SS:The kiss/chap6 upd pg37/Spoiler 53 - Page 24

Originally posted by: Spreeti98

Mehr...i could not stop myself...from reading it..was so excited!!😆 You did it again!! those words perfectly placed and used!! the way u described the moment...made me go back to the days...when they were totally like this!! That chem with perfect amount of passion for love!!

I loved this one!! I read the prev. chapters as soon as i got to know that u r updating...but then u came up with the idea of giving part a and b!!😕 And i was like..oh no!! not again!! this wait is going to be long!! So..i will just read both the parts at one go!! but..excitement!!😕😆

I seriously don't have words to appreciate this SS!! will just say that wish CVs had waited for ur SS..rather than moving forward with their tracks!!😕 Believe me Trps would have been sky high...this is that awesome!! Man..i loved it..!!

bravo...very very Welldone...but it must be hot next time

Originally posted by: ajab

bravo...very very Welldone...but it must be hot next time

hi mehru.. this was absolutely worth while the waiting the descriptive writing is just par excellence a real treat to read.. the way you painted the rain within the chapter it became an integral part of the scene between them... gosh she is really trying his patience .. overalll sizzling scene can feel the heat is on ..of anger... what will happen when the sheets of anger collide ? will they change into the passion of forgiving love?... waiting for the next part this scene was as intimate as a kiss!thank you mehru for giving us joy.. love hammie

Loved the cliffhanger at the ending, Mehr! Wonderfully written! I don't think anyone could capture the passion between Viplav and Dhani the way you do. I really wish the creatives would learn from your method of story telling. I hope you continue writing stories for us. Perhaps, an OS on Viplav and Dhani's SR? I'm sure you'd do it justice ten times more than the creatives on our show. The viewers are still confused whether they've consummated yet or not. Since IKRS is an intense love story, the SR should've been a bigger part of the show. I cannot wait to read the next part! So excited for what's to continue. 😊

Beautiful mehru,
Really loved it.its my type of passionate scene.
Keep writing more. ⭐️
Wish cvs take ideas from u.

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hi mehru.. this was absolutely worth while the waiting the descriptive writing is just par excellence a real treat to read.. the way you painted the rain within the chapter it became an integral part of the scene between them... gosh she is really trying his patience .. overalll sizzling scene can feel the heat is on ..of anger... what will happen when the sheets of anger collide ? will they change into the passion of forgiving love?... waiting for the next part this scene was as intimate as a kiss!thank you mehru for giving us joy.. love hammie

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Loved the cliffhanger at the ending, Mehr! Wonderfully written! I don't think anyone could capture the passion between Viplav and Dhani the way you do. I really wish the creatives would learn from your method of story telling. I hope you continue writing stories for us. Perhaps, an OS on Viplav and Dhani's SR? I'm sure you'd do it justice ten times more than the creatives on our show. The viewers are still confused whether they've consummated yet or not. Since IKRS is an intense love story, the SR should've been a bigger part of the show. I cannot wait to read the next part! So excited for what's to continue. 😊

Originally posted by: simple2joy

Beautiful mehru,
Really loved it.its my type of passionate scene.
Keep writing more. ⭐️
Wish cvs take ideas from u.

Hey Mehr Thank God u updated I waited so long that I lost hope u will update or not 😆
It was too good I love these passionate intense romance and how I wished cvs would have showed us something like this if not he whole thing
Anyways u left us at a cliffhanger and I can't wait for u to continue darling 😳