VIDHA OS: KHUDA KA RANG SAFED

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guyz, dis is pratiti...😊
I thought of writing something on vidha...
And here it goes...it's a bit different actually...


viplab's P.O.V.

Humein aisa na dekha kar,
Teri aankhein humein pareshaan kiya karte hai,
Uss har dard yaad dila dete hai
Jo kabhi humne taufe mein diya tha...
Iss qadar mashroof the hum
Ke teri aansuon ko baarish ki boond samajh baithe!
Gile shikwe shayad bohut honge tere mann mein...
Par wo humare liye kam parega...
Ho sake toh thodi nafrat kar le humse..
Par shayad, teri nafrat ka bhi layak na raha main...
kitni ajeeb hai na duniya ki reet...
jisne kaha rakshas, ussi ka khuda banne chale...
meri har galati ka saza tujhe milti rahi...
meri har kasoor ka shikhan teri chehre par sazne lagi...
hum toh socha kiya karte the...
masoom si galti karte hai hum...
par tujhe dekha toh yaad aya...
Masoom toh tu hai...
aur hum naadan...
gunaah ko kabhi mazak ki hizaab mein chupaya nahi jata..
aaj ke baad chupaenge bhi nahi...

teri maafi ke layak na sahi,
par ek waada hai khud se...
jo na tutega kabhi...
teri har pareshaani khud mein samet lunga main...
tu humein raksash samajhti rahe...
uss mein ko dikkat nahi...
par mujhe sirf ek inayat de...
Ki aakhri saans tak, tujh ko khudki khuda banake rakh paoon...


khuda ka rang safed hai...
khuda ka rang safed...


guys, i know it's not d usual os...but this came to my mind after yesterday's episode...
please drop in your valuable comments...😊😊

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Guruvishva thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm bad in Hindi but as far as I understood it was lovely, you brought everything in these few lines 😳👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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you wrote this 😲wow amazing 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kashish u deserve this👏
WOW what an amazing potrayal of emotions u displayed agar viplav aisa maafi manngega toh dhaani toh kyaa har ladki maafi nahi faint ho jaayegi upar se mishaal jo romantic king hai😳

Loved ur post dear❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guruvishva

I'm bad in Hindi but as far as I understood it was lovely, you brought everything in these few lines 😳👏

Thanks guruvisha...😊
Next time I'll write something in english...
Nd dat will be for you...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: stranger2rose

you wrote this 😲wow amazing 👍🏼

Yeah, tried to write something worth reading...
I'm glad you liked it...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AISHU183

Kashish u deserve this👏

WOW what an amazing potrayal of emotions u displayed agar viplav aisa maafi manngega toh dhaani toh kyaa har ladki maafi nahi faint ho jaayegi upar se mishaal jo romantic king hai😳

Loved ur post dear❤️

Thanks a ton, aishu...😊
Yeah, datz true, we are gonna faint if mishal says something like this...😃😳
Thanks again...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice you are very talented.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!!! This is superb awesome mind blowing Pratiti 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tahera57

very nice you are very talented.

Thanks a lot tahera...
It means a lot...😊😊

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