Arylie FF: Second Chances - IMPORTANT NOTE - Page 17

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 9 posted to FF section. Feel free to comment here or there. 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ohhkayy!😲

First Natalie! Dang you!

She reminds me of this song:

"Bewafa Tera Masoom Chehra

Bhool Jaane Ke Kaabil Nahi Hai

Khoobsurat Bahot Hai Tu Lekin

Dil Lagane Ke Kaabil Nahi Hai"🤢


Aryan! God damn..I have one shayari for him too!

"Mohabbat ho gyi hai fir se shayad

Mai fir se chaand ko paane chala hu

Bohot roya tha jo ek baar karke

Wahi galti mai dohrane chala hu!"

The only thing here is this time it wont be a galti!😉


Imlie!! Bichaari yaar! I feel so bad for her! That invitation..tbh I thot it was from the rathore ladies but then...oohhhh! Shit!😒

Chan chan chan...thisss!! This always remind me of Chham chham scene!😃😃

Also...watch it!! Oh my! That scene was sooo delicately written my gawd! Just wao❤️

Hah! Thank god pull is from both the ends.🌡️✨🥳


I'll say this again..the best best part of this fanfiction is the tension which you draw between them...so intense..so engaging..so perfect! And Ofc the slight humor that you add in every part just completes your story!

Last but not the least!

Destiny lines were top notchh!!! 5 star!! I loved it magar muchh😂!!!👏👏

Please update next part sooooon!

Okay so bye bye for now!🤗

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M mere paas aur shabd nahi hei teri tareef ke liye


imlu's nervousness, that happiness of having another one, then that pain...reality....that she have to give this child away.... she can't feel this attachment but still even though she's very much aware of this harsh truth still...she's not being able to control her feelings...


Enjoy imlu. Your momma destiny is with you. And not just your momma destiny. That kadoosh insaan's destiny momma is also in your team


Enjoy this blissful moment girl.


And all these lil things that brings smile on her face 🤧 hayeee pyari ladki...i hope khadoos admi ek din yeh sab pura kare 🤭



And and..yeh kya aruuu..kanta laga? Imlu ko thik se dekh nahi paya? 🤪 lol...wait kar raha tha aur bahana bhi kya hei. Phone number and app lol. And what did he say...only for emergency lol yeh tum yaad rakhna beta 🤭🤧 humri ladki saakt ladki hei uske bina kisi waje se phone number ko dekhe gi bhi nahi ( bas maahi ko mat bolna phone number hei...i don't trust that girl )

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Hmm...she will be nicer next time ...promise. He will get a chance to give it back. The calm before the storm so to say. 🥰🥰

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Ughh! Dammit M where do I even start!

There is a heavy traffic of many emotions in my mind right now!

Okay!

First and the most beautiful part of this update was ofcourse when you described her feeling towards the baby! It was so heartfelt! So so sublime!❤️

The connection between the mother and the child is not just placental....not just physical....But a strong, unbreakable spiritual one! SOUL CONNECTION as we call it! All that plethora of emotions..mood swings...ahh..its going to be beautiful isnt it!!

How is one even able to give all of that in just a filck of second...how is one supposed to not develop that bond...!! Gawd M bass....!🥺

Itna accha mat likho ki bolne ke liye bas beautiful hi reh jaye! Bcoz shabd toh ab gye tel lene...this cant be described into words!


Aru!! Damn...iski entry kya dhaasuu thi!! I could totally imagine the first episode...his entry with bg music!...🥳

Haha!! He is already in love reee! I mean how gentleman of him to say those words! This man is alllll hearts!!💝❤️💝❤️


Damn Imlie...this girls really really needs to staple her mouth! First swimmers you nutcase...now this!


But I am really looking forward to read her apology!! Yessss!!!


Oohhh....destinyyy!! The last line makes me wonder what exactly will be that "halka sa pushhh" by destiny...! Excitement to the power infinity!


Whatta perfect writing!

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Chalo now that I have vomitted all my thoughts and feels....I better go study otherwise destiny's gonna haunt me down wont you destiny?😉❤️

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