ViDha two shots : An endless love (part 2 updated. Page 3)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys Nandita here.I am not able to post pics these days. But I have written a SS on ViDha. As I was feeling bore in the train. Hope you all will enjoy.do leave comments please. And tell me should I continue or not.
Here it goes :
Dhani was in deep thought. She was thinking how how her life took a complete U turn in past few days.she was about to die but wakil Saab saved her. Her respect was at stake as she was held responsible for the broken engagement of VIplav babu by his mother. Society thought she was having an affair with the rich grand son of Dashrath tripathi.
But she regained her lost respect as Viplav babu made his mom apologise to her in front of everyone. He also cleared that he was only trying to save her.
Everything was normal now ... Except Viplav's racing heart and dhani's disturbed mind fascinated in the thoughts of her 'Rakshas..'
"He saved my life twice, fight for our ashram, save my honour..." She thought.
But what I did in return ??? Slapped him, called him 'Rakhsas'..insulted him every now & then"
Dhani was feeling guilty. As she realised he is not that bad.
"Hume unse maafi mangni chahiye.. Air hum mafi jaroor mangenge " she thought.
His angry face flashed against her eyes as she remember his words "humara dimag switch off ho jata hai..jabvi ye Hume rakhsash bulati hai..
"Rakshas.." She muttered to herself as her lips curved into a smile.

At VIplav's place :
Viplav was restless as well.
How can she think so low of me??" He fumed in anger.
"Uski problem kya hai yaar.. Ab to Sab kuch thik hai firvi humse baat nahi Kar rahi hai..ek sorry tak nahi bola." He muttered as he stood in front of the mirror.
Though he tried his best not to think about her..his mind was occupied with dhani's thought only.
"What is happening with me?? She can think anything about me. Why does it affect me so much?? Why it hurts so much when she blame me for her Problems???" He questioned to himself. But he didn't knew the answer which was already created by destiny.
"Shikayet ki puriya.." He murmured before going to sleep.
Next day :
Shushma ji was worried as she sensed something was wrong with Viplav.
She woke him up early.
"Princess kya huya??its only 6:00 am of morning" he said in a sleepy tone.
"Hume tumse us vidhwa ladki me bare mein baat karni hai." Said dadi.
"Dhanii.. Use kya huya? Is she alright??" He asked worriedly and sat up on the bed instantly.
"Areey use kuch nahi huya.. Par tujhe kya huya hai???" Dadi asked him hitting his head affectionately.
"WO kuch nahi dadi..." He answered.
"Tum sach bol rahe ho na??"
"Ha dadi.. I am alright." He smiled.
"Thik hai fir tum ganga ghat ke mandir jao aur ye thal pandit ji ko De ana." She ordered him.
"OK dadi."

Viplav was about to return home after completing his duty when he noticed her at the steps of the ghat.
Dhanii just had completed her Ganga snan. Her long wet hair lied aside her shoulder, her face still slightly wet..droplets of water shining like pearls..
As she look heavenly in her usual white saree,glowing in the morning sunlight, Viplav couldn't take his eyes off her.

Precap : dhanii ask forgiveness from viplav.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nandita very nice OS, please continue
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Wow Dhani's realisation that Viplav is a nice guy wow what a story dear Nandu,loved it a lot my god u have made my day awesome please do continue soon Nandu ma.😳😳
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hey nandu welcome back dear...awesome start...
do continue
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Welcome back Nandu dear šŸ¤—
Wow a wonderful start..Dhani apologising to Viplav..😳
Interesting dear😳
Do continue šŸ˜‰
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Nicely written!
Pls do continue, I wud luv to read it all the way through.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gr8 writing Nandita!
Such a lovely SS. Plz continue. Can't wait to read Dhani's apologize.

BTW I don't understand Hindi well. But I was able to understand those dialogues you wrote in Hindi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tahera57

Nandita very nice OS, please continue

Thanks dear. Will continue soon.
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Originally posted by: rerose

Wow Dhani's realisation that Viplav is a nice guy wow what a story dear Nandu,loved it a lot my god u have made my day awesome please do continue soon Nandu ma.😳😳

Thanks pretty dear.I will continue soon for sure. Missed you so much.
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Originally posted by: tarun1234567

hey nandu welcome back dear...awesome start...

do continue

Thank you Tarun. Do post episode pics.please.

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