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Posted: 9 years ago
ok so i am updating the 4th and the last part of my SS
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Posted: 9 years ago
So I have written the last part of my SS...
Here we go


PART 4:


Viplav entered the room and saw Dhani sitting on the floor, hiding her face in between her knees...He stood beside her...Dhani looked up..Her face was drenched with tears, her soft lips were dried and his heart lurched seeing her condition...He went near her but she stopped him "Dont come near me...I am a chracterless girl..You will get dirty by my presence viplav"..Viplav placed his hand on dhani's shoulder..She jerked his hand off and stoop up..."I dont want to talk with you...N why should I?..you know what hurt me the most?..Its your behaviour...how could you even think like that?..dont u know me enuf to trust me on this?"..dhani spoke in between her sobs.."I would love to die even before thinking of cheating on you...today u have the proof so u came here...but if u did not have the proof then u wuld have hated me still like u were hating me for the last 17 days"
She was Crying her heart out and needed onlyViplav's shoulders...

Viplav took a step forward and pulled Dhani in an embrace...Initially she struggled to get out of it but after a few seconds she stopped sruggling and just let viplav comfort her..Her head was resting on his chest, her hands wrapped around his waist tightly while his one hand was holding her firmly from her waist and his other hand was caressing her hair...Dhani, for a moment thought that she got her old husband back, unaware of the truth that Viplav was always hers..he never hated her...he could start hating himself but not her...

They stood there for God knows how many minutes or hours when Viplav noticed that she had fallen asleep..He gently scooped her up in her arms and made his way inside AN...He entered their bedroom and placed his sleepy wife on their bed..He caressed her face, wiped her tears which were partially dry by now and covered her with the blanket..

"I am sorry Dhani but I did not hate you...Viplav can never hate his love...i did the fake drama only to convine my family...But I promise that I wont let you cry anymore...i wont repeat the same mistake which u did..U tried to trap Raja without informing me and i also did the same thing...and without ur help my task became more difficult...I can do nothing without you..because You are my support...I draw strength and courage from you...when u are there with me, i find every target easier to achieve..I am nothing without you dhani..It was difficult for me too to stay away from you...but I promise I will never let u go away from me and neither will I try to stay away from you...Vipav and Dhani are incomplete without each other." Vipav said and kissed Dhani's fore head..
A tear dropped from his eyes on Dhani's fore head and he got up to leave when Dhani hold his hand...Viplav stopped to look at his wife...That means she woke up and was listening to him quitely...
Dhani got down from bed and stood in front of viplav...For minutes neither of them spoke a word...both were looking at each other and were drowned in their own thoughts..
Finally Dhani broke the silence and spoke "So, my husband never hated me? He had always loved me...Does he still love me?"...Viplav just gave his killer smile and nodded in yes...Dhani again said "Can I get a hug from my hubby?..A tight one?.."..
Without wasting a second Viplav leaned forward and ensconced her in a hug so tight that there was no space between them any more...She leant against him, her eyes closed as she savoured the sensation of being in the comforting arms of her husband. Her own hands covered his back, and then she slowly encircled his waist. Her hand kept moving upwards till she was grasping his shoulders tight...Their eyes closed in contentment as they stood in the tight embrace...

AFter a few minutes Dhani broke the hug..She was looking at her husband lovingly...Viplav bent down a bit and took her lips in his..Dhani wrapped her arms around his neck..Her lips slowly parted, inviting him to kiss them with more passion...
After few moments they released each other's lips..Viplav tightened his arms around her waist, pulled her closer and brushed his lips against her neck..Dhani shiverred...Viplav felt this and moved back.."Are you ok Dhani?"..."How can I be if u move away?"..Dhani said with a naughty smile...Viplav returned back his killer smile, hold her hands and placed a light kiss on her palms...
"Thanks Dhani that you have forgiven me...but I still did not forgive you..Why did u not tell me that.."..before viplav could complete , Dhani pressed her fingers on his lips, hold his shoulders tight and tip-toed to reach his lips...Viplav wrapped her arms around her and lifted her up to make her kiss easier...Dhani looked at viplav and giggled as she felt herself being lifted up above the ground...They contined kissing...Viplav carried her in his strong arms and placed her on the soft bed...He gently kissed her neck and then her lips and said, "Its getting late...I think we should sleep now"..Viplav said teasingly...and was about to stand up when Dhani held his collar tight "No, I will not sleep ...I want to tell u something".."What ?..that i am a better kisser?"...Dhani giggled again at his answer...Viplav laid beside her and took her in her arms...Dhani hugged him back and rested her head on his chest.. and both slept the most peaceful sleep in each other's arms that night..


THE END


P.S. Ok so before u start throwing at me all the rotten vegetables, let me tell u, I realy dont have any idea about what a couple do during SR.😆😆..I have written as much as I can..Now see I am sweating...those who were demanding for romantic scenes, seriously friends i cant make Vidha romance more...
So for nowYou enjoy my colourful post😆...I will be back with another OS or SS next week...

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Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome ending beautiful love it the way he embracd her to comfort her wow the way she remove all her pain out wow

in over all mind blowing love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
yeh itna romantic..😆 tu choti bacchi nhin hai...apna real age bata..😆 itna kuch imagine ki ghar mein baithke...ganda dimaag tera...🤣
bt 5th part was going to be the last one!😕 bahut acha likhi tu...😳 nw u cn become a writer..aapki training puri huyi...🤣

MehrD ne bataya na yeh scene?? PM mein..🤣 aur DollyD ne captions bheje honge...🤣
unka dimaag leli tu..😆


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hana_y

awesome ending beautiful love it the way he embracd her to comfort her wow the way she remove all her pain out wow

in over all mind blowing love it

thanks for appreciating dear...
i am glad that u loved this romance of vidha..thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Spreeti98

yeh itna romantic..😆 tu choti bacchi nhin hai...apna real age bata..😆 itna kuch imagine ki ghar mein baithke...ganda dimaag tera...🤣

bt 5th part was going to be the last one!😕 bahut acha likhi tu...😳 nw u cn become a writer..aapki training puri huyi...🤣

MehrD ne bataya na yeh scene?? PM mein..🤣 aur DollyD ne captions bheje honge...🤣
unka dimaag leli tu..😆


😆😆 haan toh tujhe kya laghta hai that i dont watch movies😆😆..ab tu mujhe bata kaunse movie mein isse zada dikhata hai...sirf smooches or neck kiss toh dikhata hai...phir candles and lights off...phir pata nahin kya hota hai😕😕😆...toh meine bhi toh sirf wohi likha hai😆
aur mera real age hai 34...MR's age ki hoon mein...aur 34 years me mein eng entrance de rahi hoon na...phir 60 years tak i will be in college🤣

sahi mein yaar movies dekh dekh ke imagine karna sikh gayi hoon...hamare desh mein hindi movies mein aur kuch ho na ho yeh scenes zaroor hota hai...3 idiots mein bhi kya zordar kiss tha woh...baaap re...saansein atak ke mein tv ke samne baithe baithe mar jati re🤣..

chal tune tareef kiya yehi bohot hai😆😆..

next OS likhungi next week...tu padhna aur comment bhi karna...abhi se i started promoting my upcoming story😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow..
It's amazing Barbie... Loved it😊
Romance part was awesome😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Third r fourth eksathe porlam.fatafati romance likhechish tui.
Janishna married couple ki kore ,tai na? Eta ki bolli reee tuiii.hahahaha.
Anyway u made this track look better.u r really better than d cvs.
Keep writing and entertaining us.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Bb...nice writing n a good start for taking up writing...ur surely talented dear...I loved how vipu exposed Raja using his smartness n intelligence...N loved the romance...!!!Can imagine wholeheartedly imagine Vidha hugging each other passionately
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow end too
awrsome each part are too good well written too love it

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