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Mishfan

@Mishfan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: mehraan
Im really ngry with u !!!!!😡
Wheres the pic of chikangari nighty 😡

I wnted to see it badly😆😆

Mehr & Dazz...what's this Chikangari Nighty??? 😆

Something to do with the story...? Sorry for my lame question, but it sounds funny & I have not

yet read this FF...hence the query !

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: pearl82

U r a wonderful writer dazz👏..keep it up👍🏼 will b back with my comments soon😃

🤗 for my sweet friend!

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: mehraan
Im really ngry with u !!!!!😡
Wheres the pic of chikangari nighty 😡

I wnted to see it badly😆😆

Meri pyari si Mehr, this is for you. 🤗

Envision a length that extends past the knees. I forgot to add that Dhani's hair was tied in a loose braid. 😳

Ab yeh na poochna keh Viplav nai kya pehna thah. 😛 😆

Edited by ~DaZZ|ing~ - 8 years ago

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Mishfan

Mehr & Dazz...what's this Chikangari Nighty??? 😆
Something to do with the story...? Sorry for my lame question, but it sounds funny & I have not
yet read this FF...hence the query !

Chikankari is a form of white floral embroidery intricately done on white fabric. 😊 Mehr was referring to a night gown in her comment. 😆

Edited by ~DaZZ|ing~ - 8 years ago

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pearl82

@pearl82

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Meri pyari si Mehr, this is for you. 🤗

Envision a length that extends past the knees. I forgot to add that Dhani's hair was tied in a loose braid. 😳

Ab yeh na poochna keh Viplav nai kya pehna than. 😛 😆

Beautiful 😆

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: pearl82

Beautiful 😆

🤣

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AvaniVrinda

@AvaniVrinda

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Thanks for welcoming
😊
There is nothing from my side to contribute here :)
PS: Waiting eagerly for next chapters 😳

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mehraan

@mehraan

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Hey Dazzz...u kno wat ...i m really really ngry with u..cos u hid ur talent of beautiful writing...i want to tell u i shared with my twiiter frends who were part of forum too...cos im sure rhy wud njoy reading it the way u hve captured Vidha story so convincgly...This is how the story shud had been gripping n full of angst n intensity...always regret wat was postleap all about!

!N to make it really upsetting ur story doesnt hvemuch active readers around n how i wished u wrote it during thse times..Anyways i hve pasted it among our old forum members..

Coming to this chapter...I felt HOT... all thse emotions ,passion ,heartbreak were so real tat i cud feel them enacting right infront of my eyes..How wud Vipu see her or how dhani was flustered with his touches...Tats how their chemistry was...U cud xperience thse feelings in U...Vipu spending time with his daughter was endearing n sweet...Dhanis resistance to his advances were droolworthy...the last bit para was damn hot..n i jus lyv the groping part😳😳 ..Wat an intensity dear. ...Pls Dazz carry out the uncomplete task in ur next chapter..Vipus persistance to win her is smething tat i had been waiting for a long ling time in the show too vich was left midway ...

Hell ur one of the wonderful writers the forum have n how i wished u had made ur presence with this skill long time backcos ur talented n u deserve praises😃..pls continue. .!!luv u..😃

Btw tat nighty was sexy..😳 Cud imagine Vipus desire shooting up.. .😆

Edited by mehraan - 8 years ago

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: mehraan
Hey Dazzz...u kno wat ...i m really really ngry with u..cos u hid ur talent of beautiful writing...i want to tell u i shared with my twiiter frends who were part of forum too...cos im sure rhy wud njoy reading it the way u hve captured Vidha story so convincgly...This is how the story shud had been gripping n full of angst n intensity...always regret wat was postleap all about!
!N to make it really upsetting ur story doesnt hvemuch active readers around n how i wished u wrote it during thse times..Anyways i hve pasted it among our old forum members..

Coming to this chapter...I felt HOT... all thse emotions ,passion ,heartbreak were so real tat i cud feel them enacting right infront of my eyes..How wud Vipu see her or how dhani was flustered with his touches...Tats how their chemistry was...U cud xperience thse feelings in U...Vipu spending time with his daughter was endearing n sweet...Dhanis resistance to his advances were droolworthy...the last bit para was damn hot..n i jus lyv the groping part😳😳 ..Wat an intensity dear. ...Pls Dazz carry out the uncomplete task in ur next chapter..Vipus persistance to win her is smething tat i had been waiting for a long ling time in the show too vich was left midway ...

Hell ur one of the wonderful writers the forum have n how i wished u had made ur presence with this skill long time backcos ur talented n u deserve praises😃..pls continue. .!!luv u..😃

Btw tat nighty was sexy..😳 Cud imagine Vipus desire shooting up.. .😆

Meri pyari si Mehr, your comment has me on cloud nine. ☺️ Thank you for your endearing encouragement! 🤗 I decided to write this story because I just couldn't move past ViDha's magic and the failure of IKRS. I had such high expectations from this show in September when I first began watching that I couldn't believe the ultimate outcome of IKRS. I'm sure others were just as haunted as I was over the show. The show ended and I had pinned all of my hope on MR making his comeback sooner rather than latter. If you've noticed, the handful of people we did have on the forum left as soon as Mishal made his announcement about his production house. I know deep down inside several of us are still heartbroken. 💔 I started writing this story for all of my friends who felt ViDha's journey was incomplete. I'm happy you've shared this story with all of our old friends on Twitter. 😊 I hope I succeed in giving all Misha lovers some closure. 😳 It would also be very encouraging to hear from all of the silent members on the forum. 😊 I have a surprise in store for all of you in the next chapter. 😉 Love you too! ❤️

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#110

Part 5:

Hayee hayee dazz.. it killed me.. even before I could start with your part 5 of the story, the initial lines quoting 'Humein tumse pyar kitna" literally killed me and I am on the floor, blushing hard..😳 This song is one of its kind and I am absolutely in love with the melody, lyrics and the singer❤️

Hey what was that... Vidhaan was introducing Viplav to Dhani.. i just want to see these scenes onscreen.. This could have been a superb twist and the makers could have stretched such kind of tracks for a long time, both under the same roof, Viplav trying to figure out how Vidhu, Dhani are related to his own brother..These are too clinched concepts but audiences love all these.. Only if the makers had been a bit slow while progressing with the storyline..

Loved the father daughter scene too.. best Friends forever.. awww so cute..

and what a correct timing.. I would love to pat Mahhi for her 10 days trip.. 😆 honestly dazz such twists have been shown several times in several shows but still I am absolutely in love with all these.. always find something new in them and thanks a lot for introducing these in your SS..

I could literally feel viplav's frustration and agony seeing the bonding between dhani and Vidhaan.. and it was quite natural for him to react like that.. Already he was fighting desparately with his inner turmoil after being rejected by his wife and all these scenes before his eyes would do nothing more than robbing off his senses to think in a proper manner..

Wanna give a hug to that stranger who was flirting with Dhani😆.. The vidha scenes were amazing, feels great to imagine those scenes..

and Viplav was about to address Vidhu "his daughter", but for Vidhu he is her Best friend.. Good that extreme emotions did not knock down the sense in him and he immediately stepped back.. He should wait for the correct time and let Vidhu learn about her real daddy's identity first..

Hey another kishore kumar number..😳 hayee.. mere qatil, mere dildar☺️

love this song, "O saathi re".. there is a female version of this song by Asha Bhonsle.. Did you hear that?? If no then you must listen to that brilliant number.. Both the versions are beautiful..

loved the Vidha kiss, their intense scenes, increasing proximity.. love everything about the part.. Love every bit of your update.. What more shall I add? Dhani stroking Viplav's hair while kissing😆 The lines gave me goosebumps😆 Want to see that scene.. Dhani should have pulled out his buttons and shirt and throw them away..😆

Its wonderful, amazing, outstanding.. Ahhh love you dazz for such a great chapter and such an interesting story..

Awesome work.. appreciate your efforts dear.. and no need to hurry to finish off with this story.. Go slow.. your readers are enjoying.. Lets us enjoy like this for some more time😳

Will be back again for reading your 6th update..

Take care.. byee my dear mate🤗

P.S. hey dazz sorry.. i should have mentioned earlier..

before you start wondering who am I and think me to be a new reader of your SS, let me tell you i have changed my UN.. earlier it was barbie and now it has got my name in it..

abhi pehechana mujhe??😆😆

Edited by Titli_KK3148 - 8 years ago

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