Together We Are Timeless[IF-NC_ENTRY] For Round 5 , page 11 - Page 11

Originally posted by: RainFire125

Absolutely marvelous narration my dear friend and am I proud to know you!!! The true definition of love is to understand your beloved, support him in his decisions, show him the path when needed, be his silent strength and above all letting him.go which is the hardest part. And when you start feeling him in every breath that becomes devotion and eternal. That's what I felt when I read your last part. Beautifully expressed and the words are so apt. GOD BLESS GIRL.

Originally posted by: riya_ss9

Mads absolutely amazing. No words to describe your talent dear. Just loved it . Please keep up your excellent work . Bless you my child 😃

Originally posted by: sagarika01

--War and peace are His two eyes now, one for extinguishing the enmity and the other for propagating unity. He wants to save the kings and the knights from that sin inflicting conflict. I have seen a God with flowing peace from His divine eyes." -- Never read such a divine description of Krishna with such exquisite words. This epilogue is wonderfully written . I am waiting to read how you will end this novel, and you did not disappoint me. It was good.

--She walked a few steps, but His soft touch came to her mind and she smiled. She took some more steps and the recollection of His embrace stopped her. Krishna, your hug is the only treasure I have in this world today. You carried the best part of me with you. Without you, I'm not me anymore,' she talked to herself. ---

Such picturesque narrations give a unique feel while reading those lines. I admire you for your writing style and your knowledge of mythology. 👏

I cried with your Radha and felt happy for her happiness. You are a good writer Di.

Thank you dear Madi for your generous words. But any idea when the results will be declared? I think it's long overdue!😕

Thanks Madhu for these lovely words for all of us. Actually, we have to thank you for gifting us such an enchanting and admirable romantic story with a philosophical tinge in between. 👏

When are they going to declare the results? Waiting for a long time.😊

OMG... Radhi, I needed time to recover from this ecstatic rapturous joy to write a few words for your detailed critical appraisal. 🤗 These words are worth to frame and put in front of me to encourage my writing skill whenever I want to express my thoughts. Such a treatise from a distinctive Radha lover to a devotee of Radha!!

While reading your words, I felt like, I won the world with this content, through this novelette. 🤗Thank you Radhi for the love through these beatific words and appreciation. 🤗

Originally posted by: vibraj

Thank you dear Madi for your generous words. But any idea when the results will be declared? I think it's long overdue!😕

Congratulations Madhuri,i.e, Viswasruti for this achievement.🤗

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MYTHOLOGICAL FICTION

runner up

with an average score of 7.7

Together, We Are Timeless [IF-NC_Entry]
by Viswasruti

I am grateful to my dear friend Vibraj who was there throughout my literary pursuit to encourage me, to guide me and to push me towards completion with her relentless support and friendly love.

Nature is sacred to my Radha. It’s powerful. Healing. Magical for her and for me too!! It’s where I reconnect with myself, with my thought process. For me, my Radha is the embodiment of the entire feminine love, in those ancient times and even now!

Thankful to all my readers who supported me in this entire journey. The path was difficult, but the passenger was too eager to move forward, at times a bit confused, sometimes all of a sudden, I used to reach the sky to squeeze the clouds to quench my thirst of writing about a maiden who was a pathbreaker, far ahead of her time!

A big thank you to all the friends and members who supported me in this thread.🤗🤗

Congratulations to you my dear friend, Madi ❤️🤗