SS:The kiss/chap6 upd pg37/Spoiler 53 - Page 23

Originally posted by: Magnolia2

OMG Mehru

What a tantalizing, scintilatting continuation from where you left off! I could visualize them -Vipu's desire seemed to override his anger and the way you described this set our temperature soaring.The cvs should have given us a scene like this-now it's too late. Waiting for what comes next. I'm sure I'll be dead after reading that.!

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

Bohot achcha hai👏👏...very nice...if u r not thinking anything hatke, then I am sure we will get the kiss in the next part...

waise this part was really good...my 15 mins is wasted becoz of u😡😡..today we did not have IKRS...so i just took a break and came to read ur story...i had wasted 15 mins reading the previous parts😡😆😆 kuch yaad nahin tha...only the 4th part kuch kuch yaad tha😆😆..now before we all forget this 5(A), please update the B part soon😆...firstly i am excited what game they will play...luka chupi or ghora ghora..🤣..and secondly please i want to read what kind of romance u will write...bohot passionate hoga kya??...they will eat away each other's lips or what?/..jaldi update karo...😆😆