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IKRS Monday 14th December 2015 ep 109 My Take

Three magic words for Viplav also push him into possibilities.. can I win? and the finality I will win! This then is the anthem of his strenuous activity of letting off steam. Keeping his sentiments to himself is not mammoth a task for him, as by nature he is an animate homo sapien.But the norms he's picked up, are based on the rather delicate, difficult, task of saying the vital three words to the girl. Dhani is one girl who certainly deserves to hear those words from him,as she probably thinks of him as some juvenile delinquent, which he most certainly not! have a heart Dhani or better still some sharp ears through which can travel the accuracy of his heartfelt sentiments he feels for her.The episode is sympathetic visuals of the battles the intrepid young knight in shining armour faces on the battlefield of love.

Not hidden away in a bill but out in the lawn, is the scene of battle. Pushups! To keep him fighting spirit ,today he will wage war in the declaration of the three words! so exuberant is his spirit that not today but right now he will do or die! come on! Viplav be a man! you have to say the three words to her Dhani I lovvve youuu.. hewww.. Dhani wanders into the garden, one look at him and she muses, whats he doing now? this man never surprises.. now this.. pushups? She gingerly moves forward ufff! phew! haaah! Dhani I love you... what's going on ? and he falls flat on his face! she asks, hope you didn't leave your brains in the river? He struggles to stand up.. did she catch on to what I said? look are you ok? she asks, yes fine he replies and then his prowess kicks in and he muses.. do it Viplav don't let those big eyes of hers stop you; soldier on! attack!. fire! ummm Dhani... I ..erhh retreat! move out of the firing range of her eyes Viplav before she blasts what's left out of your brains!.. he moves she follows he looks very shifty, turn around Viplav don't be such a lily livered coward! what is the matter? she asks, erhhh ahh ehhh.. aaahh..what is it? she asks, Viplav you nutter say it.. I..confused she looks around, where is she the one he mentioned aaye who came? .. she moves to the side searching.. and he looks confused.. excuse me? helloo? who are you looking? for he asks, she faces him puzzled.. who came? and he goes what? and he goes and bangs his forehead on a garden table and he goes, she didn't come.. this is I, me, myself.. is the English letter meaning self. she replies, but you're here then when did she come?.oh gawdd this girl will surely turn me mad.. such a duffer ..her ignorance has washed my brains away truly! in the waters.. ohhh god bhole Nath.. Viplav moans and she questions him what did you say? and he went ,he was worshiping bole Nath..and he gves up as he says to Dhani, teaching you English means forgetting it myself! and she gives him a glare.. don't teach me then! come on it's getting late we'll miss the bus,and he says.. thing is that I, mee..and she yells at him what are you going on about! I . me , yourself? we're getting late now move! and she storms off.. ohhh gawwd! my love in white is always in such a hurry.. wanted to say the magic words..face it Viplav! you are just not fast enough! catch her if you can maann! dam the bus ! I just missed my bus! as for the bus we can always get the next one! when I eyeee ayeee! aaye she came! and she also went.. hell! Viplav moans in frustration.

Smoothing ruffled feathers.. Dashrant tells Tripurari, your mothers safe where she is you needn't worry but he knows full well what he has to do to keep her protected.. he goes, yes to kill Dhani! but by now Viplav and Dhani both know he wants to kill her.. Viplav won't let him be he'll get him imprisioned , he's in a catch 22 situation, trapped between the ravine and the well. What will he get out of it? and Dashrant says right you are..then he goes and gets the pot of sindoor and lures the final persuasive bait.. this is what you'll get Tripurari.. your mother will get the rights of being my wife and you I'll accept you as my legitimate son.. Trips is entrapped , enough Guru dev don't want anything.. if you want , not only Dhani but I'll set the whole of Banaras alight! even if I have to go to jail kill Dhani!.. Tripurari scoffs, now you'll have to fight Dhani! because my new life will kick start after your death! he mocks and leaves.. Kanak as usual over heard the conversation. With Tripurari ; hubris is such that yes he wants power that automatically brings in wealth and status but more do over and above he wants his mother's honoured in society .There is no doubt that Dashrant knows his soft spot ,hence it's easy for him to keep Tripurari under his foot.. as one does to adders head!

Good byes are in order Dhani gives a tiffin for kaki as a good bye gift and says, thanks for putting us here ,we'll never forget your favour she prays god blesses them and kaki too blesses bids them safe journey ,and that may they always be happy...Viplav, Dhani leave..

One's children are often seen as the fruits and flowers of the seed planted by parents.. Plants Kanak pokes fun at her husband doing a menial chore, of watering the plants.She taunts both Shambu and Sushma , they should be happy , that his brother very soon will become legitimate from illegitimate. Shushma scolds her what nonsense is she talking about? Kanak tells them babu ji is dividing his assets between them and Durga and Tripurar..Although Kanak whips up trouble but she also looks for allies who will support if she decides to contest Dashrant.

Reluctantly Viplav follows Dhani like a little lamb. This lamb, wears a white kurta and pyjama which goes to show that Viplav is still convalescing! which was one solid reason he wanted to stay back at kaki's.. there were other reasons too, but this was the respectable one! He literally drags his slipper clad feet as they head for the station.. dear god do something.. anything to stop this kill joy sergeant major in her tracks!.. romantically he says as he follows, you pray to the one above.. and I ask for you from the one above..she turns and says did you say something? he replies , no he didn't .. and confused she said , I felt I heard something and he turned his face the other way and mumbled, thank god at least she felt something.. Dhani thanks begins to take her manngalsutra off and he say why ? she replies because iam not a married woman am i? but it slips out of hismouth.. leave it it looks nice on you.. then embarrassed , he swiftly says , no I meant don't take it off till we don't reach home, as it may be inauspicious..and he rolls up his eyes to the heavens!

Well looks like the gods heard his heart's plea. There is mayhem, people running from all direction! road block! Landslide!.. Tripurari arrive on his bike, along with his red van full of his goons! they too like all were stopped in their plans. Viplav thanks his deities, even the phone lines were dysfunctional due to the landslide! Dhani looks concerned and he tries hard to conceal his glee.. she asks what should they do ,and he suggests gently ,since there was no other option it's best they went back to kaki's!

Malkin, worries about how her pia will get home with the road disaster.. kaki says she'll be fine as she is a sensible girl.. Viplav and Dhani return and malkin tells them pia 's more stubborn than sensible! She picks fight's with boys ! reads crime books..she turns to Viplav and Dhani ,she's pleased they returned as seeing them my motivate her to the idea of marriage.

Trip says to Dash says he's spread posters of Viplav and Dhani everywhere someone is bound to come up with info, then he'll kill her and bring Viplav baba home but till then look after my mother. Dashrant replies the more you torture Dhani the more happiness I'll give to your mother

Collecting clothes from the washing line and Viplav puts his task on the line again! he manipulates Dhani.. I think I can't be doing this acting anymore. I'll go and tell kaki the whole truth that weren't husband and wife.. were only pretending, you never know all this pretend play may become true? soo let me go tell kaki, and she stops him.. and he muses.. bulls eyes!! she'll speak her mind.. out.. dying to know what goes on in that prude brain of hers! erhhh, why did you stop me? and much to his amusement she says, erhh it's fine I can carry on pretending.. it's only for a few days I'll manage.. Viplav smiles roguishly ooh really? my pretty maid you want to pretend to my wife.. my pleasure entirely my smart chick! you see ,smart Viplav has his ways of worming into the Sherman tank front of yours! .. but still let me double check with her, so he teases, that means you have no issues with us being husband and wife? you ready to lie? Dhani replies ,erhhh.. it's only for a matter of a few days and after that...and he butts in yes yes I know, now you'll say that if one has to lie to save a situation , then it's not really a lie? isnt it? he gives her condescending smile , and she goes yes..and hoods her eyes while he compresses his mouth to stop himself from laughing.. she goes to arrange the clothes on the line . he goes under it and stands on the other side so he can see her.. as soon as he rests his arms on it the line snaps and the clothes line with the clothes end up on the grass! he tries to gather them.. and qualifies for her anger yet again. oh for gods sake! when you don't know what to do then why do you try to help ..Suddenly his adrenaline pumps! it's now or never Viplav! he musters courage yet again.. listen! keenly looks into her eyes I .. you.. and suddenly kaki calls out dinners ready! come and eat! and Viplav is right put off and complains to Dhani who waits for him to complete, what were you saying? and he taunts , before we leave we shall buy kaki a wrist watch for her horrendous time keeping! Dhani goes and Viplav gets impatient! I have to get it right! and he prays before lord Krishna you are omnipotent please help me I am done!

Viplav goes to his bed side and Dhani comes in drying her thick long tresses with a towel and she notices him and asks, you here I thought you were outside? she turns to face the mirror and he stares mesmerized by her back.. he watches her gather her hair from the sides and is about to twist it in to a knot at the back of her crown and Viplav calls .. Dhani.. they look nice ,leave them loose.. and she retorts, as she turns to face him, what's wrong with you? you talk strangely.. sometimes you go I.. I sometimes other things, what is it? hope all is well with you? slowly he walks towards her, stands before her, gazes upon her two hands.. it's now or never Viplav! gently touch and hold her hidden hands and just hold them..what are you doing? she asks , I know Dhani , he muses, but I have to complete this essential task .. he looks down into her confused eyes.. she says, why are you doing this? there's no one here.. I know my Dhani he muses.. just trust me you'll find out why I am doing what I am doing? but for now don't be alarmed as I move just a little closer.. trust me Dhani... it's the side of your neck I want.. won't do anything untoward aahhh! yes the feel of her hair..it tickles my stubble chin..Viplav that's it stop now! behave! Viplav..whisper in her ear, covered hair, what you have to say... Dhani what I am doing is not to show anyone Dhani be still ..don't move.. Dhani there's a scorpion on your back.. and he retrieve one in his pincer grip.. aeahhher she screams and hugs him tightly.. and Viplav muses.. well a little fib that clarifies matters for oneself .. plus gives another a message of love cannot be a sin? and with a smile Viplav pats her shoulder assuredly ..there there my little pet.. never fear Viplav is near.. okooh she parts ,let her go Viplav, respect! let thegirl go you had your hug..actually second hug.. ooohh how she shies and scampers way .. he watches her leave and smiles, his eyes twinkling..

Another entertaining episode.. Mishal ,Eisha were great in role.. well ,in the end they both didn't need to say anything to each .. viplav's bright idea of the scorpion worked.. now dying to see this Pia ..hamlet53 15.12.15

Precap: Dhani is giving kaki maa a hand.. with some of her belongings.. a photo slips out falls facing down on the floor Dhani asks this picture..kaki takes it from her..nd Dhani wonders.. Dhani Viplav posters are up on the wall the head goon says lets go check there..and head to the malikan's entrance garden. Dhani stands with her back to them.. they are about to enter when a girls yells hey you jerks! Dhani turns and the girl wheeling a trolley asks what are you doing here! it looks from your face that you are thieves viplav comes and stands by her and hears a girl scream where are you running.. trips goons do a runner!






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Posted: 9 years ago
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HAMMIE!!

What a treat to read your nuanced and wonderful take on an equally wonderful episode. The highlights for me from your analysis were
1. Your discussion of Trip's hopes and hubris. Very well analysed. Take a bow.👏
2. The discussion of Shambhu's watering of the plants as a continuation of the lineage.👍🏼

Trip indeed is in a catch 22 situation, but DT just promised him the moon and weighed him down to his side. It is indeed ironic that Dashrath wishes to take the life of one vermilion-less girl in exchange for offering vermilion to another vermilion-less woman --his common-law wife. One illegal action of killing an innocent satirically rests on the legalisation of hitherto illegitimate relationships. Due to Dashrath's dirty intentions, all that is sacred about vermilion and what it represents is rendered profane. I am also quite certain that were Trip to succeed in his mission, Trip and Durga would suddenly meet with accidental deaths on their way to occupy the DT haveli as rightful owner and heir.

Vip and Dhani are being embroiled in another set of relationships. They have a task to feminize the tomboyish granddaughter of the maalkin. Let us see how that goes. For the moment, the goons are staved off, but will this Pia also save Dhani when she is re-kidnapped by Trip himself?? Or will she promptly fall in Vip-love?? Let us wait and watch.

Edited by aimf - 9 years ago
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HI Hammie😳
Avery Gud evening,now I checked the time ,I am posting this at this particular venture😆 and I hope u will be reading it by night.
Fine analysis,lovely take,I am holding on to my body temperature which is about to raise at the mean time,No clg today,I took a holiday😆
Nice analysis to begin my day,now I feel the warmth getting reduced😆
Fine things are really getting pressurized in one point of view while the other tries to surpass time with his tricky tricks and emotional expressions,let's wait and see what we have in the store.
Awesome take👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Hammie, Thank you for you.

I enjoy reading your take on each episode.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Hammie!! 😃
Awesome take dear,👏 I'm waiting how far Piya track is gonna to work out! 😛
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Hey dear!!!.writing as usual perfect...
I just want to know how many times dhaani washes her clothes n dry????.🤣..really , now this is too much!!!😆
Jokes apart...I liked Vipus antics,he was cute...the crossquestioning about hubby n wife thing to get a hint from dhaani as to what she feels of him,about their nakli relation,anythingthat gives him answer...n the way he imitates her when she said yup she is willing to keep her act...that was so funny,Vipu is smart enough to get his answers n I wish he continues to intimidate dhaani in such a way,cos dhaani anytime soon wont open up,its Viplav who will compel her to do it...I love such mind games!!!!n the last scene was also about this,hes testing her,trying to guage her reactions,teasing her so she gives away as to wat she feels for him or anything that will lead him upon!!!btw the last scene was hot ...dhaani should realise it now after this close physical proximity they shared..theres seriously something is going on between them...
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Awesome portrayal of my vipu ohhh he is too cute n he knows what he is doing.
I am not liking d fact that dhani can't read n write. Plz someone teach her. Its very urgent.
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Hey Hammie,

A very interesting read on an episode that was not very impressive , at least to me . I understand that levity is required after several weeks of drama so will go along.

Why was it so hard for Viplav to convey his feelings ? He is a confident guy who knows what he wants why does he need courage to say it to Dhaani. Of course Dhaani is not giving him the opening to do so neither does she take him seriously , at least where commitment is concerned. Why is Viplav not spending time knowing her . What does he expect that once he confesses she will simply fall into his arms ? For me its not about the - I love you or Will you marry me - its about the Ishq - which is lacking from his end.

The exercising and hugs are good fun but she has been condemned to a life of a vidhwa and the pain she must have gone thru . Why is Viplav not attempting to understand that .

Maybe I am expecting this widowhood to be a big part of the story and maybe it is not . I find him never asking her anything about her past very strange thus find this I love you track - very superficial .

The one thing I found interesting was DT using his ace against Trip and the naked manipulation of his own son. "Kill Dhaani and you will be my legitimate son. The more you torture her the more sukhi your mom will be " . Trip plays right into his hand and is ready to do his bidding. The length DT will go to get his wish is appalling. Future will be interesting to see when and how Viplav gets to know him.

Though I did not think much of the episode there were stand alone moments that were funny. Mishal & Eisha are doing such a good job. Eisha needs a new dialogue writer . she needs some new lines ...Waiting to see what role the new entry plays to move ahead the love story.

Take care all.


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Hey Hammie dear 😳
Wow fantastic analysis as expected n wow wat a superb episode that was..once again..!! I'm still in dreamland. ..!!


Dhaniii 😆 ..wese tou she think Viplov is naa samaj n she kept ranting'u understand nothing' but in actual it's her who need to start understanding things now... 😛 idk y bt I've a feeling. .she's deliberately ignoring him.. n that's y she's in a hurry to leave dat place so dat she can avoid the situation I guess.. 😆

But our very own Viplov. .. 😛 n his chichhori harkatain continues. .. OMG dont tell me hammie this scorpion was his idea to embrace her 😉 n I thought God is helping him yet again giving him another moka to hug her sigh such a fool I'm, ,, I thought kahan to he was hell scared of Roaches n now seedha scorpion..its jst like a missile for him😆 .. bt I guess u right..at least it proves 1 thing,, to embrace her frequently is his need now n he can do anything jst to hug her.. 😛 good for us...!! 😆

Yet to watch tonight's episode hope it'll b even better than yesterday. .. 😳

PS OMG Dhanush in Ranjhna is my ultimate fvt.. 😳.. my heart goes out for him everytime I re watch the movie.. An Epic no doubt. ..!! 😳
Thnx so much for writing another brilliant take dear.. waiting for today's. . Will try to reply soonish...!! 😛
Take care!! 😳
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Originally posted by: aimf

HAMMIE!!
erhhh is this a yell to wake me up.. ooh come on! you know an ullu like me never goes to sleep .. too wit twoo!
What a treat to read your nuanced and wonderful take on an equally wonderful episode. The highlights for me from your analysis were
1. Your discussion of Trip's hopes and hubris. Very well analysed. Take a bow.👏 thank u.. for once me shy😆.. mock of course you know what a glut Iam for praise
2. The discussion of Shambhu's watering of the plants as a continuation of the lineage.👍🏼
thanks.. kanak is so sharp just like a sharp silvery cutting edge of cleaver!
Trip indeed is in a catch 22 situation, but DT just promised him the moon and weighed him down to his side. It is indeed ironic that Dashrath wishes to take the life of one vermilion-less girl in exchange for offering vermilion to another vermilion-less woman --his common-law wife. One illegal action of killing an innocent satirically rests on the legalisation of hitherto illegitimate relationships. Due to Dashrath's dirty intentions, all that is sacred about vermilion and what it represents is rendered profane. I am also quite certain that were Trip to succeed in his mission, Trip and Durga would suddenly meet with accidental deaths on their way to occupy the DT haveli as rightful owner and heir.
this did cross my mind he has made a mockery of sindoor.. in fact right from the time the sindoor issue began uptil when tattoo kaki tells viplav to put in dhanis maag.. i thought why are cvs making such a joke of such a sacred symbol? then I realized maybe they are portraying its gravity and sancitity
Vip and Dhani are being embroiled in another set of relationships. They have a task to feminize the tomboyish granddaughter of the maalkin. 😆 Let us see how that goes. For the moment, the goons are staved off, but will this Pia also save Dhani when she is re-kidnapped by Trip himself?? Or will she promptly fall in Vip-love?? Let us wait and watch.
i watched her today this so called mahi munda in my zabaan.. she seemed fine to me.. so she can look after her self. doesnt mean she is a lad.. yes challenges anti social elements like that..
the goons are so pathetic like their boss they need to be flushed! thanks aimf for your lovely comments. sorry for late reply much love hammie

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