Arylie TS: Chapter 2 Graduation, 16+ updated Pg 15 - Page 17

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SundariP


look at that man...

i repeat

look at that man !


i rest my case.


Haan haan bhai. I just admired him at morning darshan and mangal aarti on the Arylies DT when Bhau posted spoiler #2.


Tumhara case bahot bhari hai. Isiliye to 20 stories written, look at what that man makes me do. Jerk!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


Haan haan bhai. I just admired him at morning darshan and mangal aarti on the Arylies DT when Bhau posted spoiler #2.


Tumhara case bahot bhari hai. Isiliye to 20 stories written, look at what that man makes me do. Jerk!


1 story likhi na...

imagination me itni busy rehti hu ki typing ka no time

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Posted: 3 years ago

Both the versions are sooo good............but after reading non-sanskari version 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋 can't wait for the next.......you are so good at describing each and every words, emotions keep writing girl,❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ nd don't ever forget to tag me u know what I mean ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Woah, maybe it's because I'm tired but honestly I felt emotional more than tharak reading even the non sanskari version. Their conversation about "safe words" was, surprisingly, my favourite bit. Made me feel all warm and fuzzy.

This man is soo precious 🥺

Why the nice dudes gotta be fictional 😪

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Posted: 3 years ago

The non sanskari version was so tastefully written and still managed to convey all that it should.


Your Aryan is so perfect that the one on screen might not live up to your version.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: nuts

The non sanskari version was so tastefully written and still managed to convey all that it should.


Your Aryan is so perfect that the one on screen might not live up to your version.


I think there are very few men alive that can live up to this version. But isn't he delicious!? 😉

Edited by mltr16 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: captain_waffle

Woah, maybe it's because I'm tired but honestly I felt emotional more than tharak reading even the non sanskari version. Their conversation about "safe words" was, surprisingly, my favourite bit. Made me feel all warm and fuzzy.

This man is soo precious 🥺

Why the nice dudes gotta be fictional 😪


It's not surprising at all because that's the relationship development b/w them.

Most precious thing in their story.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SundariP


It's not surprising at all because that's the relationship development b/w them.

Most precious thing in their story.


I thought the captain meant, she was not expecting to like that part over the other ahem ahem parts. Right, Waffle? 😜

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


I thought the captain meant, she was not expecting to like that part over the other ahem ahem parts. Right, Waffle? 😜


I know 🤣🤣


But i expected that readers will like that more...

It's because the way you weaved it with trust. True beauty ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

I read it on main thread i read it in pm and i loved the both

I had read this part like 4 times girl you are great and your way of expressing their love and specially aryan and how imlie is confident enough of her spouse is great ❣️

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