for closure n justification to the real plot...!!Ur story is the best version of what it has to be in the first place...Really im grateful to u for that!!

Coming to the both chapters vich i havent commented...Viplavs n dhanis confrontation was beautifully written...Cud actually feel Dhanis outrage,angst n her emotions overflowing...really felt emotional ..wat a scene it was n Vipus reaction to it...He is as guilty as before n knowing Vidha his child has added more of a burden on him...i loved tis piece of writing ...intense n yet heartbreaking!!i loved how u weaved the subtle romance in between these two where he gazes at her n pecks her too...the attraction is still intact n Vipu cnt hve enough of her...!!Aftr so mny years she is still managed to draw him towards her n tats how Viplav was attuned to her in show...very much genuine...!

Viplav n Vidha scenes were cute...The bonding looked more real here than in the show...Looking more forward to their scenes now when Vipu is now aware of his kid...Vidhaan is here to voice out dhanis struggles n lead Viplav out of Tripathis trap..

Thanx for posting the pics of the dresses yaar...its gives us an insight how do they luk n imagining them bcmes much more easier...How i wish v got to see thm like this.. !!!

Hey Dazz pls update soon n i cnt wait for their Mus to get clear n a romantic hug or a paragraph or y not a chapter dedicating to their sweet making up...☺️ on khatiya

Originally posted by: zajedno

please, my dear, what sets earlier to write, because it really can not wait to read what we got going on here.

Originally posted by: pearl100

😆Hellooo Dazzy 🤗 First of all my hearty congratulations on your first fictional story !!! 👏

Yaar I'm in so so love with your story, its so CRISP N CLEAR to the point which is something I have always been searching for in any drama ⭐️...why have you hidden your talent from us yaar since such a long time...I loved the sequence of the incidents ...the way you presented the same little incidents like Vip n vidha meeting, the way dhani n vip met again in a diff manner... everything is so well written. 👏

The beginning of your chapter depicts the essence of it, its like every chapter has a very deep meaning to it. Plz make this a little longer than SS this is a req, I would really love to see how Vip n Dhani react knowing each others situation when they are in a position to listen n understand what they have gone through...so good to see you brought Vip's bro here else we hardly saw him in the show 😆 In the last chapter I had to find the dictionary 😆 plz agli baar thoda saral angrezi mai likho 😆 My last req can you plz plz plz divide a long para in to 2 or 3 parts , its very very diff for me to read such a lengthy para at once, I have to always save it in word n split it in parts else...I keep forgetting where did I stop while reading case I miss something in between.

You Hyd girls are doing a great job 😎😃😆 you, Mehr are fab writers, I'm soo proud of you 😃 Keep writing dear, will read some chapters at once n come back to comment, I'm highly impressed with your story n I rarely read any story more than once, when I get time I'm def gonna read yours for sure. You are brilliant writer, plz cont to the point story dear 😃 I love that part of your work. Cya again...Till then take care.

Oops excitement mai bhul gayi how are you dear 😆 how is sudha, mag, pearl akka ? Hope they are doing fine...😃

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Hope you're feeling better, Zajie! 🤗 You can take your time reading and comment at your leisure. I hope you like chapter 4! 😊

Originally posted by: zajedno

Frankly, I liked the most part 4 and you know why. Due to the strength of Danh was cleared when Viplav. I know of not guilty or a little feel what it's like when someone harasses a plea of not guilty. His view of the sea. It's the only thing he needs now. some inner strength is needed to his turbulent temperament to be suppressed. Interestingly, when she accuses him of something he was lost and trying to justify himself, and when she did it, he did not think he heard. It has the saying ...

What goes around, comes around...

Dazz, have you started to read the Dudha.

Originally posted by: awida

I am sorry for being late.

Just finished part 3 of your wonderful story.

I loved the way you pay full attention to each detail in your characters. I feel the enjoyment of reading a novel and watching a show in the same time.

I am happy that Viplav found Dhani , and Vidha. you described Viplav's feelings wonderfully, which made me feel for him.

I just hope Dhani doesn't become a man-hater like Suwarna.

Originally posted by: awida

After reading part 3 I couldn't wait anymore to complete part 4.

Gr8 writing Dazzy. The first meeting of ViDha after separation was huge. it made me want to shout and cry. what an emotional scene. I could reach to that place and see ViDha sad , and chattered.

Now I hope Viplav clears the misunderstanding soon..by his brother's help. He did a mistake and lost more than 5 very precious years of his life. no need to lose more.

Thank you very much Dazzy. You took the story to a better level after the leap. I wish cvs thought like you..and skip adding triangle tracks which are done to death.