~ TS : Heartbeats! last part pg-4 updated! ~ - Page 4

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

pretu mein zada kuch nahi bolungi...tu bas yeh jhappi le 🤗🤗..

aur zada nautanki mat kar😡😡...kisna keha yeh achcha nahi hai😡...uska naam bata mujhe...😈

bohot achcha tha👍🏼...aur yeh bada common baat hai ke only one person can meet the patient aur heroine ko dekhke hero ekdam fit ho jata hai😆😆...hum dono soul sis hai yaar...😆😆..

sahi mein achchi likhi tune...aur bhi likhna haan...our forum lacks stories...hansa wrote a few and also Ksfandhi...uske baad i joined them...tu bhi likhna suru kar de hum logon ke saath sath aur haan episode dekhna ajka...achcha hi hoga😃😃

Originally posted by: revathirk

Preeti...beautiful post indeed...👏👏👏

Can feel dhaani n viplavs pain thru ur writing...👏👏

Glad dey r together again.

Please keep writing...😊

Originally posted by: adhiabhi

Like to have these scenes in todays episode. But no hope from cvs. Very nice preeti.

Originally posted by: pearl100

Very nice spreetiii 😃🤗accha likhti hai...aur bhi likho 😆 realistic hai tera...thank you for not givving us excessive rona dhona 😆 Keep writing 😃

Originally posted by: samanthana

Preeti . one must have to say. Ur dialogues betwn vipu n dhaani took me to imagination world

Keep writing ha👏👏⭐️

Originally posted by: Meenakshi-rg

Hey pree sorry for being late . just read your two shot in one shot.

And My My you can write girl .

and i read somewhere you said you dont like romance ????? Your second part is epitome of romances. The highest form .

oh its fulfilling to read about vidha in such a way ,

Thanks dear friend. And Keep writing.

Bookmarked😛 will edit.. 😳
Edited. . 😛
Allah m kitni nervous horae hun..kia likhu.. 😆 sach m yar it was amazing... bakwas krty h tab tou nae lagta k itni padhi likhi h tou.. 😛 I love how u kept kanak in her own character.. her pulling dhani by hair was so so kanak.. very dramatic TS it was.. n indeed better then original.. cv's yahan se churalain I wish 😳
I love love love the ending ViDha scene...
Ths combine ss ts wala idea with BB is looking promising yar... u two should try ths... maza aajae ga phr tou..
M uss thread m khoob halla machao ge..🤣 tou fir kab likh rae ho dono combine SS...!!!???!!
Meri soul sis aise hee likhty rehna dear... potential hai tere andar...😳

Rula diya mujhe Pree! Very good dear...loved it!!!Please continue writing Os,Ts..kyunki bade to like nahi jayenge tujhse🤣...we would love to read more from u...touched the emotions very well...

Originally posted by: mehraan

Rula diya mujhe Pree! Very good dear...loved it!!!Please continue writing Os,Ts..kyunki bade to like nahi jayenge tujhse🤣...we would love to read more from u...touched the emotions very well...

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