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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Chanchal_tvd

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Posted: 3 years ago

After all, she had tortured him for a week. If she only knew of the visions he had had of her. Lying underneath him, beguiling, her hair fanned out, in a strappy black blouse and a pale beige gossamer thin saree that left little to imagination, the clink of those bangles and the tinkle of her anklets, him unwrapping the flimsy beige saree, his head bent, tasting her, as she writhed, every vision ending in her sweetly begging him.…....


Ooooooohoooooooo she's doing it...she's doing it to himm...doing him ..... Oh my my my! Boy is getting his Pants bheeging every single night thinking about her wohooooo.


My my what an image mr. Rathore is getting for his employee 🤪 very professional of you mr. Rathore.


Let me live here for some mins. Coming back again ☺️ Imma reciting these lines like mantras

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Posted: 3 years ago

Pleaseeee 🤣 He said he have a very smooool circle of peeps that actually hold any effect on him


And here's she! torturing you with all those visions , her payal disturbing you with those mere chan chan chan 🤣 Boi why are you so gochu!?


Kisko ullu banane mei ho?


And lord! First he says all those things...then he intentionally stepped into her space , taking her appearance, measuring each and every lil things, how long she held back her breathe, and what not!


Chaal palti baaz. 🤣


The way he is literally drinking every lil details about her.....yes i said drinking coz that's what he's been doing over the past weeks 🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago

Good thing she said sorry.


Tho i was like girl it's okay he was also being mean but then again that's how her character is here. Naive, pure, kind, jovious, sweet, pure


Good that even all these hard circumstances couldn't change her sweet soul. ❤️ I honestly love this girl. Aru kaise nahi pyaar karega isse....karna hi parega! He just have to fall for this sweet bundle . Aru kyu koyi bhi sane insaan pyaar karle isse.


And M jis tarha se tune shabdon mei is pregnancy, whole surrogacy ko present kiya hei. Imlu's feelings and all. Kuch log acting karke bhi itni khubsoorti se present nahi kar pata. Jitni khubsurti se tune likhke present kardi. I'm sure meri tarha baki readers bhi imlie mei apne ap ko jileti hei parhte wakt🤗


I'm glad my girl didn't send this msg. Girl be a shakt ladki! He will come whoozing around soon...usko ana hi parega tum ho hi itni pyaari.

No texting no calling....he will do it...let him take the initial step first idiot said that stupid close circle thing. ( i have no prob girls taking the first step so please don't hate me)


Tho yeh bhi sahi hei. The relation they have, this deal and all. Asaan nahi hei yeh sab accept kar lena...they are trying hard.. both of them can feel the pull , both of them ( at least aru) enjoying this pull but yet trying hard to stay rigid.


No worries destiny mummy will help you get outta this rigid zone soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved this M. It's just getting better with each passing chapters. I'm running outta words now...words kam par rahe hei tareef ke liye 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

You have the ability to put a story together with your words and to make the screen light up in front of your eyes to understand the characters and the flow of the story is so fantastic that you really want to carry on reading to see the outcome of what is going to happen next.

The story is so different from the show that you want to experience of how everything will come together.

His experience at a young age have made him so critical of any woman who wants to come into his life. He was 🔥 so much that he will compare any person with is ex wife, once fool twice shy to believe again.

He is very scared to open is heart to Imlie.

Imlie is only doing this to save her family and for the family to not find out what she is doing with her life because payments need to be paid without losing any of her family members life.

Please take a bow for the brilliant stories you are writing, may you find pleasure in your writing because only gift people can enjoy this, it is amazing to bring a smile on someone face through your writing.

Please continue


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Posted: 3 years ago

Please forgive me for late reply I remember reading chapter 1 and continue reading all the way to chapter 8.

A Heir is wanted to carry the name by great grandmother so the question is when are you getting married, I would say once bitten twice shy married was never on the list of ASR to do so the alternative was Surrogacy.

Three candidates choose one was the last straw for ASR so each person was interviewed, background check so a full history was in front of him before he met any of them.

Imlie was the third person to be interviewed, truth had to be told by Imlie and she was desperate for the money because she didn’t want a repeat of the money load sharks turning up her door step again.

Her family was in trouble, she need money quickly but she couldn’t tell her family the step she was taking. Everything had to be hush hush 🤐

Imlie was innocent of life so when her parents said to get married she did only to find out he was gay so narrow escape.

I have just responded to the last chapters.

The flow was not working for me when I started this.

Sorry

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: screen22

You have the ability to put a story together with your words and to make the screen light up in front of your eyes to understand the characters and the flow of the story is so fantastic that you really want to carry on reading to see the outcome of what is going to happen next.

The story is so different from the show that you want to experience of how everything will come together.

His experience at a young age have made him so critical of any woman who wants to come into his life. He was 🔥 so much that he will compare any person with is ex wife, once fool twice shy to believe again.

He is very scared to open is heart to Imlie.

Imlie is only doing this to save her family and for the family to not find out what she is doing with her life because payments need to be paid without losing any of her family members life.

Please take a bow for the brilliant stories you are writing, may you find pleasure in your writing because only gift people can enjoy this, it is amazing to bring a smile on someone face through your writing.

Please continue



Wow what a wonderful compliment . I hope I keep doing justice to this story. Thanks, love!! Your words mean so much to me 🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 12 updated. Link below. Feel free to comment here or in the FF section. --- Love, M


https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/26910

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Posted: 3 years ago

What's with the apology,M? These "long ass chaps" are making me go la la and you say sorry! Nah...No...dont do it!


"Would her eyes have shined as she did,with the magic one felt at having created a life?

M...you're a winner!❤️🤗

The transformation part! From being tender to professional! Its so so like him! I really enjoy how you pick the minute details from the show! 👏


Ohh the dean! Damn.... Ary baby being calculative hah!


"She had to admit she loved that brow action".Imlie,love that makes the two of us!☺️


Monty! Sucha villian name!🤣🤣


Yaar M yeh hospital warden aise hi hote hai kya...KHADOOS MAKKHICHOOS types?


These three girls! Ahh all Love! Giving "tera yaar hoon mai" vibes!

M...request..if you are planning to shift her to Rathore mansion! Great! I am all in! But could you please continue writing their meet ups often! They are so positive...encouraging...hilarious! Damn aise hi friends chaiye life mein!❤️❤️❤️


"She smiled as she thought of him"


Aryan Singh Rathore! Staaap! Stop being so perfect!


Dr. Verma! Sucha precious one! She is beautifully crafted! Bravo!!✨✨❤️



M ..ab aate hai aaj ke favourite part pe!

Your medical knowledge!TOPIS OFF! STUPENDOUS!!

You dont know but you are such a powerful motivation to me!Only if I could give you a tight wala hug😵!!! Love you!❤️


Imlie girl! Your destiny's here! Dont fear!!😉😉


OMG! This was one hell of a kidnapping M!😕

Infinite times better than the show duh!

Artistic work!😌


Dammnn DESTINY!!! We need our Man back! Common! Ab wait karna padega!

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Signing off! *Smiling brightly*

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