~ TS : Heartbeats! last part pg-4 updated! ~ - Page 2

Originally posted by: adhiabhi

Super one preeti. Keep writing .very nice and interesting.👍🏼

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

meri Pretu🤗...achcha likha hai...👏👏...may be tomorrow we will see something like this between Dhani and her choti malkin/maajhi before she goes to pray in mandir...

episode dekhe bina tune likh diya?😲...BTW pretu tu abhi dekh sakti hai episodes...zada romance bhi nahi hai..and everything is properly shown...u can catch up today's episode online if u get time, especially the 3rd part...woh download karke dekh lena😊😊

Originally posted by: mehraan

Agar ye Story continue nahi hui like ur ladt attempts...I will take my danda n will hit u!!!!

Zabardast...Mazedar I can see exactly happening infront of my eyes...go ahead n continue quick...Caught up the emotions right...well done!!

Originally posted by: pearl100

Acha jyada rulana mat 😆...aur haan viplav ko jalditheek karde vokay 😆 nahi toh nuss ko bhejungi uski treatment keliye 🤣

Originally posted by: pearl100

Acha jyada rulana mat 😆...aur haan viplav ko jalditheek karde vokay 😆 nahi toh nuss ko bhejungi uski treatment keliye 🤣

Originally posted by: Spreeti98

Titu...🤗 Hosp drama usually trps lata hai...because these are emotions packed!!

btw..haan epi nhin dekhi..bas LUs padhi..read ur post...and saw the pics!! phir yeh likh di..😆😆

aaj ka free time TS likhne mein nikal de...kal time hoga toh dekh lungi..only if my ghatia net is nt slow!!😡

3rd part?!😕