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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

dazz dazz dazz,
Doctor sahiba ka kiya baat hain,
👏 👍🏼
Ur style is really great, and storytelling is getting better in every new episode.
I m loving the way u start ur chapters.unique I must say.
And reading ur story n imagining is like a dream coming true.that's what j wanted from sd makers, they failed to provide me, u r giving what I wanted.thanks mate.
Keep spreading joy in d forum.
Keep writing.
Take care.

Edited by simple2joy - 8 years ago

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awida

@awida

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Just finished reading part 2. I am sorry for being late again.

This is a very beautiful surprise to see that our lovely widows are still togather..helping each other..and living a good life.

The characters you introduced were effective. I am happy that you used the original story itself to come out with these characters. and I guess Vidhaan isn't in a good relation with his family. he doesn't know about Tripathis.

I hope to know about Viplav in the upcoming part. coz I missed him in this one.

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: awida
Just finished reading part 2. I am sorry for being late again.
This is a very beautiful surprise to see that our lovely widows are still togather..helping each other..and living a good life.

The characters you introduced were effective. I am happy that you used the original story itself to come out with these characters. and I guess Vidhaan isn't in a good relation with his family. he doesn't know about Tripathis.

I hope to know about Viplav in the upcoming part. coz I missed him in this one.

Awida! 🤗 You don't ever need to apologize for being late. Seeing your comments means a lot to me. 😊 The safed gang was an integral part of IKRS and its concept of women emancipation. I still don't understand why the makers chose to end all of their characters for the leap. Vidhaan's story is yet to come, but he has a key role to play in this story. You won't miss Viplav in chapter three. 😉

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zajedno

@zajedno

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

wow, wow, you did it to bring me and different roles. I like the choice of actors and Vidha is as stubborn as her parents. I think if it in your story have a big role in everything. Although this is normal but I think it'll give you her greatest role. Rakshas fell in love with a little girl who was captivated by the first sight. How strange genetics and kinship. Viplav is paying attention to Vidhu, and that another child was concerned whether approached? In particular, he drew attention to her word Rakshas, I think at that point and felt a connection with Vidhu although himself was not aware of what kind of relationship. I hope you will soon write a sequel because I can not wait to read your story. I like.

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Dear dazzling doctor,
I have unreserved my comment.
Ohh and thanks for giving partners to raj n su.

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: simple2joy
dazz dazz dazz,
Doctor sahiba ka kiya baat hain,
👏 👍🏼
Ur style is really great, and storytelling is getting better in every new episode.
I m loving the way u start ur chapters.unique I must say.
And reading ur story n imagining is like a dream coming true.that's what j wanted from sd makers, they failed to provide me, u r giving what I wanted.thanks mate.
Keep spreading joy in d forum.
Keep writing.
Take care.

Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Simple! 🤗 The whole point of the lyrics in the beginning is to set the mood for that chapter. 😉 I'm happy to hear you say like the introductions. 😊 We're halfway through the story, Simple. I hope I'm able to do justice to this story in the second half. 😳

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Magnolia2

@Magnolia2

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Hi Dazz😃

Congrats dear for once again giving an enchanting chapter for this amazing story... I'm loving the stylish avatars of Dhani, Suvu and Rajlakshmi who are now women who hold their own and are truly empowered -spiritually as well as financially...Their situation now is enviable and they are to be looked upto...This is what the makers should have focussed on!

I liked the way you gave distinctive characteristics and backgrounds to both Abhi and Arun...They sound and look like perfect companions for the two girls!

You portrayed the emotions of Viplav at the sight of Dhani and being mesmerized afresh by her transformation really well...

The best part was of course Viplav's first encounter with his little angel! This was as sweet and enjoyable as the chocolate ice cream...

Looking forward to the next part..

P.S.-The fact you embellish your story with pictures and songs makes it a delight to read and visualize at the same time!😊

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: zajedno
wow, wow, you did it to bring me and different roles. I like the choice of actors and Vidha is as stubborn as her parents. I think if it in your story have a big role in everything. Although this is normal but I think it'll give you her greatest role. Rakshas fell in love with a little girl who was captivated by the first sight. How strange genetics and kinship. Viplav is paying attention to Vidhu, and that another child was concerned whether approached? In particular, he drew attention to her word Rakshas, I think at that point and felt a connection with Vidhu although himself was not aware of what kind of relationship. I hope you will soon write a sequel because I can not wait to read your story. I like.

Zaj, thank you so much for your warm-spirited encouragement. 🤗 Yes, Vidha is as stubborn as her parents, but she's also very wise for her age. 😉 Viplav feels a strong unidentifiable connection to Vidha, yet he's unaware of the connection between the two. She made her space in his heart the second she called him Rakshas. 😃 Thank you for liking my story, Zaj. 😳

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: simple2joy
Dear dazzling doctor,
I have unreserved my comment.
Ohh and thanks for giving partners to raj n su.

It still remains to be seen whether Suvarna reciprocates Abhi's feelings. 😆 I'm still a little iffy about uniting the two. I don't know if it would be true to Suvarna's character to show her marrying a third time. I was thinking of showing her as an independent woman who doesn't need a man in her life. What do you think, Simple? 😊

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Magnolia2
Hi Dazz😃
Congrats dear for once again giving an enchanting chapter for this amazing story... I'm loving the stylish avatars of Dhani, Suvu and Rajlakshmi who are now women who hold their own and are truly empowered -spiritually as well as financially...Their situation now is enviable and they are to be looked upto...This is what the makers should have focussed on!
I liked the way you gave distinctive characteristics and backgrounds to both Abhi and Arun...They sound and look like perfect companions for the two girls!
You portrayed the emotions of Viplav at the sight of Dhani and being mesmerized afresh by her transformation really well...
The best part was of course Viplav's first encounter with his little angel! This was as sweet and enjoyable as the chocolate ice cream...
Looking forward to the next part..
P.S.-The fact you embellish your story with pictures and songs makes it a delight to read and visualize at the same time!😊

Mag, you bowl me over with your kind encouragement in each comment! 🤗 I always wanted Dhani, Rajlaxmi, and Suvarna to be more in tune with today's times, but in the most realistic way possible. The idea of them opening up a boutique was one way around this concern of mine. 😆 I've tried my best to hint that they may be more stylish now, but their still conservative in their clothing. 😊 I wanted to pair Rajlaxmi with someone who's the complete opposite of her. She's vivacious and Arun's mellow. I'm still unsure whether I'll pair Suvarna with Abhi in this story. As much as I want Suvarna to find love, I'm also inclined to the idea to make her companionless and resolute. 😳 Vidhu's encounters with papa dearest should be more interesting from hereon. Thanks once again, Mag! 😃

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