Arylie TS: Chapter 2 Graduation, 16+ updated Pg 15 - Page 15

Originally posted by: SundariP

he has no carbs rule....

so imlie gets to eat in is place 😆

Who said anything about eating. 😀🤣

Awww @reginalsecret. You totally made my day. Comments like these make all the late nights spent revising, editing, rewriting - completely worth it.

Seeing as I am still a novice at writing stories, a full fledged chapter dedicated to - 😳 I'll just say it an erotic lovemaking scene 😳 ack!! 😳😳 - felt daunting. I knew what I had in mind (because of course, I know how I visualize Aryan and Imlie). But so often in the past, pages and pages describing body parts, proportions, foreplay, the act, etc etc...you get the drift, stopped being - I can't believe I am saying this either- titillating and veered towards, oh whatever, let's move on.

I knew for sure, that was not going to be me. So, discovering what was going to be my style has consumed a good bit of my quiet time. Then of course wondering how the readers would respond - too tame? Too much? Too little?

I think while Aryan is a natural Dom, he wants to make sure he weaves trust into every aspect of their relationship. He has slowly built that over the last few stories but especially more so in the carnal sense, since Imlie moved to the US. The culmination had to be a significant step towards cementing trust in this aspect of their relationship too.

Words can get repetitive in a long story like this one or any novel, the challenge is holding the reader's interest and grabbing their minds enough to force their imagination.

So, a review like this, makes it all worth it. I had told @Sarcy in the beginning of my writing journey, if I find even 1 or 2 people who truly enjoy reading what I write, would be willing to talk to me about the writing, I would continue as long as the ideas form and the words manifest.

I am still learning to be secure in my new identity as a writer, I guess, of sorts. Even if it is shortlived. So my apologies if I ever sound self deprecating in my comments. My lens is a lot different than yours. So thank you.

Thanks for taking the time to write me a wonderful review ❤️🤗

I also want to take a moment to thank @SheldonCooperr, MeetPremeer, Chanchal, Potterhead, egle, Juwii29, happiness1, nmurali and others who have commented.

Originally posted by: GenMed

Who said anything about eating. 😀🤣

yep... who said about eating? i din't....

Originally posted by: GenMed

@M, Very classy love making scene! even the non sanskari version. I would say it was semi sansksari to quote S.

On a side note, I was right about Aryan liking more 'sophisticated' food items! Was I not.

Cupcakes and truffle! 😀

Semisanskari is about how far I can or am willing to take it @GenMed! 🤣🤣ab isse zyaada na hona humse ! Saale mere toh paseene nikle ye likhte likhte! 😅 Isse aur nonsanskari likhna mere Dil aur dimaag pe bhaari ho sakata hai.

Originally posted by: mltr16

Semisanskari is about how far I can or am willing to take it @GenMed! 🤣🤣ab isse zyaada na hona humse ! Saale mere toh paseene nikle ye likhte likhte! 😅 Isse aur nonsanskari likhna mere Dil aur dimaag pe bhaari ho sakata hai.

I'm working taking her to the dark side.... @genmed

Originally posted by: mltr16

Semisanskari is about how far I can or am willing to take it @GenMed! 🤣🤣ab isse zyaada na hona humse ! Saale mere toh paseene nikle ye likhte likhte! 😅 Isse aur nonsanskari likhna mere Dil aur dimaag pe bhaari ho sakata hai.

Sanskari....semisanskari all versions were classy. So I'm sure if at all you choose to do a nonsanskari one that will be too. Cos I mean ypu cant deviate too much from your core essence really.

One last and very important shout out to my friend and editor Pooja for reading this story at least 50 times to make sure that my vision was successful.

P.S: I feel like I am giving an award winning speech! 🤣🤣🤣🤣 I am not under any illusions. But I went on and on about late nights editing etc, she was very much by my side, virtually, working equally hard so I CANNOT in all honesty take all credit for what you have read.

Originally posted by: SundariP

I'm working taking her to the dark side.... @genmed

Is it your vrat day?? Let me know... 😂

Originally posted by: GenMed

Is it your vrat day?? Let me know... 😂

i think it's obvious 🤣

Originally posted by: mltr16

One last and very important shout out to my friend and editor Pooja for reading this story at least 50 times to make sure that my vision was successful.

P.S: I feel like I am giving an award winning speech! 🤣🤣🤣🤣 I am not under any illusions. But I went on and on about late nights editing etc, she was very much by my side, virtually, working equally hard so I CANNOT in all honesty take all credit for what you have read.

reading this thing 50 times wasn't a work really 🤣