i am very glad that u liked it so much..Originally posted by: adhiabhi
Barbie, really nice going dear. very very happy to read the story. Please continue dear .waiting for the next chapter.
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i am very glad that u liked it so much..Originally posted by: adhiabhi
Barbie, really nice going dear. very very happy to read the story. Please continue dear .waiting for the next chapter.
Hello kaju 🤗Hi Barbie,
What a treat it is to read your Vidha FF! Every scene is just spot on and provides the much needed escapism at present.. It helped me reconnect to the Viplav we used to know who had a noble thought of uplifting people in society who were looked down and fiercely protecting them from any harm. The steadfastness with which he helps people in need and his kind consideration has been well brought forward in this chapter. Also you can sense the mystical connection between them which you have beautifully portrayed in the scene. Thanks for the read and keep those imagination on the bright side of life, it will do a world of good to all of us in the forum!
Oh Nus, meri pyari SS .. hug lo 🤗SS.. waah waah.. dil ka doc started his docrory already..😆
mazaa aagya... I liked ths Dhani more yar.. she doesn't irks our Vipu much.. chup chaap she listen to him..🤣 keep her like dat only..😛
Vipu k khayalon mai there's only Dhani yaar... 🤣 how he'll concentrate on his surgeries now.. he's gone case now.. send him on another vacation yarr..🤣 it wud be better fr patients..😛
Loved the chap sweets.. keep em coming..😳
Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629
Sorry guys.. I had left my FF incomplete..
All those incidents, rumors about ikrs going off air, change of FL had disturbed me and I was in no mood to continue with my story..But now I want to do it.. I want to live the love story of viplav and dhani once again according to my imaginations..So I will be updating my fourth chapter soon..
CHAPTER 4
Dhani was sitting on the verandah with the plate of vegetables, pretending to be busy in cutting them.. yes she was pretending.. her mind was lost in someone's thought so deeply that she did not hear her mother telling her that she was going to deliver the Dupattas to the shop and would return late, she did not notice the boiling water which was on the stove.. she did not even hear Rajlaxmi who came thrice to ask for the vegetables...
" Dhani.. what are you thinking?" Rajlaxmi said quite loudly this time, shaking her arm and Dhani, as if woke up with a start, said, "Yes I am almost done.. I am giving you the plate within 5 mins"..
"what are you saying? you are sitting like this for almost half an hour, have cut only one potato.. when will I cook? if you are not ok then go and take some rest nah.. You should recover soon.. Its difficult for Dulari mai to travel such a long distance everyday to deliver the items.. We, the younger lot, should do it..".
"What.. Mai has left.. Why did she not tell me??"
"you sit and dream about your hero coming to your rescue you in a filmy style and dropping you at the Ashram gate.. huh.. now give me the plate and go your room".. Rajlaxmi sounded quite annoyed..
Dhani gave her angry glares and said, "Stop your non-sense.. I should not have told you about how i was helped by him.. It has become your habit of imagining too much which makes no sense at all.."..
saying this she got up, and with great difficulty walked towards her room leaving her work behind..
She entered her bedroom, closed the door behind her and sat down on the mat.. Taking a gasp of pain, she looked at her wounded foot carefully.. 5 days have gone and her injured foot was recovering slowly.. But it still pained a lot.. "Oh god.. this bloody foot.. I am unable to do anything, go anywhere because of this irritation"..
She kept staring at the pink bandage, wrapped around her foot.. Her mother had taken her to see a doctor nearby.. He had given her medicines, ointment and had wrapped her wound properly with a new bandage but she did not let the doctor throw away the pink one with which HE had treated her wound that night.. That small piece of pink cloth was so special for her.. Why would it not be?? For the first time, after she became a widow, someone had showed so much care and concern for her.. although only for a few minutes, but after a long time she had felt that she was too in need of some support..
The world had been treating her so poorly.. she was not allowed to stand in the mandir during the Aarti, she was not allowed to touch the feet of the deity when everyone else was allowed to do so.. She was not allowed to buy anything from the common market, not allowed to visit fairs and live a happy life.. In short her world had become whiter than her saree... Her life was confined only within the walls of this Ashram.. Only people living with her under the same roof cared for her.. And last time when Viplav was polite with her, it was quite natural that he would leave a good impression on her.. it was natural for her to think about the person who had, willingly, extended his helping hand towards her which no one else in this world ever did for her...
Since the day, time and again she was reminded of Viplav's words, " you are a widow..so what?.. Does that mean people can treat you however they want to?"..
Yes he was right.. she was a widow.. so what? did that change anything?
"Yes it did make a difference.. You are not allowed to develop any soft corner for anyone.. Do you know who he is..? a reputed person of the society.. And what he did was nothing but a act out of pity.. He, being much educated and good at heart, pitied a poor widow's bleeding foot..plain and simple as that.. and what you are thinking is only out of gratefulness..
The people in this world are no less than a beast who will eat you up if you ever dare to come across their way. They are torturous and very bad.. Every guy is bad".. her mind spoke.. Fresh tears glistened in her eyes.. and she layed down on the floor and closed her eyes..
This was your Life Dhani and not a fairytale.. no matter you accept it or not, you would have to live it.. without anyone...
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"Oh shit.. i forgot to take her number yaar.. isshh.. i should have asked for it.. 5 days have gone and I did not even get to know how she is... Such an innocent girl.. she was terribly hurt.. Who knows if she needs my help or not.. i know she will never ask for it..and nor her ashram ladies will.. If I, willingly, go to them..they will again start with their non sense of being widows...
I am afraid to even face them.. God knows when they will come up with what peculiar questions, for which I will certainly have no answers..", Viplav had finished two cups of coffee, sitting at the cafe with his friends..
"So why are you worried.. She will visit some doctor if her condition deteriorates.. Are you the only doctor of the town? more over your work is to treat people's heart and not bandage a widow's wounded foot.. ha ha".. Pankaj laughed out loud..but his last statement did annoy viplav.. he angrily snapped at him..
"what kind of thought is that pankaj..? I should not bandage a widow's wound.. Why the hell everyone addresses them as widows..? dont they have any identity..? and she is Dhani BTW.."..
"No No he did not mean to taunt her.. He said it just like that.. dont get annoyed.. you know us right? we dont bear such cheap thoughts...
But Pankaj, how will Viplav treat people's heart?..his own heart has become much weak and can get a cardiac arrest anytime if he did not get the correct treatment in the correct time.."
"and Raj, what is the name of his medicine?"
"DHAAANNNIII".. They said it so loud that everyone present in the cafe turned around to look at them... The three embarassed friends, paid the bill and came out..
Standing against a roadside post outside the cafe, Viplav exclaimed, " Oh God.. You had to chose me to give these two idiots in my life as my friends"..
"Sorry Viplav Bhaiya.. we were a bit over excited..but I am telling you.. you have started loving her... eh I mean your dhani.. day and night, whenever we meet you, we get to hear nothing from you except her.. only she has captivated your brain and mind"..
"And its love at first sight kind of thing.. no matter how much you turn your head in negation.. you love her and we are sure about it even if you yourself is not"..
Viplav stood there with his head lowered, his eyes looked everywhere but did not dare to look at his friends .. His face started appearing a bit pinkish.. he tried to recall their first meeting, his and dhani's, her beautiful face splashed across his eyes in his imagination...
"I dont want to lie.. but I dont know.. why do I think about her all the day? we met only twice.. but something happens to me when I recall the two meetings.. I start to feel restless.. I feel like go to her at once.. I..I..I am confused..", Viplav sounded really sad..
"Ok.. so you and go and meet her once.. Ya we know love cannot happen like this..but the feeling of love starts developing like this..", Pankaj tried to make things a bit clearer..
Seeing Viplav's more confused looks, Raj cut off pankaj and said, "ok ok we are kidding.. you go tomorrow and meet her once.. why tomorrow..you go today in the evening and visit her"...
"yes.. and we are there for you.. we will tell your family that you are with us, if they want to know about you..", Pankaj assured him..
A broad smile spread across Viplav's gloomy face immediately... He hugged his two friends and jumped into his car and drove away immediately..
Now it was impossible for him to wait till evening.. "7 hours more.. Will she get annoyed seeing me? But I can tell her that as her doctor, its my responsibility to look after my patient..
naahh.. I am not her doctor.. then what will I say her?? What if her ashram ladies question me..", he thought to himself while driving his car on his way back to home.. Thousands of questions were revolving in his mind... A few moments ago he was jumping even at the thought of visiting her ..And now when he had set his mind to do so, some where or the other his too much thinking was increasing his restlessness..
Viplav reached his house and went straight towards his room..
Sitting on his bed, he was trying to figure out what his friends were telling him some time ago.. that he had fallen in love, in love with Dhani.. No No that could not be possible.. Developing a soft corner could not just develop any special feelings for her without any reason.. All feelings could not culminate into love.. Viplav thought and dropped the idea of going to see her...
At night, after finishing off with the dinner, Viplav was lying on his bed, going through some reports of a few patients who were to be operated the following the day.. Shalini, Viplav's younger sister, came to his room and handed him his mobile..
"bhaiya you had left your phone at the dining table.. It has been ringing since a long time.. Check out if there is someone important"..
"Important? In this late night at 10:30??", Viplav looked at the screen of his mobile.. 13 missed calls from an unknown number...The phone started ringing again.. he picked up the call, "Hello"..
A familiar voice from the other side of the phone panicked, "Dactar babu.. you had told me that You are my friend and I can ask for help if I need anytime.. Then please help me today.. If you don't come, I may lose the most precious thing of my life"...
"Dhani..." and she wept bitterly holding the telephone onto her ear and pleaded like a child "please come.."..
"Hold on dhani, hold on.. dont lose patience.. I will be there in no time"..and he disconnected the call and rushed out of his house..
She was crying and she needed him... Dhani was in pain, the very thought sent jitters down his spine.. he drove like a maniac towards Tarini Vidhwa Ashram.. Afterall he could not keep his most special person waiting..
To Be Continued...