The Fateful Evening...Arjun Draupadi OS Thread.3

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Devhooti mishra

@Divu55

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Posted: 7 years ago

#291

Luved it really...

Where satya teases arjun for being away from panchali n his counter answer was just awesome...

Poor panchali... She is not wrong at all... I mean she has really faced a lot... But our charishmatic arjun knows how to win over his wife...

N the gift... Wooow... I just luved it... The black beads which he got from kamarup...

Splendid di...precisely...

Waiting for next part..

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ltelidevara

@ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#292

Thank you Every one.

I hope you remember the black Beed chain that was mentioned frequently ... Like after the war,at the time of Parikshit's jhoola ceremony through Arjun we get to see Draupadi who wears only this chain.

In the pre Rajasuya part Draupadi wants to celebrate the day he won her..Then also That chain was mentioned..

This was gifted by him and she never parted with it...

Lakshmi

Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago

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Devhooti mishra

@Divu55

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Posted: 7 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: ltelidevara
Thank you Every one.
I hope you remember the black Beed chain that was mentioned frequently ... Like after the war,at the time of Parikshit's jhoola ceremony through Arjun we get to see Draupadi who wears only this chain.

In the pre Rajasuya part Draupadi wants to celebrate three day he won her..Then also Thai chain was mentioned..

This was gifted by him and she never parted with it...

Lakshmi

How such marvellous gifts could be forgotten di... That haar of black beeds has been mentioned.so many times by u in story... Every time u mentioned about the haar it bore a testimony of their selfless love... N u mentioned it here... Wow...it felt wonderful ... This indeed was a special gift that panchali had ever recieved... I dont have proper words to tell how i am feeling right now...

THNX SO MUCH...DI.

Edited by Divu55 - 7 years ago

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paartha

@paartha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#294

Yes, it was won by Arjun during his campaign.

Your storytelling is so captivating, please continue soon. I'm again reading the fateful evening part1.

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Sweetka.

@Sweetka.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#295

Stunning update di...plz carry on...wow arjun n draupadi flawless love showed in ur update...

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UnmeshaAcharya

@UnmeshaAcharya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#296

Yess di I can very well remember... Now please please please "UPDATE SOON"...

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ltelidevara

@ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#297

Panchali did not say anything. What does he expect? Her submission in true sense? If so she still is not completely able to behold him as her own..her beloved.

The boat needed to turn backwards and Arjun hurriedly went upstairs.Panchali looked at his disappearing form and collapsed into the asan shattered.

She leaned back on the head support that has a cushion and closed her eyes.

It would have been wonderful if the time wheel also is rotated back wards along with the boat wheel.

Then Arjun would have remained only Krishnaa's

There won't be any Ulupi to seduce him... How she hate Ulupi only she knew. Ulupi managed to break the steely resolve of Krishnaa's Arjun. ... Is she more beautiful than princess of Panchal?

Why did Arjun oblige her wishes. Panchali's Arjun untouched by any woman before let himself the cynosure of Ulupi's eyes. How rewarding that moment must be for Ulupi ...for Arjun also?

He readily took Arya in his arms. She became his wife.Devine grace..that made Arya stand leagues ahead of Panchali who still can not feel him,touch him on her own.How satisfying their union must be.she can not fathom...her Arjun with Arya...

It is said that Arjun himself proposed for Chitra.. The Manipur princess who have the good fortune of staying with him for two,years continuously How fulfilling her life must have been..she could have seen the sunrise of Manipur hills enjoying the warmth of his embrace.. She could have made the moonlit nights heat up with the fire of her passion...his also?

Subhadra...the beautiful sister of Krishna,the queen of his mansion..Surely Govind must have arranged many boat rides like this for his dearest sister and his even dearer Parth in the vast ocean of Dwaraka or he should have made the beautiful Raivataka hill resorts...the heaven of their private moments..

Subhadra looks so besotted with him and she holds his hand,lies on his shoulder..without inhibition..it is like claiming ...see here is my beloved,my Bua's son..exclusively mine...and she knew Arjun loves her no less... She could sense.

In all this where would she fit in Arjun's life? Who is she?

The first wife won and shared by all the five?

The helplessly in love wife waiting in the wings for his look,his touch and his acceptance?

What return gift he wants..from her who still could not be called a wife in true sense.

The single tear that stayed at the corner of her lotus eye felt the touch of his warm lips..

Panchali opened her eyes wide..Arjun bent over her and lifted her above to ascend the steps. Panchali clasped his neck and stammered.." It is too cold there. Let me stay downstairs..

Arjun did not listen. He dropped her on the thick carpet where she found woollen shawls that were arranged to cover it up. Arjun arranged the pillow under her head.

He looked straight into her eyes and said." Now relaxingly think and decide your return gift. In the meanwhile I will try to recite poetry on your ravishing beauty... I hope you enjoy..my sincere effort..he winked making her blush..

Arjun touched her cheeks with his forefinger and started.

The blush that appeared just now made its red mark..here..how beautiful the expression is...I can't describe... Panchali raised her lotus eyes feigning anger .. Arjun sighed deeply and continued..

The eye lotuses now are red in the corner.. Is that anger or the mark of passion! I will be delighted if my second guess is true...l

Panchali closed her eyes and bit her lip to avoid looking at his hazel eyes showering unmistaken love..desire..

Arjun touched her lower lip with his fore finger...and stammered.." The red colour is present here also.. The lip bitten by the white pearl like teeth..Krishnaa...I can't even search for words...

Surely the red colour dominated and enhanced the beauty,...

Panchali covered his eyes with her tender palms...and Arjun murmured seeing through them.." Your delicate Palms...red in the middle...red coloured nails...beautiful ...

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UnmeshaAcharya

@UnmeshaAcharya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#298

Wow...first part was emotional... And heart touching di... Just superb!!!and the next part where Arjun described her beautuly was soo beautiful ...awaiting for the next part!