The Fateful Evening...Arjun Draupadi OS Thread.3 - Page 31

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Posted: 7 years ago
I m outta words di... I dunno what should i say...hatts off...
Draupadi's pain omg... How described it that just cast a spell... Brilliant...
We all quickly connected ourselves with the torment whuch she must have had felt after getting the news f her Arjun's marriage... Each line was a hear break... Ufff i dunno wat to say

And the second part just stole my heart...
Arjun's loving gesture was soothing...

Well done

Outta words i m right now
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Posted: 7 years ago
Please update the next part soon, eagerly awaiting for the next part!
Thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Panchali got up and sat placing the pillow on her lap. She doesn't want to get under his spell that may overpower her and blow her off her feet. The chilled weather is making her shiver but Arjun did not look like getting effected by the cold at all.

Panchali asked him the same." Are you not bothered by this chilled winds? How could you ? "

He nodded his head with an enchanting smile.


Arjun lied down on the carpet and stared into the sky that has white clouds of sarat season.The moon light is showering on the surroundings ...Arjun enjoyed the ambience so much.


How nice it is to lie down under the roof of the sky... Why should we build royal palaces at all I can't understand.. Khandav van lost its natural beauty...

Panchali gazed at him with wonder. Her nature loving husband truly amazes her with his way of thinking. She asked him sharply." Then why did you let Indraprasth happen? You should have not asked your friend Maya to construct the city..


Arjun turned sideways and replied." When we were given this barren land Duryothan thought we will live in this wild forest,without shelter and protection. He knew Takshaka is living in Khandav van. Grand father told me that it is a challenge to my ability to establish the empire of my Eldest. You know I always love to meet challenges half way and win.


Panchali got mesmarised by his voice and the tone..that made the silent night give space to the third Pandav to break the silence.


How could I keep my newly wedded wife live in the open.. It is a question of my presteige.Arjun seriously stated.


Panchali smirked and retorted." I know how much concern you have for your newly wedded wife.seriously making her live in golden palaces .. That is your duty towards her..


Arjun got up and sat opposite to her straight.He avoided her remark and exclaimed." Surely your Devine origin helped you in being so extraordinary... I mean your beauty... How could the mole look so luring.. it is teasing me that I still stay so far away from you...being your husband.


Draupadi felt embarrassed ..she is confused. Which mole he is referring to? She has one on her lower lip and another on her heart..She looked down to find her Pallu lying on the carpet...when she got up it must have fallen down..She hurriedly took that and covered herself properly...


Arjun took her hand in his and said softly..." I promised you I won't exercise my right over you until you forgive and forget my offence. My flirting is restricted only to my verbal banter. Not more than that.


Panchali got up and walked to the corner of the boat.." Why is Govind and Satya not coming still.. She said trying to get herself out of the effect ...of his words and his charm.


Arjun approached her and commented.." You became so heartless and cold. Are you the same Krishnaa who loved to travel with me to Gurukul? I still feel your loving glance...


Panchali looked into the waters of Yamuna and replied in a shivering tone." She was gone.. Now you can not see her anywhere.The one who stood before you is not the innocent Krishnaa who waited for her Arjun with immense love... Her dream became true when you got into the chariot. How naive she was to feel happy just by your presence...


Arjun stood listening to her ...silently.


Panchali continued." The journey of life in your absence made her bitter,isolated at heart and detached. She lived her life but she did not live in true sense.


Arjun sighed deeply and took her in his arms. Panchali is shivering with cold...She is also shivering with the thoughts of her past twelve years...that she buried so deep in her heart.


Arjun slowly took her as close as he can without leaving space between them.. He kissed on her eyes and said. " Go on.. I am listening.. But I won't let your janam din end in sorrow and pain. I won't let my father in law down.. This should be your happy birth day...the happiest ever...


Panchali remained still feeling his warmth and love...anticipating the moment...that may break her freezed heart...and fulfill her love...



To be continued.


Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful update di...arjun n draupadi's love is endless...they were one soul in two bodies
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Posted: 7 years ago
Woww!!! It was sooo beautiful!! Please update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you Sweetika for always being the inspiration ...you never left the thread ever since you marked your presence ..
Thanks Divu for being so involved with the Chs particularly with Draupadi.. Your heartfelt comments are a treat to read..

Thanks Unmesha for motivating me to write Draupadi birth day track.. .. I really enjoyed writing it...one of the memorable parts of the thread.. Thanks for your genuine love for the story..

Thanks Nitya Yuvani..for always making time to be here .. Your comments really are heartfelt..

Thank you partha...for your immense support and appreciation... Thanks a lot..


Thank you readers for making the story run uninterrupted...




Lakshmi



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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update. It was lovely to read as they are reminiscing the past.
This is simply the best thread, because it has covered so many events, characters and situations. Creating this type of story, not only requires great writing talent but also imagination and dedication.

Hats-off to you for this superb work. 👏

Thanks so much for this, I have enjoyed thoroughly reading it.

Please post the continuation soon.

Thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Luved it cordially...
Arjun knows every piece of thought of his krishnaa...
Krishnaa is trying to ignore him n he knows how to really take her...
Where panchali faced rhe seperation from him... He also was screwed with the thought of sharing her... Both felt the pain which cannot be described...

In the way it was good for both of them when panchali started pouring out her anguish in front him... He undersatands her so was essential their confrontation[in a healthy way ofcourse]

Great work... Keep the spirit up di n waiting for next tremendous piece...
Edited by Divu55 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Please post the update soon! Eagerly waiting...
Hopefully you will be posting more updates during this weekend!

Thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Panchali raised her eyes and looked at him who is looking down,..the locked eyes did go to the depths of each other's hearts..where they found ultimate love and submission. Still the bitterness of separation made Panchali reluctant to accept his truth...

There is nothing I could say ...I am aware of my dharma as your wife.. I will follow that..She said adamantly avoiding his looks..

Arjun bent his head and said...That would be the best I could hear from you.. So any time I could request your services..Panchali observed the naughty glint in his eyes..

She looked at him defiantly and said." But I know my services are not essential..you have your dear wife whom you abducted and brought here...

Arjun understood her taunt and replied instantly...Don't be sure. I may wish to see you follow your dharma ...quite possible...he stressed on the word dharma.

Panchali turned her face away... It is impossible to win him in verbal war..

Arjun took her hand in his and said.." As of now I want to spend quality time with you... Let us get back to our past ..the moments we shared that are still fresh in my memory..your memory..

Panchali expressed surprise...your memory? ...unbelievable..

Arjun looked offended.. He said boldly.. Consider this as your return gift to me.. You will let me relive the moments.. I think then you will realise...

Panchali did not say anything.. She is curious. Will her flirty husband present the moments ..shared?

Arjun again pulled her closer and started.. The moon God could not control his eagerness to reach out to the lovers He pervaded them with moon light making them shine ...

Draupadi waited to hear his magnificent voice break the silence.


Arjun touched her cheek and said... When you placed the garland in my neck you wore red colour attire ... First time your fingers touched my heart...and my heart strings got tuned to your presence in my life... Isn't it our first moment of togetherness?... He asked ardently looking at her.

Draupadi closed her eyes and felt the moment.. Yes..that touch still stayed with her... He remembered and described it perfectly..

Arjun pulled her out from her thoughts.. Queen..this is not fair.. I am here but you are dreaming?


Panchali composed herself and nodded her head...indicating her approval.

Arjun proceeded further.. We are coming back...you identified me... You slipped and I got you in my hands.. That was the begining .. It continued... How many times you fell till now.. fifteen?

Panchali pushed him away and declared.." If you make fun of me.. I won't listen..

Arjun touched his ears and continued.. When we were in Kampilya you got a thorn in your feet. You wore an orange colour lehenga... You did not let me touch your feet.. But I did touch...I still remember your feet tender,small.. May I touch it to feel the same?

Before Panchali could prevent him,Arjun took her foot in his hand,kneeling down before her.. Panchali stood erect... She looked down and there he is... Like she watched him..years back..the shoulders with bow marks,the long curly hair..the sharp nose,Arjun looked up and smiled.

See we recreated the moment..no? He asked looking straight in her eyes. Panchali bent her face not letting him gauze through the inner depths of her soul.. He is right ...in every word.

Arjun smiled and continued.. When we went to Gurukul you wore a simple light blue colour sari and wore less ornaments.. He then took her face in his hands ..." And I praised your nose ring...You remember it?


Panchali bit her lip.. Now it is clear for her.. He remembered every moment exactly.


Arjun touched her nose ring and praised.. Krishnaa.. I never thought this will look so nice ..

She knew he said the same lines that day..


Arjun turned her back and inhaled the jasmines... " Why do you place jasmines ..in your hair? As if the blue lotus fragrance is not enough..to make me swoon..


Draupadi closed her eyes and relived the moment.. She felt the same thrill..hearing the same words.. with the same feel.How many nights in his absence she spent feeling him say the words in her ear.


Arjun then made her sit and kneeled down before her.. He placed his head on her lap..and muttered." In Hastinapur when I got up from my sleep I found you in place of Mata you are arranging my hair.. First time.. And your hair spread on your back untied... Arjun closed his eyes feeling the moment.


Panchali touched his curls ..yes.. She did it first time..She always loved his hair..


Arjun looked up and smiled. He is enjoying the togetherness..He clasped her waist posessively and said. Krishnaa.. I loved the moment.. The touch of your tender fingers is still there in my curls...


Panchali got up and walked towards the corner of the boat from where the lustre of Yamuna is visible.. Suddenly she felt her bitterness gradually..waning away giving way to her suppressed love that may rise up and drown her..


Arjun walked towards her and caressed her earlobe.. May I proceed further to prove my love?.., He whispered... Krishnaa Yaajnaseni blushed like his new bride..


Krishna suddenly had a beautiful smile on his face.. Satya asked suspiciously. What happened? Which admirer is thinking of you?


Krishna laughed and said." Parth..too smart..he is really.. He made Kalyani relive her love.her moments.. Good going Parth... He addressed his friend who is away from him and who is making his wife drool over him.


Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago

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